>>>>> Bheegi Hue Palken<<<<< -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

Talat

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«Reply #15 on: April 12, 2006, 03:18:45 PM »

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Bohot achcha likha Waheed !!!!

Bheegi hui palkon main khwaab bhi hote hain
Hote nahin poore bas aankhon me rehte hain

Aansuon main bheegte hain wo khwaab
Sang armaano ke wo ta-umr sulagte hain !!


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>>>>> Bheegi Hue Palken<<<<<

«Reply #16 on: April 12, 2006, 05:01:59 PM »

wah wah waheed...gud staring bohot achi lagi poem...

pooja, sonu, talat...apne bih bohot acha likha!!! :D

behendo ashko ko, behene do yadoo ko,
na yaad rakho kisi ke wado ko,
adat si hogayi palke bigone ki tanhai me,
zindagi yuhi kat jayegi gale lagte murado ko!


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«Reply #17 on: April 12, 2006, 06:56:48 PM »

Wow,thats the beauty....awesome waheed,nice ones pooja ji n tanhachand.


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«Reply #18 on: April 12, 2006, 07:51:24 PM »

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Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"

Jo chamak thi meri aankho ki usse laaoun kaise
Laal rang apne aankho se aab chutaaoun kaise
Beh gaye jo rangeen khwaabon ke kazal
Bheegi palkon pe abb usse lagaaoun kaise

Adaayein apne aankho ki laaoun kaise
Mithi yaadon ko dobaara sajaaoun kaise
Band aankho se hin aapko dekh leti thi
Beh gayi yaadain abb khud ko behlaaoun kaise

....................YAA.......................... ....

Sharm se jhuke kabhi pyaar se uthe the
Wahi adaayin bheegi palkon pe aab laaoun kaise
Aapko hasta kabhi pyaar jataate huye dekhe the
Beh gayi yaadain abb khud ko behlaaoun kaise

WAHEED JI ......... AUR SABHI LOGON NE BEHAD ACHCHA LIKHA HAI .............THANKS .......BYE TC


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Sonu

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«Reply #19 on: April 12, 2006, 08:07:19 PM »

talat.. menu..nidhi... tanhachand ji wonderful sabney bahut acha likha hai...

thanks menu kudiyeh...


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«Reply #20 on: April 12, 2006, 09:08:01 PM »

in yaadon ko sametne do mujhe,
yehi mere jeene ka sahara hai,
tu kabhi ho na saka mera apna,
ab inke sath rehna na mujhe gawara hai


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tanhachand

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«Reply #21 on: April 13, 2006, 04:47:09 AM »

Quote from: "Talat"

Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"

Bohot achcha likha Waheed !!!!

Bheegi hui palkon main khwaab bhi hote hain
Hote nahin poore bas aankhon main rehte hain!

Aansuon main bheegte hain wo khwaab
Sang armaano ke wo ta-umr sulagte hain !

Nice .....................TOO GOOD ...........

................................................. ........bye AND tc [/b]

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Talat

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«Reply #22 on: April 13, 2006, 07:07:15 AM »

Thanks a lot Meena, sonu and all !!!

Very Nice ones Meena, Phoenix and Tanha !!!


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«Reply #23 on: April 13, 2006, 02:05:50 PM »

Quote from: "Talat"

Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"

Bohot achcha likha Waheed !!!!

Bheegi hui palkon main khwaab bhi hote hain
Hote nahin poore bas aankhon me rehte hain

Aansuon main bheegte hain wo khwaab
Sang armaano ke wo ta-umr sulagte hain !!

wonderful Talat........ Meena...Sonu Mom...Phoenix......... Shukriya all Freinds....

Bheegi hue palkon ki jubaan koi samjhaye mujhe
hoti hai kyon inmein itni kahaniyan koi padhaye mujhe
har khwaab inhi palkon per sanwar ke bhikar jaate hain
koi apni palko mein sajakar kabhi giraye na mujhe........


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«Reply #24 on: April 13, 2006, 02:29:42 PM »

bahut hi khoob waheed ji and talat ji....

bahut dard hai...


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«Reply #25 on: April 13, 2006, 02:32:10 PM »

Palkon mein nami si jo rehti hai,
Lagta hai inmein kuch dabi khwaaishein rehti hai,
Tooti hui khwaish behti hai ashq bankar,
Jo na mil sake unki yaadein bheegi si rehti hai...

gesu's koshish!!!!!


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Pooja

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«Reply #26 on: April 14, 2006, 04:34:39 AM »

wah, sabhi ne bahoot acha likha hai!!!

bheegi yandon mai, is kami si rahti hai
tere intzaar mai bhi, ek umind si rahti hai
payegy kaya, yah bhi dil janta hai
phir bhi kisi umind per, najar tiki si rahti hai


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waheed_rose2004

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«Reply #27 on: April 15, 2006, 02:33:47 PM »

wonderfull Gesu.......... Pooja sis..........aap dono ka jawaab nahi........


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waheed_rose2004

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«Reply #28 on: April 16, 2006, 04:52:08 PM »

very nice Majid............. bahot khoob.........


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Pooja

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«Reply #29 on: April 17, 2006, 03:04:22 PM »

Rone se dil bahal jaata hai kahty log
issi liye her pal ro lete hai a-mere dost
dil ka dard kabhi kam hota najar na ayya
Ashaqo se humne to din raat khud ko bahoot sajaya


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