BIJLIYAAN GIRTI RAHEEN ............................ HASAN

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BijliyaaN   girti   raheeN  ,  aur  AasmaaN  dekha  kiya
Meri   Barbaadi   ka    Manzar     MehrbaaN  dekha  kiya


Ghar  Khuda  ka  dhha  diya ,  veeraan  kar  deeN  BastiyaaN
Aur   tamaasha    Qaaid - e - HindostaaN    dekha  kiya


Mere  ghar  se  uthhne  waale  Sholay  bhi  kya  khoob  thhe
KhandaaN - khandaaN  mere  ghar  ka  PaasbaaN  dekha  kiya


Woh   Bulandi   ka   safar   Baa - zoam  tai  karta  Raha
MaiN   khada   bus   raastoN  ki   pastiyaaN  dekha  kiya  


Daagh   kaise  apne  daaman  ke   nazar  aate  ' Hasan '
Umr   bhar   main   doosroN   ki   KhaamyaaN   dekha  kiya

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Qaaid e Hindostaan = Leader of India ;Khandaan-Khandaan = hanste hue / khush-khush ;
Paasbaan=Rakhwaala / Caretaker ; Bulandi = oonchai ; Pasti= nichai /downfall ;
 ba-zoam = with egoistic pride ; khaamyaan = ghaltiyaan / kamiyaan
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बिजलियां   गिरती  रहीं  और  आसमां  देखा  किया
मेरी   बर्बादी   का   मन्जर   मेहरबां   देखा  किया


घर  खुदा  का   ढा  दिया , वीरान कर दीं  बस्तियां
और   तमाशा  क़ायद - ए - हिन्दोस्तां  देखा  किया


मेरे  घर  से  उठने  वाले  शोले  भी  क्या  ख़ूब  थे
खन्दां - खन्दां   मेरे  घर  का  पासबां   देखा  किया


वह बुलन्दी  का सफ़र बा-ज़ोम  तै करता रहा
मैं  खड़ा  बस  रास्तों  की  पस्तियाँ  देखा किया


दाग़  कैसे  अपने  दामन  के  नज़र  आते ' हसन '
उम्र  भर  मैं   दुसरों   की  ख़ामियाँ  देखा किया
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«Reply #1 on: September 13, 2013, 01:50:05 PM »
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Waaaaaaah Hasan ji waaaaah. Is ghazal ke tareef ke liye alfaaz nahi.. har ek sher gehri soch se saji hui... bahut bahut mubarak ho aapko is umda kalaam ke liye.. waise sabhi ashaar khoob hai... par yeh bahut bahut pasand aaye..Maqte ke liye khaaaaaaaas hazaron daaaaaaaaaaaad...

Ghar  Khuda  ka  dhha  diya ,  veeraan  kar  deeN  BastiyaaN
Aur   tamaasha    Qaaid - e - HindostaaN    dekha  kiya

Woh   Bulandi   ka   safar   Baa - zoam  tai  karta  Raha
MaiN   khada   bus   raastoN  ki   pastiyaaN  dekha  kiya  


Daagh   kaise  apne  daaman  ke   nazar  aate  ' Hasan '
Umr   bhar   main   doosroN   ki   KhaamyaaN   dekha  kiya
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«Reply #2 on: September 13, 2013, 02:46:04 PM »
waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: September 13, 2013, 05:07:05 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: September 13, 2013, 05:14:15 PM »
Aadaab sir
Mere  ghar  se  uthhne  waale  Sholay  bhi  kya  khoob  thhe
KhandaaN - khandaaN  mere  ghar  ka  PaasbaaN  dekha  kiya


Woh   Bulandi   ka   safar   Baa - zoam  tai  karta  Raha
MaiN   khada   bus   raastoN  ki   pastiyaaN  dekha  kiya  


