Bichard kar bhi....

by Pooja on June 26, 2007, 06:42:26 PM
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Jeene bhi nahi dete, aor marne bhi nahi dete
Bichard kar bhi kyun, mujhko, khud se bichardne nahi dete

Waqat ke sung sung, kyun mujhko chalne nahi dete
Beet chuka hai jo sab kuch, kyun usko beetane nahi dete

Hath hai khali aor yah dil jakhamo se bhara
Rulate ho khud hi mujhko, aor phir rone bhi nahi dete

Jeene bhi nahi dete, aor marne bhi nahi dete
Bichard kar bhi kyun, mujhko, khud se bichardne nahi dete!!
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«Reply #1 on: June 27, 2007, 03:23:55 AM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Jeene bhi nahi dete, aor marne bhi nahi dete
Bichard kar bhi kyun, mujhko, khud se bichardne nahi dete

Waqat ke sung sung, kyun mujhko chalne nahi dete
Beet chuka hai jo sab kuch, kyun usko beetane nahi dete

Hath hai khali aor yah dil jakhamo se bhara
Rulate ho khud hi mujhko, aor phir rone bhi nahi dete

Jeene bhi nahi dete, aor marne bhi nahi dete
Bichard kar bhi kyun, mujhko, khud se bichardne nahi dete!!


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«Reply #2 on: June 27, 2007, 11:19:37 AM »
Bahoot Khoob Pooja Didi,..
Kamaal Ka Likha Hai,..
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«Reply #3 on: June 27, 2007, 04:03:20 PM »
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Quote from: "Pooja"
Jeene bhi nahi dete, aor marne bhi nahi dete
Bichard kar bhi kyun, mujhko, khud se bichardne nahi dete

Waqat ke sung sung, kyun mujhko chalne nahi dete
Beet chuka hai jo sab kuch, kyun usko beetane nahi dete

Hath hai khali aor yah dil jakhamo se bhara
Rulate ho khud hi mujhko, aor phir rone bhi nahi dete

Jeene bhi nahi dete, aor marne bhi nahi dete
Bichard kar bhi kyun, mujhko, khud se bichardne nahi dete!!


POOJA JI NAMASTE !!
main aapko reply dene main bhi darta hoo sochta hoo aap itna achcha likhte hain aur humne ganda sa reply de diya to aap ko bura lagega, POOJA MUJHE TUM SHISHYA BANA DO PLEASE AAP MERE GURU BAN JAAO NA PLEASE



Dil mai atta hai jo, wo main likh jaati hu
Hansti hu kalam sung apni aor kabhi Ro jaati hu

Behte hai zabaat, kalam se apni wo hi likh jaati hu
Socha nahi kabhi kaya likha, app sabki tippani se samjh jaati hu!!

Zindagi hai dhoop-chaya ka ek chakarview
Jo deta hai, dikhata hai, unko hi shabdo mai likh jaati hu

Aise kah kar na karo sharminda ki app likhne se ghabraate hai
Aise baato ko pard kar, main apna dil dukha jaati hu

Khul kar likho app bhi, jo bhi dil mai apke ayye
Pardti hu jab apka sab ka likha, ussi mai sukh mai pa jaati hu!!
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«Reply #4 on: June 27, 2007, 04:05:24 PM »
Quote from: "Jaanasheen"
Bahoot Khoob Pooja Didi,..
Kamaal Ka Likha Hai,..


Thanks Lil Bro..... app bhi kuch likh jaate!!
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«Reply #5 on: June 30, 2007, 08:46:42 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Quote from: "poem143s"
Quote from: "Pooja"
Jeene bhi nahi dete, aor marne bhi nahi dete
Bichard kar bhi kyun, mujhko, khud se bichardne nahi dete

Waqat ke sung sung, kyun mujhko chalne nahi dete
Beet chuka hai jo sab kuch, kyun usko beetane nahi dete

Hath hai khali aor yah dil jakhamo se bhara
Rulate ho khud hi mujhko, aor phir rone bhi nahi dete

Jeene bhi nahi dete, aor marne bhi nahi dete
Bichard kar bhi kyun, mujhko, khud se bichardne nahi dete!!


