!!Bhul!!

by amrita on June 22, 2005, 08:36:19 PM
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amrita
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Vaada toh kar lete hai,par nibhana bhul jaate hai
laga kar aag bhujhana bhul jaate hai
bhulna toh aadat ho gayi hai unki
rulate toh hai,par manana bhul jate hai..

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HumTum
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«Reply #1 on: June 22, 2005, 09:10:21 PM »
nice .....

ghum to ban ke perchaai chaktey hai sath mere
inhi gumooN se apna jeevan bhar ka nata hai
ik aur maar de kangar mere seeney mein  
khali dil dahdkana mujhey nhi aata hai !!
 
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #2 on: June 23, 2005, 05:20:22 AM »
very nice u Amrita and HumTum wat does "chaktey" means... my hindi is not that strong yaar......otherwise good
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Meena
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«Reply #3 on: June 23, 2005, 10:00:50 AM »
gud gud.....humtum....and amrita........!!!!!!!!!!!

 :D
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HumTum
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«Reply #4 on: June 23, 2005, 12:38:34 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
gud gud.....humtum....and amrita........!!!!!!!!!!!

 :D


:wink:
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HumTum
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«Reply #5 on: June 23, 2005, 12:39:16 PM »
Quote from: "isha_verma7"
very nice you Amrita and HumTum wat does "chaktey" means... my hindi is not that strong yaar......otherwise good


sorry it was chaltey not chaktey !!! my mistake  sad5

:wink:
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Delicate_Doll
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«Reply #6 on: June 23, 2005, 12:54:45 PM »
nice n gr8 one both ....................................!!!
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amrita
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«Reply #7 on: June 23, 2005, 01:26:08 PM »
mere dil pe apna naam likha
usne ghop ke seene mein khanjar

bhul na jau pyaar uska isiliye apna naam likha
is dil ne dhadak na shuru kiya tha sirf uska ho kar

nadaan yeh janta na tha
ki wohi tha dil ke andar...
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #8 on: June 23, 2005, 03:46:03 PM »
very  nice work  amrita...............hum tum...................
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amit_is_always_cool
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«Reply #9 on: June 23, 2005, 03:54:19 PM »
Quote from: "amrita"
mere dil pe apna naam likha
usne ghop ke seene mein khanjar

bhul na jau pyaar uska isiliye apna naam likha
is dil ne dhadak na shuru kiya tha sirf uska ho kar

nadaan yeh janta na tha
ki wohi tha dil ke andar...




nice one amrita ji
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amrita
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«Reply #10 on: June 23, 2005, 04:33:37 PM »
Quote from: "amit_is_always_cool"
Quote from: "amrita"
mere dil pe apna naam likha
usne ghop ke seene mein khanjar

bhul na jau pyaar uska isiliye apna naam likha
is dil ne dhadak na shuru kiya tha sirf uska ho kar

nadaan yeh janta na tha
ki wohi tha dil ke andar...




nice one amrita ji


thanks a lot waheed ...............and coool amit.....!!
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«Reply #11 on: June 23, 2005, 04:47:28 PM »
very nice amrita and humtum................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Nino
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«Reply #12 on: June 23, 2005, 06:13:15 PM »
Quote from: "amrita"
Vaada toh kar lete hai,par nibhana bhul jaate hai
laga kar aag bhujhana bhul jaate hai
bhulna toh aadat ho gayi hai unki
rulate toh hai,par manana bhul jate hai..




Kaisi ab shiqayet kaisa ab ye gila,jiska manga tha saath kabhi humne
wo to hume is duniya mein kahin nahi mila,
baat ager roothne manane tak ki hoti to koi baat na thi
ab to maut ki ghadi aa chuki hai ab is bedard zamane se kiya gila
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #13 on: June 24, 2005, 02:23:21 PM »
Quote from: "Nino"
Quote from: "amrita"
Vaada toh kar lete hai,par nibhana bhul jaate hai
laga kar aag bhujhana bhul jaate hai
bhulna toh aadat ho gayi hai unki
rulate toh hai,par manana bhul jate hai..




Kaisi ab shiqayet kaisa ab ye gila,jiska manga tha saath kabhi humne
wo to hume is duniya mein kahin nahi mila,
baat ager roothne manane tak ki hoti to koi baat na thi
ab to maut ki ghadi aa chuki hai ab is bedard zamane se kiya gila


ur   welcome  amrita...............excellent  amrita.............Nino..................tongue3
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