--- bifar ja ya baras ja ---:Shayri-E-Dard

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gar ho sitamgar to sitam kar
uu tarqibo se na zulam kar

khud ko ghula de hawao me khusbu ki tarah
khus na ho uu khilte phulo ko msalkar

bifar ja ya baras ja mujhpar
apni khamoshi to ab khatm kar

gar puchna ho kuch to sawal kar
bechaini me uu na tu fira kar

kya hoga kya hona he
aise khyalo ko ab zafa kar

biswas kar zara sa mera b khyal kar
toot jaunga mai jite ji mar kar

ya to ab mjhe fir se apna kar
ya apne dil se dafa kar

kuch arzo ho to bta
puri krunga ab me khud ko b dafna kr


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ParwaaZ

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Re: --- bifar ja ya baras ja ---

«Reply #1 on: February 12, 2011, 04:22:59 PM »

Janab KB jee Aadaab!

Masha Allah aapke kalaam ke kia kahne ..
Ahsaas O khayaal behad umda kahe hai janab..

Dil se daad kabool kijiye....

Haan kuch kahna chaheNge aapne jis tarha se matle
ko anjaam diya aur aik do ashaar meiN kafiyaa milaya..
gar wohi kafiye ko akher tak anjaam dete to gazab ki kalaam ban jati aapki...

Aapki is kavish par humara bhi kuch likhane ka mann hua aapke
kafiye ko anjaam dete aap aur thik se samjhne ki koshish kijiyeNga..

Muskurake youN palke na nam kar
Chahe Barsa de ashkoN ko jam kar

Gar nahi rakhna rishta mujhse ab
YouN roz roz kaa milna kam kar

Milke bichadte hi hai humsafar
Jo bichde unka na koi gham kar

Ummid hai aapko humari kisi baat ka buraa nahi laga hoga..
Aur aap kafiye ko samjhe hoNge...

Khair koshish jari rakhiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez....


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brokenbyluv

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Re: --- bifar ja ya baras ja ---

«Reply #2 on: February 12, 2011, 04:28:16 PM »

Bahut khoob kill bill ji aur parwaz ji,parwaz ji ki baat se main bhi sehmat hu...


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marhoom bahayaat

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Re: --- bifar ja ya baras ja ---

«Reply #3 on: February 12, 2011, 04:33:27 PM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on February 12, 2011, 04:22:59 PM

good one janab parwaaz sahab


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killbill

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Re: --- bifar ja ya baras ja ---

«Reply #4 on: February 13, 2011, 04:17:18 AM »

aap sab ka sukriya ji.
***
Parwaaz sahab mai aapki baat se sahmat hu aur maanta hu0:)-
lekin mai koi shayr nhi bas jab dil me uthal putha hoti hai aur kisi ko kuch kah nhi paata to usko likh deta hu yahan. kya likha usko padhta hi nahi.
issliye kuch ka kuch ho jata hai. agr usko kahin likh kar corection karta to shayd thoda thik hi likhta.
aapka teh dik se sukrgujar hu aapne padha saraha aur sahi se likhne ki seekh di.
isi bahane aapka likha hua acha sa padhne ko mil gaya:)
saath rhiye aise hi.
khus rahiye


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manzil-e-ishq

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Re: --- bifar ja ya baras ja ---

«Reply #5 on: February 13, 2011, 06:38:04 AM »

kya baat hai kb....
mindblowing creation......
very nice feelings....
& very good expressions too...
bht bht khoob.....

very nice lines parwaaz ji.....


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manjum

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Re: --- bifar ja ya baras ja ---

«Reply #6 on: February 14, 2011, 07:20:35 AM »

wah bahut khub KBji...

Applause


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Rishi Agarwal

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Re: --- bifar ja ya baras ja ---

«Reply #7 on: February 15, 2011, 07:27:22 PM »

BAhut Khub Kb Ji


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