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«Reply #60 on: May 15, 2006, 06:35:28 AM » |
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muna tey niky bhut khoob... sabney bahut acha likha hai..
Rishtey dilo key yeo tut jatey nahi,
yaad keya bina tumhey koi bhi dil betaney nahi.
Yeo muh mud ker apno ko chud ker,
Dost yeo to dardey jakham dey jatey nahi.
yeh mana musam badeltey hai ek naye musam key leyah,
Dost miltey hai phir beched janey key leyah.
Hum pass nahi to bhi shikva keo,
Hum ass kertey hai phir sey milney key leyah.
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«Reply #61 on: May 15, 2006, 01:30:11 PM » |
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nice waheed n pooja
un ashqon ki kaya qeemat jo ashq tapkate hain
jo rashq ke qabil hain palkon men chamkte hain
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Sonu
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«Reply #62 on: May 16, 2006, 04:20:10 AM » |
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tabusam ji bahut acha likha hai... pagal hai woh log jahaan main saccha pyar jo karte hain abb mein samjhi kyon bechaare moat se pahle marte hain nice waheed n pooja
un ashqon ki kaya qeemat jo ashq tapkate hain
jo rashq ke qabil hain palkon men chamkte hain |
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Sonu
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«Reply #63 on: May 16, 2006, 08:18:52 AM » |
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shukrya majid bahi arey app mehphil mey ahye or bin likhey hia chaley gaye yea to galat bat hai... mehphil sey yeo hi koi uthker to nahi jatahia KABHI KHAFA RAHO KABHI GILA-SHIKWA TO KRO, KABHI NARAJ RAHO KABHI SHIKAYAT TO KRO, JO BHI RUSWAYIAN KARO MAGER ES DOST KO BHULAKAR MAT KRO, JO BHI HO GELEY SHIKVEY USEY DOOT TO KRO, YEO NA CHUP REHKER USKEY DIL KO TADPAA KER HURT KRO. NICE 2 ALLLL LAGE RAHO |
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«Reply #64 on: May 17, 2006, 04:29:00 AM » |
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Thanks so much majid jo apney humari bat mani... bahut acha likha hia ... jubaan se nikley teri...woh pyar ke geet jakhmi dil se hum dohraa bhi nahi sakte teri dahak se jo jal gaya koi zindaa jaley ko hum dafnaa bhi nahi sakte JO HUKUM SIS
JINKI AANKHEIN AANSHUOO SE NUM NAHI
KYA SAMAJHTE HO UNHE KOI GUM NAHI
TUM TADAP KAR RO DIYE TO KYA
GUM CHHUPA KE BHI YAHAN HASNE WALE KUM NAHI
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«Reply #65 on: May 17, 2006, 07:54:58 AM » |
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tabusam ji bahut acha likha hai... pagal hai woh log jahaan main saccha pyar jo karte hain abb mein samjhi kyon bechaare moat se pahle marte hain nice waheed n pooja
un ashqon ki kaya qeemat jo ashq tapkate hain
jo rashq ke qabil hain palkon men chamkte hain thanx sonu udas aakhon se aansu kahan tapkate hain ye motiyon ki tarah seepiyon men palte hain |
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«Reply #66 on: May 17, 2006, 08:01:13 AM » |
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BAHUY KHOOB TABASSUM.. Kanto key serhaney ney gulab bena deya, Hava ko mehka deya, Hadso ki bhid mey umeedo ko jala deya. tabusam ji bahut acha likha hai... pagal hai woh log jahaan main saccha pyar jo karte hain abb mein samjhi kyon bechaare moat se pahle marte hain nice waheed n pooja
un ashqon ki kaya qeemat jo ashq tapkate hain
jo rashq ke qabil hain palkon men chamkte hain thanx sonu udas aakhon se aansu kahan tapkate hain ye motiyon ki tarah seepiyon men palte hain |
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«Reply #67 on: May 17, 2006, 01:40:29 PM » |
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thanx sonu
aansu se bhari palke jis ne bhi usaki dekhin
baad us ke phir koi gam dil ko na rula paya
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«Reply #68 on: May 17, 2006, 06:37:56 PM » |
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Yeh meray Ishq ka sila hai,
Dard bas aapse mila hai,
Dard kitna hai kaise batayenge hum....
Chot dil pe hai kaise dikhayenge hum !
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«Reply #69 on: May 18, 2006, 04:01:32 AM » |
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Tabu u r most welcome... bahut hi acha likha hia rutey rutey ab humari pahlkey sukh gaye hai jindgi ka takaja kertey kertey ab jidngi bhi humsey ruth gaye hai unkey aney ka jo tha elm humko vo bhi ab ash ab chutney lagi hai unki vo bhigi palkey ajj hbi humko yaad hai dil mey ju basey hai ganu key bavar vo humey ajj bhi yaad hia dil jo tumney toda tha ek shishey ki tahra humara ajj bhi uski chupan humarey dil mey hai thanx sonu
aansu se bhari palke jis ne bhi usaki dekhin
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«Reply #70 on: May 18, 2006, 04:04:08 AM » |
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Tabrez ji bahut hi acha likha hai apney... Yeh meray Ishq ka sila hai,
Dard bas aapse mila hai,
Dard kitna hai kaise batayenge hum....
Chot dil pe hai kaise dikhayenge hum ! |
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«Reply #71 on: May 18, 2006, 05:44:36 AM » |
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Gud Work Sonu........Kudiye.........
Kyu hai aaj teri aankhon mein nami....
Kyu tere Lafzo mein Dard hai.....
Kyu hai yeh raat andheri.....
Kyu Mahobbat ka mausam aaj sard hai......
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«Reply #72 on: May 18, 2006, 05:51:17 AM » |
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Gaurav sikh li tuvi punjabi chal vadiya hai :lol: :lol: ... thanks gaurav.. bahut sohna likhiya hia... bus yeo hi kesi ki yaad ah gaye dil ko samjhya tha per phir bhi dil ki bat ahkhu tak ah gaye bahut manya tha ahkhu ko key ashq nahi bahana unki yaad ratey ahudri nahi gujarana yea to judai ki barsat hai jo kabhi kabhi bin mauson ah jati hia yea to sirf unkey aney ki hi ahat si legti hai per vo atey nahi hai Gud Work Sonu........Kudiye.........
Kyu hai aaj teri aankhon mein nami....
Kyu tere Lafzo mein Dard hai.....
Kyu hai yeh raat andheri.....
Kyu Mahobbat ka mausam aaj sard hai...... |
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«Reply #73 on: May 18, 2006, 06:18:40 AM » |
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Thanks so much Kran... Majid bro bahut bahut shukriya humari tuti phuti shayri apko passend ahti hai... Bemmar ho to koi dawa dety hai Rukk jati hai nabz to dua dety hai Koi poochy to sahi inn pharishto sey Dil sey dhoya uthy to kia dety hai !!!! NICE 2 ALLLL
AUR SONU KYUN NAHI MAANEGE HUM AAP KI BAAT ?
AAKHIR HUM BHI TO ACHHO KE SAATH LIKHNA CHAHATE HAI
TAKE HUM BHI KUCHH SIKH SAKE |
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«Reply #74 on: May 18, 2006, 01:15:35 PM » |
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usaki palkon pe jab ansu hi aa atken hain
labon ko kuch bolne ki phir zarurat kab hai
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