~~"BETIYON APNA RAKHNA KHAYAAL"~~

by k.shael on September 26, 2008, 06:03:08 AM
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HAR GALI ASURKSHIT HAR CHORAHA KHATRE
ME…

AAJ BETIYAAN KHOUF SE REHTI HAI GHAR
APNE ME, JANE KAB KAISE KON APNA LOTT
LE YAHI HOTA HAI DARR MAA KE SAPNE ME,

HAR GALI ASURKSHIT HAR CHORAHA…

GAIRO SE KYA RAKHE PARDA JISM KA KUCH
APNO NE HI SHARMSAAR JAB KAR DIYA KABHI
BAHAR TO KABHI KAMRE ME…

HAR GALI ASURKSHIT HAR CHORAHA…

SAJNA SAWARNA JAISE GUNAAH HUA, BADAL
LIYA RANG MEHNDI NE KOUN JANE ISKA RANG
UTARA KISI NE YA FEEKI PAD GAYI PAANI ME
RAKHNE SE…

HAR GALI ASURKSHIT HAR CHORAHA…

HAR INSAAN KA JEHAN BADLA BADAL GAYE
JAMIR, HAR KISI KE DIL ME SIRF JALTI HAI
PAA LENE KI AAG, JAJBAAT JHOOTHE HO GAYE
YA JHOOTHE HUE INSAAN…

HAR GALI ASURKSHIT HAR CHORAHA…

BETIYO BADHE DHYAN SE REHNA AAB NA DEGA
KOI BHI APNA SAATH, SAB KUCH BADLA PAR NA
BADLE HALAT…

HAR GALI ASURKSHIT HAR CHORAHA KHATRE ME…

BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #1 on: September 26, 2008, 06:12:40 AM »
Good Topic.. Shally  Thumbs UP
Very Beautifully written... Excellent Work.. Applause
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«Reply #2 on: September 26, 2008, 06:13:37 AM »
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SHUKRIYA MAHIYA JI...
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #3 on: September 26, 2008, 06:14:44 AM »
dhamakedaar soch aur kadvi sachchai ..dono ko mila diya jaaye to..
ye poem bani hogi
wah wah daad kabool karen shally
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«Reply #4 on: September 26, 2008, 06:18:56 AM »
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SHUKRIYA SANJEEV BROTHER...
AAPNE AUR MAHIYA NE ISS KALAM
KO PADA AUR SARAHA YE MERE LIYE
BAHUT BHADI BAAT HAI...
SHUKRIYA...
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #5 on: September 26, 2008, 06:22:56 AM »
bohat sach likha, aur bohat khoobsoorti ke sath lafz piroye hain....
Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: September 26, 2008, 06:26:03 AM »
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SHUKRIYA TANHA JI...
AACHA LAGA KI AAP HAMARE
THREAD PAR AAYE..
SHUKRIYA...
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #7 on: September 26, 2008, 06:54:43 AM »
HAR PAQ RISHTA HUA BADNAAMI KA
HISSEDAAR,BADAL GAYE HAI AAJ KUCH
APNE KHAAS RISHTO KE NAAM,

BAAP BAAP NA RAHE,BHAI BHI BAN BAITHE
HAI GUNHEGAAR,BETIYAAN BECHARI SEHAM GAYI
DEKH KAR HOTA APNA TIRASSKAAR,

DARR ANDHERO SE KYA RAKHE,UJALE ME BHI
KAR DIYA KAYI BAAR APNO NE JISSM KA WAPAAR
GALI BAZAAR BAN GAYE HAI JAISE SHAMSHAAN,

CHATT PAR NA JANA BETIYON TUM CHODNA NA
KHULE BAAL,HASS KAR NA KARNA BAATEIN KAHI
BANN NA JAO KISI KI GANDI AANKHON KA SHIKAAR...

BY. K.SHAEL
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Talat
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«Reply #8 on: September 26, 2008, 06:59:43 AM »
Very beautiful....really a nice work Shael Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: September 26, 2008, 07:12:05 AM »
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SHUKRIYA...
CELMIRA JI,
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #10 on: September 26, 2008, 11:17:02 AM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shally fantastic lines dear superb creation done by you... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #11 on: September 26, 2008, 11:35:09 AM »
SHUKRIYA HONEY DIDI,
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #12 on: September 26, 2008, 02:17:51 PM »
Nice One Shael,.
And A Good Topic,.
Lage Raho./
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«Reply #13 on: September 26, 2008, 02:38:20 PM »
"ghairon se kya rahkkaen padrda..." ye lines... UFF!! Love it Shally!
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«Reply #14 on: September 26, 2008, 03:00:15 PM »
JO TUM KEHNA CHAH RAHI HO WOH THODA MUKHTASIR KARKE BHI KEH SAKTI HO.

POETRY KE LIYE JAZBAAT KE SATH ILM BHI HONA LAZIM HAI.

TRY AGAIN

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