Bewafa--gujarish to thi~~~ Saahil

by salil2002 on May 19, 2009, 08:07:57 AM
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doston mere ek dost jo ek ladki se bahut pyaar karta tha...woh oosse shaadi na kar paaya ...kyunki oos ladki ne kaahin aur shaadi kar li...yeh chand lines mein uske liye likh raha hoon...pasand aaye toh daad dijiyega

mujhe kuch maloom nahin woh kyun mujhe chhod gayi
uski aankhon kii nami kucch kehti to thi

na jaane kyun woh har vaade har rasm ko tod gayi
uske inkaar mein bhi ek gujarish to thi

mujhe pyaar ka sabak padakar, khud kii bewafaai
par unki bewafaai mein wafa kii jhalak to thi

na ban paaye mere, toh kissii aur ko kya haasil honge
meri is badduan mein, kucch kami to thi

surkh joda unka maathe se bikharti latein
unki khoobsurati par yeh duniya thagi si thi

chen aaye tujhe dil todne waale
jab maanga tohfa, toh paas yeh dua hi thi

doston k saath beith oos raat bahut pi
mere dil k dard mein, teri nikaah kii khushi bhi thi
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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: May 19, 2009, 10:19:41 AM »
Bohot Khoob Salil  Applause Applause Applause

...and a nice reply Kaash Ji
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faseih
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«Reply #2 on: May 19, 2009, 11:45:35 AM »
BAhut khoooooob......keep writing more
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #3 on: May 19, 2009, 12:05:56 PM »
Uske inkaar me bhi ek guzarish to thi.....Shabash Sahil din ba din tumhare kam me aur bhi nikhar aa raha hain....
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«Reply #4 on: May 19, 2009, 04:16:00 PM »
Wah Salil Bhai.. Kya Khoooooooooob likha Hai.. Bahut dard Bhara Likha hai Dost.. Applause waqai aapke Is Qalaam Ko Padh Kar Kuch Guzre Lamhe Mujhe Bhi yaad aa gaye.. Bahut KHooooooooob... Applause


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«Reply #5 on: May 19, 2009, 10:34:58 PM »
Mashallah Bohat Achche Sali Bhai, Great Job,.
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«Reply #6 on: May 20, 2009, 12:42:12 AM »
waaah salil jee..
bahut sajeev likha hai aapne... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Roja
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«Reply #7 on: May 20, 2009, 03:31:24 AM »
Bahut khoob Salil ji and @Kaash ji  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: May 20, 2009, 03:51:22 AM »
Bahoot khoob salil ji !! Dil ki feeling ko jahir kar diya. Khushi hui ki aap apne dost ko samajhte hai,allah kare aap jaisa dost sabhi ko de.
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«Reply #9 on: May 20, 2009, 02:53:03 PM »
shukriya vicky bhai, sajid bhai, talat di,kaash, azeem, pandit, sager, roja, fasieh


mohabbat daf.n kar aaya hoon main bahut gehre zami mein
dhoka na khaiyega, mein bahut dilfareb hoon
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«Reply #10 on: July 01, 2009, 07:38:37 AM »
Wah Salil Bhai Bahut Khooooob.. Applause Aapke Yeh Alfaaz Padh kar Kuch line Yaad aa gain Bhai..!!


Nigaahon Pe Nigaaon Ke Phere Hote Hain,
In Nigaahon ke Ghaav Bhade Gahare Hote Hain.....

Na Jane Kyun Koste Hain Log Badsooraton Ko,
Bardaab Karne wale to Haseen Chahre Hote Hain...!!!{NM}


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«Reply #11 on: July 01, 2009, 07:45:43 AM »
Wonderful creation,Saahil ji, Applause Applause :clap:beautiful lines by
Kaash ji and Mann ji.bahut khoob likha aap sabhi ne. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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salil2002
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«Reply #12 on: July 02, 2009, 12:22:08 PM »
shukriya mann bhai and madhu dear............
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Alam Qazi
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«Reply #13 on: July 02, 2009, 01:41:14 PM »

Mere Dil ke Dard mein, Teri "NIKAAH" ki khushi bhi thee...


kya baat hai... zabarzast....
Dil ke tukde kar, rezaa rezaa kar diya iss line ne...

 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: July 03, 2009, 08:47:23 AM »
shukriya alam bhai
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