bichadne kee baa.t karte ho..

by laaiba on March 28, 2012, 01:02:12 PM

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laaiba

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khwab aasa lamhon mein bichadne kee baa.t karte ho
ajeeb shakhs ho mil kar bichadne ki baa.t karte ho
laaiba ali angel11


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Re: bichadne kee baa.t karte ho..

«Reply #1 on: March 28, 2012, 03:21:15 PM »

gud


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laaiba

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Re: bichadne kee baa.t karte ho..

«Reply #2 on: March 28, 2012, 05:01:57 PM »

shukria...


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mkv

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Re: bichadne kee baa.t karte ho..

«Reply #3 on: March 28, 2012, 05:50:45 PM »

Bahut khoob Laaiba ji
Bahut accha likhti hai aap..ek acchi si ghajal likhiye to maja aa jaaye..khayaalon ki aapke paas koi kamee nahi..
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Re: bichadne kee baa.t karte ho..

«Reply #4 on: March 29, 2012, 07:22:00 AM »

bahut khoob laibaa ji...


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Re: bichadne kee baa.t karte ho..

«Reply #5 on: March 30, 2012, 10:25:08 PM »

nice.....


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laaiba

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Re: bichadne kee baa.t karte ho..

«Reply #6 on: March 31, 2012, 11:55:21 AM »

Quote from: mkv on March 28, 2012, 05:50:45 PM

Bahut khoob Laaiba ji
Bahut accha likhti hai aap..ek acchi si ghajal likhiye to maja aa jaaye..khayaalon ki aapke paas koi kamee nahi..
Applause

bohat shukria aapka...ghazal try ki hai ...


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laaiba

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Re: bichadne kee baa.t karte ho..

«Reply #7 on: March 31, 2012, 11:55:48 AM »

Quote from: dolly on March 29, 2012, 07:22:00 AM

bahut khoob laibaa ji...

shukria dolly jii....


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laaiba

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Re: bichadne kee baa.t karte ho..

«Reply #8 on: March 31, 2012, 11:56:10 AM »

Quote from: Rahi2001 on March 30, 2012, 10:25:08 PM

nice.....

thanks....


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Re: bichadne kee baa.t karte ho..

«Reply #9 on: April 01, 2012, 03:04:25 AM »

Bahut Acche Laaiba Ji... Bahut Khooooooob Likha hai aapne..

**~** Mann **~**


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Re: bichadne kee baa.t karte ho..

«Reply #10 on: June 24, 2013, 01:24:39 PM »

Nice - acha ehsaas hai...
Paaoge hamse bichad kar bhi hamko aas paas
Har shaey may zindagi ki jhalak chood jayenge...


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Re: bichadne kee baa.t karte ho..

«Reply #11 on: June 24, 2013, 03:59:49 PM »

thnx iqtedar ji,....
ihsas ache na hon to sher kese kahe jayeN,.......
sher khoob likhaa aap ne ,...daad,.......

joh bichad jate hain woh lout kar nahiN aaTe
ihsaas mar jaayeiN toh phir zindaa nahin hote,...


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Re: bichadne kee baa.t karte ho..

«Reply #12 on: June 24, 2013, 06:40:46 PM »

Ji Laaiba ji...
Ehsaas hi to ashaar ko janam dete hain - kisi ne kya khoob kaha hai...
Dard ka dil se guzar ho to ghazal hoti hai
Ishq may gham ka asar ho to ghazal hoti hai
Chaho alfaaz ka jitna bhi sahara le lo
Sher may khoon-e-jigar ho to ghazal hoti hai...
Aur ye baat to aam hai ke...
Ghazal may bandish-e-alfaaz hi nahi kaafi
Jigar ka khoon bhi kuch chahiye asar ke liye...
MashaAllah aap acha likhti hain...