>>>>> Bheegi Hue Palken<<<<<

by waheed_rose2004 on April 09, 2006, 09:09:31 AM
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Tosha
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«Reply #1 on: April 09, 2006, 09:16:27 AM »
accha likha hai  ... waheed !!
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: April 09, 2006, 09:23:35 AM »
bheegi palkon mai khawab sajaye nahi jaaty
unhi to khud se khawab rulaye nahi jaaty
dard dekar khud ko, tamam umar jalty rahe
ek umind per, sare diye unhi bujhaye nahi jaaty
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Princess21
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«Reply #3 on: April 09, 2006, 07:56:45 PM »
Ohhhhhh WOw.........Honey...BUhat acha likha hai tum ne!!!and pooja sis...ap ne bhi buaht acha likha!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #4 on: April 09, 2006, 11:09:04 PM »
Thanks Dear!!!
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tanhachand
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«Reply #5 on: April 10, 2006, 12:49:13 AM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"


Jo chamak thi meri aankho ki usse laaoun kaise
Laal rang apne aankho se aab chutaaoun kaise
Beh gaye jo rangeen khwaabon  ke kazal
Bheegi palkon pe abb usse  lagaaoun kaise
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Aryaan
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«Reply #6 on: April 10, 2006, 02:29:03 AM »
Good Ones Waheed, Pooja & tanhachand...
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Delicate_Doll
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«Reply #7 on: April 10, 2006, 07:42:47 AM »
Gr work Waheed...N pooja sis...n ..tanhachand
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Rajbir
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«Reply #8 on: April 10, 2006, 07:50:26 AM »
Waheed, Pooja, Tanhachand

Bahut khoob !

Rajbir
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #9 on: April 10, 2006, 05:35:24 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
bheegi palkon mai khawab sajaye nahi jaaty
unhi to khud se khawab rulaye nahi jaaty
dard dekar khud ko, tamam umar jalty rahe
ek umind per, sare diye unhi bujhaye nahi jaaty


Thanxxxxxxxx alot  Tosha......   Pooja sis..........  Neha  moti.........Salma.....Rajbir  Bhai........Aryan........very  nice  reply  Pooja  sis  Tanha  chand.........

Phir main apni  palkon  per  khwaab  sajane ki  kosis kar  raha hoon
kuch  pal  aur  uske  liye  jeene  ki  kosis  kar  raha hoon
ai  mere  aansoo  bata  teri   raza  kya  hai
kyon  main  tujhe  baar baar peene ki  kosis kar  raha  hoon..........
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Sonu
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«Reply #10 on: April 11, 2006, 09:24:46 AM »
Muna , Pooja, Tanhachand bahut khoo.. sabney bahut acha likha hai..

mahfil aaj huyi hai
nazaara bhi dekhte jaao
aankhon se suna kar A-dil
tohfaa zaraa...abb hamaara bhi lete jaao


Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Quote from: "Pooja"
bheegi palkon mai khawab sajaye nahi jaaty
unhi to khud se khawab rulaye nahi jaaty
dard dekar khud ko, tamam umar jalty rahe
ek umind per, sare diye unhi bujhaye nahi jaaty


Thanxxxxxxxx alot  Tosha......   Pooja sis..........  Neha  moti.........Salma.....Rajbir  Bhai........Aryan........very  nice  reply  Pooja  sis  Tanha  chand.........

Phir main apni  palkon  per  khwaab  sajane ki  kosis kar  raha hoon
kuch  pal  aur  uske  liye  jeene  ki  kosis  kar  raha hoon
ai  mere  aansoo  bata  teri   raza  kya  hai
kyon  main  tujhe  baar baar peene ki  kosis kar  raha  hoon..........
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #11 on: April 11, 2006, 05:43:37 PM »
Thanxxxxx   mom............    very  nice  reply  .........  

Fareb khakar  aaj  bhi  hum  usi  mehfil mein  hain
magar  sab log  na jaane kis  kashmakash meih hain
na jaane  kaun  mere  aankhon  ko aaj phir bhigo dega
woh  ek  tohfa  jiske  hum  intizar mein  hain ........

Quote from: "Sonu"
Muna , Pooja, Tanhachand bahut khoo.. sabney bahut acha likha hai..

mahfil aaj huyi hai
nazaara bhi dekhte jaao
aankhon se suna kar A-dil
tohfaa zaraa...abb hamaara bhi lete jaao


Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Quote from: "Pooja"
bheegi palkon mai khawab sajaye nahi jaaty
unhi to khud se khawab rulaye nahi jaaty
dard dekar khud ko, tamam umar jalty rahe
ek umind per, sare diye unhi bujhaye nahi jaaty


Thanxxxxxxxx alot  Tosha......   Pooja sis..........  Neha  moti.........Salma.....Rajbir  Bhai........Aryan........very  nice  reply  Pooja  sis  Tanha  chand.........

Phir main apni  palkon  per  khwaab  sajane ki  kosis kar  raha hoon
kuch  pal  aur  uske  liye  jeene  ki  kosis  kar  raha hoon
ai  mere  aansoo  bata  teri   raza  kya  hai
kyon  main  tujhe  baar baar peene ki  kosis kar  raha  hoon..........
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: April 11, 2006, 05:53:07 PM »
thanks Sonu and Waheed!!

app dono ne bhi acha likha hai
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Sonu
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«Reply #13 on: April 11, 2006, 10:22:28 PM »
u r welcome babo... bauht acha likha hai tumney.. thx muna..

jhootha uuska pyar de gaya zillat
khud hi ki nazron se gira gaya mujhe
aitbaar toh thaa unhe bhi hum par..phir bhi
nibhaa na paaye pyar tanha iss dil se



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Thanxxxxx   mom............    very  nice  reply  .........  

Fareb khakar  aaj  bhi  hum  usi  mehfil mein  hain
magar  sab log  na jaane kis  kashmakash meih hain
na jaane  kaun  mere  aankhon  ko aaj phir bhigo dega
woh  ek  tohfa  jiske  hum  intizar mein  hain ........

Quote from: "Sonu"
Muna , Pooja, Tanhachand bahut khoo.. sabney bahut acha likha hai..

mahfil aaj huyi hai
nazaara bhi dekhte jaao
aankhon se suna kar A-dil
tohfaa zaraa...abb hamaara bhi lete jaao


Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Quote from: "Pooja"
bheegi palkon mai khawab sajaye nahi jaaty
unhi to khud se khawab rulaye nahi jaaty
dard dekar khud ko, tamam umar jalty rahe
ek umind per, sare diye unhi bujhaye nahi jaaty


Thanxxxxxxxx alot  Tosha......   Pooja sis..........  Neha  moti.........Salma.....Rajbir  Bhai........Aryan........very  nice  reply  Pooja  sis  Tanha  chand.........

Phir main apni  palkon  per  khwaab  sajane ki  kosis kar  raha hoon
kuch  pal  aur  uske  liye  jeene  ki  kosis  kar  raha hoon
ai  mere  aansoo  bata  teri   raza  kya  hai
kyon  main  tujhe  baar baar peene ki  kosis kar  raha  hoon..........
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Sonu
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«Reply #14 on: April 11, 2006, 10:23:21 PM »
your welcome Pooja ji..thanks..

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thanks Sonu and Waheed!!

app dono ne bhi acha likha hai
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