~~"BETIYON APNA RAKHNA KHAYAAL"~~ -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

k.shael

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«Reply #15 on: September 27, 2008, 05:15:07 AM »

SHUKRIYA JANASHEEN KI
AAP ISS THREAD PAR AAYE AUR
KALAM KO SARAHA...
BY. K.SHAEL


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k.shael

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Re: ~~"BETIYON APNA RAKHNA KHAYAAL"~~

«Reply #16 on: September 27, 2008, 05:17:48 AM »

SHUKRIYA ANJAAN DHADKAN,
BY. K.SHAEL


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Muhammed

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Re: ~~"BETIYON APNA RAKHNA KHAYAAL"~~

«Reply #17 on: October 04, 2008, 11:08:07 AM »

k.shael Jee....

aap K Kalaam Mein Bahut hi Sachhai Hai Lekin Kehne ka Tareeka kuch Galat Hai,,
Kuch aap ki Soch bhi Galat Dikhi Mujhe,,
Aapk ye dono kalaam Filhaal kuch bhi bola na jayega,,
Fir Bhi chaliye thik hi hoga ki aapne likha hai To,,
Shayad Main Kassir Rahaa hoon,,Samaz Ne Mein.


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diya786

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Re: ~~"BETIYON APNA RAKHNA KHAYAAL"~~

«Reply #18 on: October 06, 2008, 07:08:39 AM »

BAHUT ACCHA LIHA HAI SHALLY DEAR BAHUT JAZBAATI LINES HAI
HAR KISI KO SOCHNE PAR MAJBOOR KAR DIYA AAPNE
BAHUT SACCHAI HAI ISMEIN
ITS REALLY GREAT WORK BY YOU... icon_salut


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: ~~"BETIYON APNA RAKHNA KHAYAAL"~~

«Reply #19 on: October 06, 2008, 07:25:58 AM »

shally ji very nice n very truth too


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k.shael

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Re: ~~"BETIYON APNA RAKHNA KHAYAAL"~~

«Reply #20 on: October 06, 2008, 09:39:56 AM »

SHUKRIYA DIYA DEAR
& KAUSHIK...
BY. K.SHAEL


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: ~~"BETIYON APNA RAKHNA KHAYAAL"~~

«Reply #21 on: October 06, 2008, 09:48:00 AM »

TUMHARA EK ALAG ANDAZ EK ALAG PEHLU DEKHA IS KALAM ME VERY GOOD

Quote from: k.shael on September 26, 2008, 06:03:08 AM

HAR GALI ASURKSHIT HAR CHORAHA KHATRE
ME…

AAJ BETIYAAN KHOUF SE REHTI HAI GHAR
APNE ME, JANE KAB KAISE KON APNA LOTT
LE YAHI HOTA HAI DARR MAA KE SAPNE ME,

HAR GALI ASURKSHIT HAR CHORAHA…

GAIRO SE KYA RAKHE PARDA JISM KA KUCH
APNO NE HI SHARMSAAR JAB KAR DIYA KABHI
BAHAR TO KABHI KAMRE ME…

HAR GALI ASURKSHIT HAR CHORAHA…

SAJNA SAWARNA JAISE GUNAAH HUA, BADAL
LIYA RANG MEHNDI NE KOUN JANE ISKA RANG
UTARA KISI NE YA FEEKI PAD GAYI PAANI ME
RAKHNE SE…

HAR GALI ASURKSHIT HAR CHORAHA…

HAR INSAAN KA JEHAN BADLA BADAL GAYE
JAMIR, HAR KISI KE DIL ME SIRF JALTI HAI
PAA LENE KI AAG, JAJBAAT JHOOTHE HO GAYE
YA JHOOTHE HUE INSAAN…

HAR GALI ASURKSHIT HAR CHORAHA…

BETIYO BADHE DHYAN SE REHNA AAB NA DEGA
KOI BHI APNA SAATH, SAB KUCH BADLA PAR NA
BADLE HALAT…

HAR GALI ASURKSHIT HAR CHORAHA KHATRE ME…

BY. K.SHAEL


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k.shael

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Re: ~~"BETIYON APNA RAKHNA KHAYAAL"~~

«Reply #22 on: October 06, 2008, 09:58:20 AM »

SHUKRIYA SHUKRIYA...
KI AAPKO YE KALAM PASAND AAYA,
IT'S SO PRECIOUS COMMENT FOR ME,
THANX A LOTTTTTTTTTT
BY. K.SHAEL


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