"" bhadakta shola hun "" ' nirala '

by nirala on January 08, 2011, 06:15:33 AM
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"aaj mai 2 saal ki khatarnaak kosison ke baad --
ek bahut hi dard bhara Sher likhne me Nakaamyab hua--
agar kuch logon ki daad mil jaye to aage bhi DarD waale sher ki kosis karunga"
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thanx
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ab aate hai Sher par---arz hai
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ek bhadakte shole ko Chinggari kya dikhlaate ho
         Zakhmon par sonewalon ko Mamuli Kharoch se Darate ho
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thanx
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«Reply #1 on: January 08, 2011, 07:09:49 AM »
wah.....wah....ji khub kahi hai...dard ki baat...

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«Reply #2 on: January 08, 2011, 07:51:47 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: January 08, 2011, 07:58:50 AM »
wah bahut zakhmila hai aapka sher Nirala ji.
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bhadakte shole par ab zara paani daalo

zakhmon par sonewalon lo ab ye marhum laga lo
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«Reply #4 on: January 08, 2011, 08:38:09 AM »
Kya khoob Bhadak k Bole ho wah wah wah wa wa wa
Sui kya chubh gayi jakhm kehte ho...ja ja ja ja
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«Reply #5 on: January 08, 2011, 09:04:58 AM »
bahot aachi wali lines he nirala ji........isee aur agey badhaiye ....start bahot abhot khubsurat kiya he......waiting for next para
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«Reply #6 on: January 08, 2011, 09:32:13 AM »
sabko dhanyabaad deta hai nirala
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matrix ji aap kahe ko mujhe iss dardile mausam me bheegne ko utsahit kar rahe hain !
2 saal baad ek dard bhara sher likha wo bhi dekho funny bana daala Kukku sahiba ne..
ab nxt 2 saal baad agn try karunga--hame nahi bhaata lubhata ye dard ward--
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thanx
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«Reply #7 on: January 08, 2011, 09:37:04 AM »
thik he prabhu ......hum 2 saal wait karenge .....
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nirala
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«Reply #8 on: January 08, 2011, 09:38:57 AM »
wah wah bhot achha hai firrrr
---:)Usual Smile
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #9 on: January 11, 2011, 08:59:14 AM »
Nice Kb Ji
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nirala
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«Reply #10 on: March 22, 2011, 05:56:36 PM »
thanx rishi ji.
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