Bezubaan - Ek Khayaal aisa bhi !

by Ricky on July 02, 2007, 08:18:13 AM
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Bezubaan kabhi kabhi Jaanwaron ke liye bhi bola jata hai, kyunki woh bezubaan hote hain, isliye woh apna dard, gham nahi bata pate aur kyunki woh jaanwar hote hai isliye dard to woh yuhin chand lamho mein bhula jaate hain aur bezubaan hone ka lutf utha jaate hain !

Here is poem on very same idea of being bezubaan !
    Kash hum bezubaan hote,
        Naa fir gham yun bayaan hote !!

        Kash naa hoti zindagi ki samajh,
        Naa fir yun afsaane jawaan hote !!

        Kash naa khwahish hoti kuch paane ki,
        Naa fir kuch khone k gham yahan hote !!

        Gar tod jaata koi ashiyaaN humara,
        Fir bhi khoobsurat saare samaan hote !!

        Lut Jaati gar Roshni-e-zindagi,
        Fir bhi andhere naa yahan hote !!

        Toot-te hue bhi be-shubhaah hote !
        Kash hum bezubaan hote !!
        Kash hum bezubaan hote !!
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    «Reply #1 on: July 02, 2007, 12:16:53 PM »
    Nice Explanation and Very good thought...
    Beautiful words and True Feeling...
    That's All I could say about this one.... Usual Smile
    Good Work Ricky.... =D> =D>


    It reminded me about one of my post... but different theme.. something on "Bezubaan" title only... Usual Smile
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    «Reply #2 on: July 03, 2007, 05:56:25 PM »
    Thankyou for such a nice word of appreciation.
    Usual Smile
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    «Reply #3 on: July 03, 2007, 06:07:13 PM »
    superbbb Ricky...aaj mera mood kuch aisa hi tha, aur aapne itna kamaal likha...padh kar acha laga

    zindagi se shikayatein to chalti rehti hain
    magar dil pe zor nahi chalta
    bahut samjhaya humne
    magar yeh rah-e-ishq chod ..kissi oor nahi chalta

    abb to rah-e-zindagi mein andhera aur viraane hain
    na to chiraag roshan honge
    na hi bahaar ayegi..

    jo guzar gayi, jaise taise guzar gayi
    baaki bhi kissi tarah se guzar jayegi
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    «Reply #4 on: July 03, 2007, 06:31:18 PM »
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    zindagi se shikayatein to chalti rehti hain
    magar dil pe zor nahi chalta
    bahut samjhaya humne
    magar yeh rah-e-ishq chod ..kissi oor nahi chalta

    Good lines..

    And thankyou Nikki you too for such a nice appreciation..
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    «Reply #5 on: July 04, 2007, 04:39:59 AM »
    Bahut khoob ricky & thankyou so much
    ankhir aapne mera kaha maan hi liya maine request kiyi thi aap se ki main aap ki koi achchi si poem read karu wo aaj kar liyi thankyou ricky once again asha hai ki jadli koi new poem read karu aapki
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    «Reply #6 on: July 04, 2007, 06:18:16 AM »
    Thankyou Sameer for your friendly words to me.

    Also I am glad that you found my lines as per your expectations.
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    «Reply #7 on: July 04, 2007, 09:15:21 AM »
    Realy nice lines ricky..
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    «Reply #8 on: July 04, 2007, 11:05:35 AM »
    & I must say..
    Really nice appreciations for me !

    Thankyou!
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    «Reply #9 on: July 05, 2007, 07:13:36 AM »
    very nice Ricky n nikki sis.
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    «Reply #10 on: July 06, 2007, 02:25:38 AM »
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    Bezubaan kabhi kabhi Jaanwaron ke liye bhi bola jata hai, kyunki woh bezubaan hote hain, isliye woh apna dard, gham nahi bata pate aur kyunki woh jaanwar hote hai isliye dard to woh yuhin chand lamho mein bhula jaate hain aur bezubaan hone ka lutf utha jaate hain !

    Here is poem on very same idea of being bezubaan !
      Kash hum bezubaan hote,
          Naa fir gham yun bayaan hote !!

          Kash naa hoti zindagi ki samajh,
          Naa fir yun afsaane jawaan hote !!

          Kash naa khwahish hoti kuch paane ki,
          Naa fir kuch khone k gham yahan hote !!

          Gar tod jaata koi ashiyaaN humara,
          Fir bhi khoobsurat saare samaan hote !!

          Lut Jaati gar Roshni-e-zindagi,
          Fir bhi andhere naa yahan hote !!

          Toot-te hue bhi be-shubhaah hote !
          Kash hum bezubaan hote !!
          Kash hum bezubaan hote !!
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      Bahut khoob kaha aapne Ricky ji... Bezuban...
      Dil ko chu gaya aapka ye kalam. Daad hazir hai kabul farmayiyega
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      «Reply #11 on: July 08, 2007, 10:25:42 PM »
      Nidhi... Thankyou!

      Roja..
      those were pleasant words from you, thankyou you too !
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      «Reply #12 on: July 09, 2007, 06:01:03 PM »
      bahut ache rickyji..a novel thought...good one
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      «Reply #13 on: July 09, 2007, 09:49:47 PM »
      Ishpreet.. and that was a noble appreciation !
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      «Reply #14 on: July 18, 2007, 08:40:23 AM »
      a very simple but wonderful poem!!! khayal bohot hiache hai aur poem me bohot ache se apne khayal bayan kiya hai apne!! well done!!

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