Bhul gaya wo hamko........mann

by mann.mann on October 22, 2012, 05:47:06 AM
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Bhul gaya wo hamko jo apna banke aaya tha.
Yaad main usi ki dil muddaton jalaya tha.

Dard ke sahaare ham dur tak chale aaye,
Usne sath par mera do kadam nibhaya tha.

Jispe tha bharosa hamen sath wo nibhayega,
Dushmano ki mahfil main tanha chhod aaya tha.

Wo jiski jafaon ko muaf ham karte rahe,
meri wafa ko usne hi khaq main milaya tha.

Thak gaye ab to ham raah uski tak-tak ke,
Jiske lie dil ki har mahfil ko sajaya tha.

Chandni banke "mann" jiske zakhmon pe parsa,
Usi ne hi aakhir mera dil jalaya tha.

Mann
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«Reply #1 on: October 22, 2012, 06:03:20 AM »
very nice
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«Reply #2 on: October 22, 2012, 06:04:57 AM »
bahut khoobsoorat mann ji badhaai ho
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«Reply #3 on: October 22, 2012, 06:17:18 AM »
Bahut khoob....
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«Reply #4 on: October 22, 2012, 06:31:15 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: October 22, 2012, 06:36:15 AM »
bohut khoob mann ji  Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
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«Reply #6 on: October 22, 2012, 06:57:08 AM »
Quote from: mann.mann on October 22, 2012, 05:47:06 AM
Bhul gaya wo hamko jo apna banke aaya tha.
Yaad main usi ki dil muddaton jalaya tha.

Dard ke sahaare ham dur tak chale aaye,
Usne sath par mera do kadam nibhaya tha.

Jispe tha bharosa hamen sath wo nibhayega,
Dushmano ki mahfil main tanha chhod aaya tha.

Wo jiski jafaon ko muaf ham karte rahe,
meri wafa ko usne hi khaq main milaya tha.

Thak gaye ab to ham raah uski tak-tak ke,
Jiske lie dil ki har mahfil ko sajaya tha.

Chandni banke "mann" jiske zakhmon pe parsa,
Usi ne hi aakhir mera dil jalaya tha.

Mann

Bahut Bahut Khoob Mann Ji..

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: October 22, 2012, 07:34:14 AM »
Bahut hi badiya peshkash Man ji .
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«Reply #8 on: October 22, 2012, 09:12:49 AM »
very nice
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«Reply #9 on: October 22, 2012, 10:07:49 AM »
bahut khoob mann jee Applause
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«Reply #10 on: October 22, 2012, 10:20:15 AM »
Mann Jee Aadaab!


 Bahut khoob jee ... achchi kalaam kahi hai ... Sabhi ahsaas O khayaal
kafi gehre aur khoob rahe... Is dard bhari umdaa kalaam par humari dheroN
dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul Kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye..
Shaad  o aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: October 22, 2012, 12:39:22 PM »
Quote from: mann.mann on October 22, 2012, 05:47:06 AM
Bhul gaya wo hamko jo apna banke aaya tha.
Yaad main usi ki dil muddaton jalaya tha.

Dard ke sahaare ham dur tak chale aaye,
Usne sath par mera do kadam nibhaya tha.

Jispe tha bharosa hamen sath wo nibhayega,
Dushmano ki mahfil main tanha chhod aaya tha.

Wo jiski jafaon ko muaf ham karte rahe,
meri wafa ko usne hi khaq main milaya tha.

Thak gaye ab to ham raah uski tak-tak ke,
Jiske lie dil ki har mahfil ko sajaya tha.

Chandni banke "mann" jiske zakhmon pe parsa,
Usi ne hi aakhir mera dil jalaya tha.

Mann

good Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: October 22, 2012, 12:50:17 PM »
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«Reply #13 on: October 22, 2012, 06:50:43 PM »
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«Reply #14 on: October 23, 2012, 03:15:07 AM »
bahut shukriya nandbabuji
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