Bekas tou vo hai...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on March 02, 2011, 06:32:39 PM
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Ho raha hai ho raha hai terri,
geybat ka asar ho raha hai,

dekho na yaro likhte likhte,
sang merre har lafz ro raha hai,

jag rahe hai uski yado k nishan,
jo chain se apne ghar mein so raha hai,

ujad raha hai yahan armano ka gulistan,
vo wahan nayi hasrato k beej bo raha hai,

uska kya ja raha hai jo apno k saaye mein hai,
bekas tou vo hai jo phir apni zindgi kho raha hai.........

Bekas-helpless...
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«Reply #1 on: March 02, 2011, 06:48:43 PM »
wah kya dhunn par sajaya hua geet hai ji.
bas ek saans me parha aur gungunata gaya.
aapki iss rachna ka ehsaas e andaaz kuch juda hai.
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aapka bayaan e dard ki koi saani nhi ji.
god bless u
be happy
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #2 on: March 02, 2011, 06:52:49 PM »
Quote from: nirala on March 02, 2011, 06:48:43 PM
wah kya dhunn par sajaya hua geet hai ji.
bas ek saans me parha aur gungunata gaya.
aapki iss rachna ka ehsaas e andaaz kuch juda hai.
""
aapka bayaan e dard ki koi saani nhi ji.
god bless u
be happy


Bahut bahut shukriya nirala ji...god bless u too n take care....
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nirala
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«Reply #3 on: March 02, 2011, 07:00:24 PM »
bekus aur bebas same words hain shayd
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ParwaaZ
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«Reply #4 on: March 02, 2011, 07:09:56 PM »
BBL jee Aadaab ... !

As usaul aapke ahsaas O khayaal khoob rahe..
Daad kabul kijiye

Likhate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile         
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #5 on: March 02, 2011, 08:18:33 PM »
Bahut Khub Geet JI
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Yaash
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«Reply #6 on: March 03, 2011, 02:51:13 AM »
Wah Wah
Bohat Achhey Ehsas o Kayal Rahe Ji
Bohat Bohat Khoob
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manjum
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«Reply #7 on: March 03, 2011, 04:59:17 AM »
bahut khub geet chhu lia tumne......

khub... Applause Applause Applause
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Tamnna
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«Reply #8 on: March 03, 2011, 05:24:35 AM »
very good BBlli........
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #9 on: March 04, 2011, 01:13:17 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya rishi ji,manju mann ji,yaash ji,shihab ji,tamanna ji n parwaaz ji...
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«Reply #10 on: March 04, 2011, 01:14:05 PM »
Quote from: nirala on March 02, 2011, 07:00:24 PM
bekus aur bebas same words hain shayd

Ji dono ka meaning same hi hai per lafz alag alag hai..
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«Reply #11 on: March 08, 2011, 04:03:56 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Geetji..

Humesha Di Tarah Lajawaab!!!!!!!!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: March 08, 2011, 04:08:46 PM »
Shukriya khwaish ji..
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