bewafaai

by salil2002 on July 08, 2009, 12:28:09 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 10, 2009, 05:22:37 AM »
Quote from: Dastbardaar on July 09, 2009, 07:36:21 AM
Kaise na rote dekh_kar uska janaza hum

Zalim ne jeete jee hain hasaya bohat....
Quote from: cara on July 09, 2009, 08:21:34 AM
KYA BAAT HAI SAAHIL JI....

TUM BEWAFAA THI,TUMNE BEWAFAAI KI,
HUMNE CHAHA TUMKO,AB BHOOLANA HAI MUSHKIL HUMKO.

dastbardaar saheb aur cara jji aap dono ne bahut hi khoobsurat reply kiya .chand lines aap dono k liye


Qatl kar do mera toh muskuraun main
kii zindgi ne ashqon k siwa koi daulat nahin di
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«Reply #16 on: July 11, 2009, 01:16:05 PM »
It's okay Mr. Saahil, but only 2 more initiating lines could make it a beautiful ghazal.
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salil2002
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«Reply #17 on: July 11, 2009, 02:40:36 PM »
ok bro i 'll try to do so
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MHussain
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«Reply #18 on: July 11, 2009, 02:55:25 PM »
Do you know ghazal rules?
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salil2002
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«Reply #19 on: July 11, 2009, 03:03:38 PM »
nahin  bhai bas aise hi likhne kii aadat hai toh likhta rehta hoon
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MHussain
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«Reply #20 on: July 11, 2009, 03:10:23 PM »
Okay, would like to learn?
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #21 on: July 11, 2009, 04:28:36 PM »
Wah Saahil Ji wah Subhanallah
SARVESH RASTOGI
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marhoom bahayaat
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«Reply #22 on: July 13, 2009, 07:59:20 AM »
bahut khoob sahil ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #23 on: July 13, 2009, 08:07:42 AM »
Quote from: MHussain on July 11, 2009, 03:10:23 PM
Okay, would like to learn?

YESS SIRR.. PLZ CLARIFY DIFFERENCE BETWEEN GHAZAL AND NAZM ..I PERSONLY INTEND TO KNOW.
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«Reply #24 on: July 17, 2009, 12:13:07 PM »
sarvesh bhai marhoom bhai shukriya aur MHussain bhai neki aur pooch pooch bade bhai .........jaroor seekhna chahoonga main ghazal kii baareekiyon ko
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«Reply #25 on: July 17, 2009, 12:15:40 PM »
BOhat Achche Salil Bhai,.
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«Reply #26 on: July 17, 2009, 12:37:19 PM »
shukriya azeem bhai
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«Reply #27 on: July 21, 2009, 09:58:35 PM »
Okay friends give me some time to write down the information.
Very soon.
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