bhool ...(nam)

by poonamA on July 30, 2013, 12:58:05 PM
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aksar ab mujhe vo bhool jaya karte hai
zulm is tarah mujh par dhaya karte hai

naam  lekar  na   jaane  kisi  aur   ka
dil ki dhadkan khoob sunaya karte hai

gira ke hame apni nazroo me vo zalim
kis liye hame itne gam dilaya karte hai

geet jo gungunaya tha kabhi mere liye
na jaane ab kis kis ko sunaya karte hai

tadapte  aaj bhi hai hum bas uski khatir
khawab me bhi bas vo he aaya karte  hai
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«Reply #1 on: July 30, 2013, 01:25:12 PM »
nice one.........
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«Reply #2 on: July 30, 2013, 01:31:34 PM »
BAHUT KHOOB.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: July 30, 2013, 01:58:41 PM »
WAAH WAAH WAAH
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«Reply #4 on: July 30, 2013, 02:11:19 PM »
wonderful creation dheron daad mubarakbaad
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«Reply #5 on: July 30, 2013, 02:27:30 PM »
Good expression
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«Reply #6 on: July 30, 2013, 03:52:55 PM »
Waaaaaah waaaah waaah Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #7 on: July 30, 2013, 04:10:55 PM »
geet jo gungunaya tha kabhi mere liye
na jaane ab kis kis ko sunaya karte hai

WAAH WAAH POONAM BOHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI.
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«Reply #8 on: July 30, 2013, 07:13:13 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut sundar Poonam ji, bahut achchaa likha hai aapne....!!!
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«Reply #9 on: July 30, 2013, 07:57:29 PM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #10 on: July 30, 2013, 10:16:03 PM »
Waah Waah Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #11 on: July 31, 2013, 05:25:00 AM »
Quote from: poonamA on July 30, 2013, 12:58:05 PM


aksar ab mujhe vo bhool jaya karte hai
zulm is tarah mujh par dhaya karte hai

    mere WO bhi aise hi sataya karte hain.
    bhool kar padosan ka darwaza khat khatayaa karte hain. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
naam  lekar  na   jaane  kisi  aur   ka
dil ki dhadkan khoob sunaya karte hai.

            need mein aksar munni,sheela pukara karte hain.
            aur jaagti aankho.n se mujhe niharaa karte hain. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

gira ke hame apni nazroo me vo zalim
kis liye hame itne gam dilaya karte hai

                   bitha kar aaine ke saamne wo mujhe.
                   apne haatho.n se sajaaya karte hain. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

geet jo gungunaya tha kabhi mere liye
na jaane ab kis kis ko sunaya karte hai

                 mere alfaazo.n ko qalam band kar ke.
                 betuki si ghazal banayaa karte hain. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

tadapte  aaj bhi hai hum bas uski khatir
khawab me bhi bas vo he aaya karte  hai

             jab bhi jaate hain door to milta hai skoon mujhe.
             per khawaab mein aa aa kar darayaa karte hain Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard





good good......!
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«Reply #12 on: July 31, 2013, 05:40:48 AM »
Quote from: poonamA on July 30, 2013, 12:58:05 PM


aksar ab mujhe vo bhool jaya karte hai
zulm is tarah mujh par dhaya karte hai

naam  lekar  na   jaane  kisi  aur   ka
dil ki dhadkan khoob sunaya karte hai

gira ke hame apni nazroo me vo zalim
kis liye hame itne gam dilaya karte hai

geet jo gungunaya tha kabhi mere liye
na jaane ab kis kis ko sunaya karte hai

tadapte  aaj bhi hai hum bas uski khatir
khawab me bhi bas vo he aaya karte  hai


nice
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«Reply #13 on: July 31, 2013, 05:42:12 AM »
Quote from: Sheba on July 31, 2013, 05:25:00 AM
good good......!
v.nice sheba ji  gt8
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«Reply #14 on: July 31, 2013, 12:18:19 PM »
thx miru
Quote from: Miru;;;; on July 30, 2013, 01:25:12 PM
nice one.........
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