Be-wafa,be-raham kitna,ye jamana nikla.

by Sudhir Ashq on February 16, 2013, 09:01:47 AM
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Jisko bhi humne kahaa apna,wo begana nikla.
Be-wafa,be-raham kitna,ye jamana nikla.

Peeth pe war huye hain jab kabhi bhi mere,
Hamlawar apna koi dost,purana nikla.

Kasme khaate the jo sath jeene_marne ki,
Unko dekhe bina,ab aeik jamana nikla.

Wo na lauta hai,na laut ke aayega kabhi,
Waqt jo mere bachpan ka suhana nikla.

Tum na mil paye,hai Ashq mukaddar apna,
Be-wafai ka teri,Sirf bahana nikla.

                      Sudhir Ashq
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«Reply #1 on: February 16, 2013, 09:25:13 AM »
very nice
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«Reply #2 on: February 16, 2013, 10:01:41 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: February 16, 2013, 10:12:57 AM »
Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on February 16, 2013, 09:01:47 AM
Jisko bhi humne kahaa apna,wo begana nikla.
Be-wafa,be-raham kitna,ye jamana nikla.

Peeth pe war huye hain jab kabhi bhi mere,
Hamlawar apna koi dost,purana nikla.

Kasme khaate the jo sath jeene_marne ki,
Unko dekhe bina,ab aeik jamana nikla.

Wo na lauta hai,na laut ke aayega kabhi,
Waqt jo mere bachpan ka suhana nikla.

Tum na mil paye,hai Ashq mukaddar apna,
Be-wafai ka teri,Sirf bahana nikla.

                      Sudhir Ashq




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«Reply #4 on: February 16, 2013, 10:34:04 AM »
Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on February 16, 2013, 09:01:47 AM
Jisko bhi humne kahaa apna,wo begana nikla.
Be-wafa,be-raham kitna,ye jamana nikla.

Peeth pe war huye hain jab kabhi bhi mere,
Hamlawar apna koi dost,purana nikla.

Kasme khaate the jo sath jeene_marne ki,
Unko dekhe bina,ab aeik jamana nikla.

Wo na lauta hai,na laut ke aayega kabhi,
Waqt jo mere bachpan ka suhana nikla.

Tum na mil paye,hai Ashq mukaddar apna,
Be-wafai ka teri,Sirf bahana nikla.

                      Sudhir Ashq


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«Reply #5 on: February 16, 2013, 10:53:16 AM »
truly nice ..bahut khoob likha aapne
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«Reply #6 on: February 16, 2013, 10:54:46 AM »
Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on February 16, 2013, 09:01:47 AM
Jisko bhi humne kahaa apna,wo begana nikla.
Be-wafa,be-raham kitna,ye jamana nikla.

Peeth pe war huye hain jab kabhi bhi mere,
Hamlawar apna koi dost,purana nikla.

Kasme khaate the jo sath jeene_marne ki,
Unko dekhe bina,ab aeik jamana nikla.

Wo na lauta hai,na laut ke aayega kabhi,
Waqt jo mere bachpan ka suhana nikla.

Tum na mil paye,hai Ashq mukaddar apna,
Be-wafai ka teri,Sirf bahana nikla.

                      Sudhir Ashq



aap bahut bahut acha likhte hai. bahut c daad
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«Reply #7 on: February 16, 2013, 10:57:16 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: February 16, 2013, 11:10:57 AM »
bahut bahut khoob
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«Reply #9 on: February 16, 2013, 07:41:32 PM »
 Applause Applause :clap:bhut khub ji
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«Reply #10 on: February 17, 2013, 06:56:40 AM »
waah waah laajawaab
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«Reply #11 on: February 18, 2013, 04:36:45 AM »
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«Reply #12 on: February 19, 2013, 12:00:20 PM »
Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on February 16, 2013, 09:01:47 AM
Jisko bhi humne kahaa apna,wo begana nikla.
Be-wafa,be-raham kitna,ye jamana nikla.

Peeth pe war huye hain jab kabhi bhi mere,
Hamlawar apna koi dost,purana nikla.

Kasme khaate the jo sath jeene_marne ki,
Unko dekhe bina,ab aeik jamana nikla.

Wo na lauta hai,na laut ke aayega kabhi,
Waqt jo mere bachpan ka suhana nikla.

Tum na mil paye,hai Ashq mukaddar apna,
Be-wafai ka teri,Sirf bahana nikla.

                      Sudhir Ashq




bahut khoob.......!
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