bhare nain

by ragini on January 16, 2005, 01:50:23 PM
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upar dekha, aasmaan mein khubsurat chand, hasin taare
dil ko yaad aaye kuch beete pal hamare,
neeche dekha to dhundli ho gayi thi likhavat,
phir mahsoos hua ki bhar aaye the nain hamare
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Delicate_Doll
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«Reply #1 on: January 16, 2005, 01:57:34 PM »
wah............nice .....n..gr888888.work ragini:D
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #2 on: January 16, 2005, 02:10:37 PM »
wah1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  ragini..................
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Meena
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«Reply #3 on: January 16, 2005, 05:18:32 PM »
Quote from: "ragini"
upar dekha, aasmaan mein khubsurat chand, hasin taare
dil ko yaad aaye kuch beete pal hamare,
neeche dekha to dhundli ho gayi thi likhavat,
phir mahsoos hua ki bhar aaye the nain hamare


beauuuuutilful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

mere ansoon se kitab ki likhawat to mit gayi,
nam tera di lse bhi mitha dete to acha hota!
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yogi
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«Reply #4 on: January 16, 2005, 05:53:44 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "ragini"
upar dekha, aasmaan mein khubsurat chand, hasin taare
dil ko yaad aaye kuch beete pal hamare,
neeche dekha to dhundli ho gayi thi likhavat,
phir mahsoos hua ki bhar aaye the nain hamare


beauuuuutilful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

mere ansoon se kitab ki likhawat to mit gayi,
nam tera di lse bhi mitha dete to acha hota!


hum tumhe dil se mita to dete
par woh bhi na munkin tha
kyo dil humara tha aapke hi paas
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Meena
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«Reply #5 on: January 16, 2005, 06:46:46 PM »
wahhhhhhhhhhhhhh yogi ji!!!!!!!! gud reply!

 :D
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Princess21
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«Reply #6 on: January 17, 2005, 03:07:12 AM »
wah wah wah everyone gr888888888888888888
ey bewafa meree yeh kahi huee baat yaad rakhna...
jahan jaye ga tu mujhe yaad kare ga...
meree har ek baat tujhe sataye gee
tu mujhe kabhi bhool na paye ga tu yeh yaad rakhna...
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Meena
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«Reply #7 on: January 17, 2005, 05:08:21 PM »
wah princess!

 :D
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Princess21
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«Reply #8 on: January 18, 2005, 05:01:51 AM »
thanx meena!!!
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Princess21
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«Reply #9 on: January 18, 2005, 05:09:17 AM »
u r good too meena buhat acha likhtee ho...

hum tujhe bewafa kehna to chahte nahi...
magar kya kahen ise jo tu ne mere saath kya...
mere pyare se iss dil ko sheeshe ki terhan tor dya..
kya karen ke tumhen hum bhool bhee to sakte nahi....
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Meena
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«Reply #10 on: January 19, 2005, 09:19:19 AM »
thanxxx princess! gud one!

bewafa hum tujhe kahenge nahin,
zamane ko teri asliyat batayenge nahin,
zakhm jo diya mere dil ko tumne,
ukos zindagi me hum kabhi bhoolayenge nahin!
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«Reply #11 on: January 19, 2005, 09:34:26 AM »
nice 1 meena...ur replies really hav a lot of depth...
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Meena
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«Reply #12 on: January 19, 2005, 10:10:53 AM »
shukriya ji shukriya!!!!

 :D
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