Bezubaan se ho gaye hai hum :( (Shikha) -Panna 3:Shayri-E-Dard

Shikha12

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«Reply #30 on: July 03, 2007, 02:00:28 PM »

Ricky.... You managed to dig this out from old posts... :D
Thanks a lot... Usual Smile

Also Thanks Kulbhushan, Tanha_kamal, Nidhi, Nikki and Pooja di...

Lovely additions Nidhi and Nikki... I am sorry for replying so late... sad5

How have these beautiful verses being missed from my eyes...

Another Try from my side:

Band hoti hui aankhon ko koi khwaab dikha diya,
Bahut ufan kar uttha toofan, aur ghar bahaa diya…
Hum soch ke baithe thhe ki ab chup hi raheinge,
Dil ki veeraaniyon ney hi ek sawaal uthha diya…

Dete hai duhaai ab hum, koi khanjar naa chalaye,
Zakhm kuch khule hue hai, koi namak naa lagaaye…
Ab naa kijiye phir us pyaar ki baatein humsey,
Humne ab har zazbe ko hi apne dil se mitaa diya….


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Bezubaan se ho gaye hai hum :(

«Reply #31 on: July 03, 2007, 04:18:10 PM »

Well.. !

I understood so I unburried it.

this is one is also.. nice.. rather beautifully drafted !
8/10


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Bezubaan se ho gaye hai hum :(

«Reply #32 on: July 04, 2007, 04:48:12 AM »

Shikha kaya likha aapne kamal hai
Mera to par kar bada bura haal hai
Kayal ho gaya tumhari shayari ka main tum itna achcha likhte ho aur kabhi kabhi Huh?

roj likha karo bahut achcha likha aapne sayad hi itni achchi poem koi aur lagi ho aaj tak
God bless u

Sameer


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paani

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Bezubaan se ho gaye hai hum :(

«Reply #33 on: July 04, 2007, 09:17:12 AM »

Bhaut hi accha laga pad kar shika.. bahut khub..


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_Vicky_

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Bezubaan se ho gaye hai hum :(

«Reply #34 on: July 06, 2007, 09:39:45 AM »

Quote from: "Shikha12"

Band hoti hui aankhon ko koi khwaab dikha diya,
Bahut ufan kar uttha toofan, aur ghar bahaa diya…
Hum soch ke baithe thhe ki ab chup hi raheinge,
Dil ki veeraaniyon ney hi ek sawaal uthha diya…

Dete hai duhaai ab hum, koi khanjar naa chalaye,
Zakhm kuch khule hue hai, koi namak naa lagaaye…
Ab naa kijiye phir us pyaar ki baatein humsey,
Humne ab har zazbe ko hi apne dil se mitaa diya….

Wah Wah Kya Baat Hai SHIKHA ji.. Bahut Hi Khoooob.. Har Lafz
kamaal Ka Likha Hai aapne... Lajawab Hai.. !! Usual Smile

Ek Koshish Meri........ !!

Badi Mushkil se Jode The, Uski Yaad ke Tukde,
Dil Ke Tootne ki Aawaz ne, In ko Bikhra Diya......
Kabhi Joda Kabhi Toda, Kabhi Tod ke Phir Joda,
Kuch Aise Us Zaalim ne, Dil ko Khilona Bana Diya......

Na Koi Shikwa Tha Usse, Na Hi Koi Shikayat Thi,
Bas Mujhe Thukra Na Dena, Itni si Guzaarish Thi.....
Meri Aankhon me Phir Bhi Usne, Dard Jaga Diya,
Aisa Mere Yaar ne Mujhko, Mohabbat ka Tohafa Diya.......!!!!![/b]


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aryasudhanshu

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Bezubaan se ho gaye hai hum :(

«Reply #35 on: July 06, 2007, 12:10:58 PM »

Too good yaar...!!


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Pooja

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Bezubaan se ho gaye hai hum :(

«Reply #36 on: July 06, 2007, 02:29:42 PM »

wah wah wah bahoot hi acha likha hai shikha ji.... good reply Vicky ji...

Ek Koshish meri bhi...

Barso ki dabi khamoshi ek ahh ban gai
Na jaane waqat ke sath kab kaher ban gai

Behati ankhia na jaane kaya kaya baha gai
Deemak ban kar, khokhla ashiana bana gai

Chal raha hai sab waise hi, bas ek zindagi mar gai
Her ek khawab ko, waqat ke sath bejuban kar gai.


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