POOJA JI NAMASTE !!
main aapko reply dene main bhi darta hoo sochta hoo aap itna achcha likhte hain aur humne ganda sa reply de diya to aap ko bura lagega, POOJA MUJHE TUM SHISHYA BANA DO PLEASE AAP MERE GURU BAN JAAO NA PLEASE



Dil mai atta hai jo, wo main likh jaati hu
Hansti hu kalam sung apni aor kabhi Ro jaati hu

Behte hai zabaat, kalam se apni wo hi likh jaati hu
Socha nahi kabhi kaya likha, app sabki tippani se samjh jaati hu!!

Zindagi hai dhoop-chaya ka ek chakarview
Jo deta hai, dikhata hai, unko hi shabdo mai likh jaati hu

Aise kah kar na karo sharminda ki app likhne se ghabraate hai
Aise baato ko pard kar, main apna dil dukha jaati hu

Khul kar likho app bhi, jo bhi dil mai apke ayye
Pardti hu jab apka sab ka likha, ussi mai sukh mai pa jaati hu!!


dil ka dard likhne ki unki fitrat nahi hoti
agar wafa karne me unko koi dhirkat nahi hoti

hum bhi sochte hai dard dil ka unki tarah baya kiya jaye
par kambakht ab is dil me koi harkat nahi hoti
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«Reply #6 on: July 02, 2007, 05:30:56 AM »
Jeene bhi nahi dete, aor marne bhi nahi dete
Bichard kar bhi kyun, mujhko, khud se bichardne nahi dete

So nice Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: July 08, 2007, 09:14:19 PM »
BAHOOT KHOOB NIRAJ JI AND SHUKARIA PAANI JI
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«Reply #8 on: July 18, 2007, 08:34:39 AM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Jeene bhi nahi dete, aor marne bhi nahi dete
Bichard kar bhi kyun, mujhko, khud se bichardne nahi dete

Waqat ke sung sung, kyun mujhko chalne nahi dete
Beet chuka hai jo sab kuch, kyun usko beetane nahi dete

Hath hai khali aor yah dil jakhamo se bhara
Rulate ho khud hi mujhko, aor phir rone bhi nahi dete

Jeene bhi nahi dete, aor marne bhi nahi dete
Bichard kar bhi kyun, mujhko, khud se bichardne nahi dete!!


didi!!! humesha ki tara just too gud hai apki poem. dil ke khayal!!! wonderful!!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: August 07, 2007, 02:33:32 PM »
bahoot bahoot shukaria Meena!!!

Bichard kar bhi mujhse bichrde nahi ho
Lagta hai jaise yahin kahin ho

Her waqat rahta hai ahsaas tera is tarah mujhko
Mil jaoge kuch der main, kahin gaye nahi ho

Her baat yaad atti hai teri ab ansoo ban kar
Tanhaai mai ek sathi si parchai tumhe ho

Bichard kar bhi mujhse bichrde nahi ho
Lagta hai jaise yahin kahin ho
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«Reply #10 on: August 08, 2007, 01:25:22 AM »
Very Nice Pooja & All...
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«Reply #11 on: August 08, 2007, 02:19:29 PM »
Thanks Aryaan ji!!
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«Reply #12 on: August 15, 2007, 03:34:48 AM »
Bichard kar bhi wo bichard kayun nahi jaata
Kis liye hai meri yaadon mai ajj bh hai atta
Thak jaati hu main toot kar rah jaati hu
Kuch bhi to phir samjh main meri nahi atta

Karta hai wo baaatin jaise ajj bhi payar hai mujhse
Phir apni galat bato se wo baaz kayun nahi atta
Bichard kar bhi wo bichard kayun nahi jaata
Kis liye hai meri yaadon mai ajj bh hai atta
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«Reply #13 on: August 27, 2007, 10:34:45 PM »
Yaadein ab uski rulati nahi
Raat ki tanhai, sula paati nahi

Socho main ghoom rahta hai dil
Ek bhi soch, man tak atti nahi

Ajeeb manjar hai mere khayalo ka
Ek bhi dastak us tak jaati nahi

Ghoot kar na mar jaau waqat se pahle
Mout ke samne koi sheh thaher paati nahi

Yaadein ab uski rulati nahi
Raat ki tanhai, sula paati nahi
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«Reply #14 on: August 29, 2007, 10:08:05 AM »
bohot khoob didi!!!

rula diya rooh ko, aab askh unke liye aur bahaye kitne,
toot jata hai har sapna, adhure aise khwab aur sajaye kitne,
unke is diye hue dard me itna doob chuki hai "Meena",
suna chuke yeh fasana, aur sher hum sunaye kitne!!
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