Bezaar:Shayri-E-Dard

bezaar

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Bezaaar hue zindagi se, Sochne lage a'ge hai kya !
Tamam umra sehna hai isay, sochne lage a'ge hai kya !!

Kuvvat ab naa rahi woh jo jee sake her lamha !
zarra zarra jo bikhar chuka hai, sochne lage a'ge hai kya !!

hashra hua hai joh, jane kaun si hai wahaha !
tootne se pehle hi fana hue, sochne lage a'ge hai kya !!

Saari aahe'n bhi khoyen, sochne lage a'ge hai kay !
Tamam umra sehna hai isay, sochne lage a'ge hai kya !!

~~~ Mr. Bezaar !!!!


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Just_Hate_Love

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Bezaar

«Reply #1 on: March 30, 2005, 01:43:07 PM »

Fantastic one Bezaar ......
Its a really good start ...
Keep it up and hope to see more from you ...


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Meena

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Bezaar

«Reply #2 on: March 30, 2005, 03:52:28 PM »

bohot khoobbbbb bezaar ji!! and welcome to yoindia!!!!

:D


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HumTum

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Re: Bezaar

«Reply #3 on: March 30, 2005, 03:59:20 PM »

Quote from: "bezaar"

nice...

Aankhon mein chand ashk hamari jo aaye hain
Duniya ne kaise - kaise fasane banaye hain

Sahraon mein bhi phool khilate rahe hain hum
Tum ne to gulsitan mein bhi kaante ugaaye hain

Kooche se tere aaye to ahsas yeh hua
Hum apni zindgi to wahin chor aaye hain

HumTum


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Meena

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Bezaar

«Reply #4 on: March 30, 2005, 04:01:44 PM »

"Sahraon mein bhi phool khilate rahe hain hum
Tum ne to gulsitan mein bhi kaante ugaaye hain "

beautiful lines hum tum ji!!!

:D [/i]


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HumTum

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Bezaar

«Reply #5 on: March 30, 2005, 04:07:17 PM »

Shukriya ji Shukriya....


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clicksahil

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good works

«Reply #6 on: March 31, 2005, 06:06:38 AM »

nice work..

keep going guys


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bezaar

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Bezaar

«Reply #7 on: April 02, 2005, 08:55:05 PM »

HumTum.. yours is also good !

But

Bezaar hum yuhin hee naa hain,
kenho ko hum abhi zinda hain,

Jheel, Dariya, Sagar sab samete humne ,
Yeh ashq humare ankhom mein joh hain !

rakh bhi aati hai kaam aati kisike,
Hum toh ab apne hee kaam ke naa rahen hain !


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ali

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Bezaar

«Reply #8 on: April 02, 2005, 09:05:52 PM »

bahut khub


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bezaar

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Bezaar

«Reply #9 on: April 24, 2005, 06:23:15 PM »

Shukriya all !

Thankyou for hausla afzai ke liye.

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apnaa_koi

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Bezaar

«Reply #10 on: April 24, 2005, 06:50:08 PM »

Bezaar... Hum Tum...

Bohat achay lagay dono kay sher...

Apnaa_koi


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bezaar

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Bezaar

«Reply #11 on: May 12, 2005, 12:53:39 PM »

Shukriya apnaa_koi !

and

humtum .. you are also good.


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