Betaabee (Nazm)

by aaina on May 05, 2013, 06:19:53 AM
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ehle bazm ki nazr ek adna si koshish apni qeemti aara se nawaaziyega


Betaabee


kabhi kabhi aksar
tumhari yaad ka pehloo
bada bechain karta hai
sukooN mujhko nahi aata
tumhari yaad aati hai
zara ranjoor karti hai
zara khamosh rehta huN
zara sa shor sunta huN
samjh mai kuch nahi aata
bada bechain rehta huN
hawa bhi kuch nahi kehti
saba bhi chup hi rehti hai
nida aksar gale ke
aakhree nukkad talak aa kar
bade dheere se kehti hai
mujhay tum yaad aate ho
mujhay tum yaad aate ho!!!.........(aslam noor, aslam)
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«Reply #1 on: May 05, 2013, 09:11:08 AM »
waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: May 05, 2013, 01:35:50 PM »
Quote from: aaina on May 05, 2013, 06:19:53 AM
ehle bazm ki nazr ek adna si koshish apni qeemti aara se nawaaziyega


Betaabee


kabhi kabhi aksar
tumhari yaad ka pehloo
bada bechain karta hai
sukooN mujhko nahi aata
tumhari yaad aati hai
zara ranjoor karti hai
zara khamosh rehta huN
zara sa shor sunta huN
samjh mai kuch nahi aata
bada bechain rehta huN
hawa bhi kuch nahi kehti
saba bhi chup hi rehti hai
nida aksar gale ke
aakhree nukkad talak aa kar
bade dheere se kehti hai
mujhay tum yaad aate ho
mujhay tum yaad aate ho!!!.........(aslam noor, aslam)











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«Reply #3 on: May 05, 2013, 04:24:22 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: May 05, 2013, 04:48:24 PM »
waah janaab waah
baht khoob nazm hai
daad kubul karen
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«Reply #5 on: May 07, 2013, 05:32:21 AM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on May 05, 2013, 09:11:08 AM
waah waah bahut khoob

Janab Sksaini sahab nazm ki pasndgi ke liyN aapka tahe dil se mamnooN huuN bhut shukriyH


aslam
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«Reply #6 on: May 08, 2013, 05:22:05 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: May 08, 2013, 08:03:37 PM »
bohat khoob,.......
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«Reply #8 on: May 09, 2013, 10:25:15 PM »
Quote from: qalb on May 05, 2013, 01:35:50 PM

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Qalb sahab zarranawaazi


aslam
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«Reply #9 on: May 09, 2013, 10:26:54 PM »
Quote from: Shireen Hakani on May 05, 2013, 04:24:22 PM
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Shireen Hakani saheb hoslaafzaii ke liyN tahe dil se shukrguzaar huN bhut nawaazish


aslam
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«Reply #10 on: May 09, 2013, 10:28:25 PM »
Quote from: sarfira on May 05, 2013, 04:48:24 PM
waah janaab waah
baht khoob nazm hai
daad kubul karen

Sarfira sahab nazm ki pasndgi ke liyN aapka tahe dil se shukrguzaar huN yuN hi sath daite rahiye bhut shukriyH

aslam
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«Reply #11 on: May 10, 2013, 04:38:53 AM »
Sidhe Saadhe Saaf Lafzon Mein
Khoobsurat Shayari Kaise Likhi
Jaati Hai Ye Koi Aapse Sikhe...

Bahut Bahut Khub Aslam Bhai
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Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

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«Reply #12 on: July 08, 2013, 06:51:37 PM »
Quote from: suman59 on May 08, 2013, 05:22:05 PM
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Thnxxx so much Suman
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«Reply #13 on: July 08, 2013, 06:53:15 PM »
Quote from: laaiba on May 08, 2013, 08:03:37 PM
bohat khoob,.......


Bhut nawaazish


aslam
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«Reply #14 on: July 08, 2013, 06:55:16 PM »
Quote from: Shihab on May 10, 2013, 04:38:53 AM
Sidhe Saadhe Saaf Lafzon Mein
Khoobsurat Shayari Kaise Likhi
Jaati Hai Ye Koi Aapse Sikhe...

Bahut Bahut Khub Aslam Bhai
Maza Aa Gaya Parhkar Khub Clapping Smiley

Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

Shihab


Shihab sahab nazm ki pazeeraii ke liyN aapka tahe dil se mamnoon huN bhut bhut shukriyH


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