Betiyan

by NeelamJ on April 20, 2013, 10:13:50 PM
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In Betiyon Ko Aab Hume Bakhsna Hoga,
Lagta Hai Inhe Janm Dene Se Pahle Eek Baar fir Sochna Hoga......
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«Reply #1 on: April 20, 2013, 10:27:34 PM »
In Betiyon Ko Aab Hume Bakhsna Hoga,
Lagta Hai Inhe Janm Dene Se Pahle Eek Baar fir Sochna Hoga......

Main Maanta Hoon Aapne Tanziya Sher Arz Kiya Hai par yaa To Aap usse Mukammal sher banaate,Kuch Aur Bhi kehte,kyunki sirf itna pdhne mein woh sher ajeeb sa laga...

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«Reply #2 on: April 20, 2013, 10:43:33 PM »
aapne sahi kaha lekin in ghatnao se maan dukhi hota hai isliye jyada bayan kar pana mushkil lag raha tha. comment ke liye Dhanywad
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