bhujha diye chiraag---Ritesh Modi

by Ritesh Modi on December 18, 2012, 10:18:38 AM
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Ham ne toh bhujha diye the chiraag dhalti shaam se,
Kya jalayein ham chiraag jab jalta hai dil kisi ke naam se

Ham ne kaati hai gam ki raat teri yaadon ke jaam se,
Aata hai sab yaad ke quzari hai her raat issi muqaam se,
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«Reply #1 on: December 18, 2012, 10:45:18 AM »
waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: December 18, 2012, 10:46:31 AM »
waah waah bahut khoob
shukriya saini ji...
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«Reply #3 on: December 18, 2012, 01:41:40 PM »
Wah Wah Wah Wah Bahut Khoob Very Nice Ritesh Bhai..
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«Reply #4 on: December 18, 2012, 01:59:27 PM »
waah waah kya khoob kaha hai
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«Reply #5 on: December 18, 2012, 02:10:49 PM »
waah bohat khoob,..............
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«Reply #6 on: December 18, 2012, 07:07:02 PM »
Ritesh jee Aadaab!


WaaH janab kia baat hai... bahut khoob likha hai jee...
Achche khayaal aur khoob lafzoN meiN achchi adaaygi ki
hai aapne .. Usual Smile

Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
HaaN kalaam ko mukammal kijiye aapka kafiyaa bhi khoob
hai aur radiff bhi.. Salaam, Kalaam, awaam, payaam etc
kafiye aapko mil jayeNge kalaam ko mukammal karne ke
liye.. Usual Smile

Likhte rahiye.. Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   

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«Reply #7 on: December 18, 2012, 07:22:55 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob Ritesh ji...!!!
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«Reply #8 on: December 18, 2012, 07:43:05 PM »
Wah Wah Wah Wah Bahut Khoob Very Nice Ritesh Bhai..
thank you kaushal bhai....
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«Reply #9 on: December 18, 2012, 07:43:41 PM »
waah waah kya khoob kaha hai
thank you aqshji...
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«Reply #10 on: December 18, 2012, 07:44:42 PM »
waah bohat khoob,..............
thank you.....
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«Reply #11 on: December 18, 2012, 07:46:12 PM »
Ritesh jee Aadaab!


WaaH janab kia baat hai... bahut khoob likha hai jee...
Achche khayaal aur khoob lafzoN meiN achchi adaaygi ki
hai aapne .. :)shukriya janaab aap ki tareef ke liye aur daad ke liye...
Aap ke sujhaav ka dhyaan rakhunga...thank you so much....

Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
HaaN kalaam ko mukammal kijiye aapka kafiyaa bhi khoob
hai aur radiff bhi.. Salaam, Kalaam, awaam, payaam etc
kafiye aapko mil jayeNge kalaam ko mukammal karne ke
liye.. Usual Smile

Likhte rahiye.. Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   


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«Reply #12 on: December 18, 2012, 07:47:01 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob Ritesh ji...!!!
thank you....
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