bewaqt

by bharatkumar on July 18, 2009, 02:56:34 PM
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bharatkumar
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kuch yaade hai dhundli si, aajkal zaada sataate hai
bewafa sanam ki tarah,bewaqt jagaate hai
pataa nahi ki wo hamaare hi paas kyun aate hain
aakhir wo hamaare hi nahi, tumhare bhi to yaade hai?
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #1 on: July 18, 2009, 03:06:05 PM »
Waah Bharat ji.. Bahoot khoob..Yuhin likhte rahiyega.... like to see more from you

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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #2 on: July 18, 2009, 04:45:49 PM »
Wah wah
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Roja
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«Reply #3 on: July 18, 2009, 05:30:31 PM »
kuch yaade hai dhundli si, aajkal zaada sataate hai
bewafa sanam ki tarah,bewaqt jagaate hai
pataa nahi ki wo hamaare hi paas kyun aate hain
aakhir wo hamaare hi nahi, tumhare bhi to yaade hai?

Nice lines... Thanks for sharing  Usual Smile
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khushichopra
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«Reply #4 on: July 18, 2009, 05:57:21 PM »
very good creation  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

dil mein jo yaadein aati hai
dil ko bahut satati hai
kabhi kabhi in yaadoon se hi to
hothoon par muskurahat aa jaya karti hai

 
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #5 on: July 18, 2009, 08:04:38 PM »
GUD 1 B.K Applause
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #6 on: July 18, 2009, 09:20:06 PM »
kuch yaade hai dhundli si, aajkal zaada sataate hai
bewafa sanam ki tarah,bewaqt jagaate hai
pataa nahi ki wo hamaare hi paas kyun aate hain
aakhir wo hamaare hi nahi, tumhare bhi to yaade hai?

Nice one Bharat Ji
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #7 on: July 19, 2009, 12:09:59 AM »
Very nice and beautiful creation Bharat ji. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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