Bhula kyun nahin dete.............!!

by Talat on December 12, 2007, 12:03:11 PM
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«Reply #15 on: December 13, 2007, 05:57:42 PM »
TALAT AAP NE BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI..KHAAS KARKE YEH LINES MEIN DARD AUR BEBASI BAKHOOBHI NAZAR AATI HAI.DAAD KUBOOL KIJIYE

Aasmaan bhi ye gehra,
Kahin chup ke roya tha,
Askhon main jab tumne,
Dil ko duboya tha,
Gunehgaar hoon, mujhko saza kyun nahin dete
Kyun karte ho yaad, bhula kyun nahin dete

Ab wo roshni nahin,
Dhuaan sa uthtaa hai,
Chahat ki lau thi, ab wo
Chiragh kahan jalta hai
Maangta hai khoon-e-ashk, bujha kyun nahin dete
Kyun karte ho yaad, bhula kyun nahin dete!![/b]
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«Reply #16 on: December 13, 2007, 09:36:01 PM »
Bohat hi khoob Talat & All...
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«Reply #17 on: December 17, 2007, 10:37:06 AM »
Thanks a lot Rajbir, Khwaish..and Aryaan.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #18 on: December 17, 2007, 03:47:51 PM »
Tujhe bhuul jau yeh hota nahin hai
Koi waqt ho dard sota nahin hai !!

Bahut achche Talat ji!!

Jab se míen tujh se juda ho gya
Dekh le mein kya se kya ho gya

Meiney chaha ke tujhko bula du
Dil mera mujh se khaffa ho gya

Kasei cli hai ab ke hawa ke ya!Rab?
Insaan, insaan nahin khuda ho gya

Ik aag jali, dil ke sanamkhane mein
Mera sab kuch usmein tabah ho gya

Jab se tune mujh se muhh mood liya
Mera ishq duniya ka tamasha ho gya!!




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«Reply #19 on: December 20, 2007, 04:05:08 PM »
Talat u r rockin!!!!!
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«Reply #20 on: January 30, 2008, 02:51:21 PM »
Tujhe bhuul jau yeh hota nahin hai
Koi waqt ho dard sota nahin hai !!

Bahut achche Talat ji!!

Jab se míen tujh se juda ho gya
Dekh le mein kya se kya ho gya

Meiney chaha ke tujhko bula du
Dil mera mujh se khaffa ho gya

Kasei cli hai ab ke hawa ke ya!Rab?
Insaan, insaan nahin khuda ho gya

Ik aag jali, dil ke sanamkhane mein
Mera sab kuch usmein tabah ho gya

Jab se tune mujh se muhh mood liya
Mera ishq duniya ka tamasha ho gya!!






Bohot khoob HumTum !

Hai tamasha yeh dunya, magar jeena hai
Riste zakhmon ko apne haath se seena hai

Kabhi apne the, ban gaye hain wo ghair
Bas kuch tooti yaadon ke sang jeena hai
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«Reply #21 on: January 30, 2008, 02:51:37 PM »
Talat u r rockin!!!!!

Thank You So much :D
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«Reply #22 on: January 30, 2008, 03:23:37 PM »
nice humtum and Talat!!
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«Reply #23 on: January 31, 2008, 10:28:48 AM »
wow... man gaye is se acha to kabhi parha hi nahi hai

bahut ache Talat
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«Reply #24 on: August 31, 2008, 01:15:33 AM »
nice humtum and Talat!!
Thanks Pooja Usual Smile

wow... man gaye is se acha to kabhi parha hi nahi hai

bahut ache Talat

Thanks so much Sam Usual Smile
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«Reply #25 on: August 31, 2008, 02:19:50 AM »
wah wah sabhi bahoot behtreen likha hai.......maza aa gaya...friends
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«Reply #26 on: September 02, 2008, 12:17:38 PM »
Shukriya Sanjeev Usual Smile
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«Reply #27 on: September 02, 2008, 08:09:41 PM »
Wow Talat sis... superb...
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«Reply #28 on: September 22, 2008, 06:48:10 PM »
Thankyou ! Yoindia
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«Reply #29 on: September 24, 2009, 05:17:24 AM »
Wah bahut khoob Celmira ji,Majid ji ,Mask ji,very touching n mindblowing creation,bahut acha likha aap sabne, icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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