Daagh   kaise  apne  daaman  ke   nazar  aate  ' Hasan '
Umr   bhar   main   doosroN   ki   KhaamyaaN   dekha  kiya


dil ko choone vaale ashaar kahe hai aapne..
us dard ki tah tak pahunchkar..bina uska ehsaas kiye..likhna naamumkin.
aur maqta..har dil se taalluq rakhne vaala
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«Reply #5 on: September 13, 2013, 05:57:35 PM »
Daagh kaise apne daaman ke nazar aate ' Hasan '
Umr bhar main doosroN ki KhaamyaaN dekha
kiya

Khub Kahaa Hasan Ji Clapping Smiley
Gar Yahi Ehsas Har Dil Ko Ho Jaaye
To Shayad Dunya Mein Buraai Hi Na Rahe


Shad o Aabad Rahiye


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«Reply #6 on: September 13, 2013, 06:13:48 PM »
Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Hasan Sir,
Bahut pyaree ghazal kahi hai aapne.Ghazal ka maqta such me dil ko jhakjhor gaya-
दाग़  कैसे  अपने  दामन  के  नज़र  आते ' हसन '
उम्र  भर  मैं   दुसरों   की  ख़ामियाँ  देखा किया

Is khoob kalaam ke tarif ke liye shabd nahi hain mere paas.Apko bahut-bahut badhai.
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«Reply #7 on: September 13, 2013, 06:29:56 PM »
Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on September 13, 2013, 01:25:08 PM

BijliyaaN   girti   raheeN  ,  aur  AasmaaN  dekha  kiya
Meri   Barbaadi   ka    Manzar     MehrbaaN  dekha  kiya


Ghar  Khuda  ka  dhha  diya ,  veeraan  kar  deeN  BastiyaaN
Aur   tamaasha    Qaaid - e - HindostaaN    dekha  kiya


Mere  ghar  se  uthhne  waale  Sholay  bhi  kya  khoob  thhe
KhandaaN - khandaaN  mere  ghar  ka  PaasbaaN  dekha  kiya


Woh   Bulandi   ka   safar   Baa - zoam  tai  karta  Raha
MaiN   khada   bus   raastoN  ki   pastiyaaN  dekha  kiya 


Daagh   kaise  apne  daaman  ke   nazar  aate  ' Hasan '
Umr   bhar   main   doosroN   ki   KhaamyaaN   dekha  kiya

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Qaaid e Hindostaan = Leader of India ;Khandaan-Khandaan = hanste hue / khush-khush ;
Paasbaan=Rakhwaala / Caretaker ; Bulandi = oonchai ; Pasti= nichai /downfall ;
 ba-zoam = with egoistic pride ; khaamyaan = ghaltiyaan / kamiyaan
....................


बिजलियां   गिरती  रहीं  और  आसमां  देखा  किया
मेरी   बर्बादी   का   मन्जर   मेहरबां   देखा  किया


घर  खुदा  का   ढा  दिया , वीरान कर दीं  बस्तियां
और   तमाशा  क़ायद - ए - हिन्दोस्तां  देखा  किया


मेरे  घर  से  उठने  वाले  शोले  भी  क्या  ख़ूब  थे
खन्दां - खन्दां   मेरे  घर  का  पासबां   देखा  किया


वह बुलन्दी  का सफ़र बा-ज़ोम  तै करता रहा
मैं  खड़ा  बस  रास्तों  की  पस्तियाँ  देखा किया


दाग़  कैसे  अपने  दामन  के  नज़र  आते ' हसन '
उम्र  भर  मैं   दुसरों   की  ख़ामियाँ  देखा किया


nice,sir
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«Reply #8 on: September 13, 2013, 07:48:29 PM »
मेरी   बर्बादी   का   मन्जर   मेहरबां   देखा  किया

samjhdar ko yehi bahut kuchh hai Siddique Saheb  Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: September 14, 2013, 12:02:25 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: September 14, 2013, 12:48:23 AM »
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waah waah waah bahut umdaa hasan jee..happy9
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«Reply #11 on: September 14, 2013, 04:18:26 AM »
waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Hasan sir, kya khoob ghazal kahi hai, badi poshidgi se tanz kiya hai haalaat per, kaabil-e-taareef, jitni taareef karuN kam hai. DheroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kijiye meri taraf se.
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«Reply #12 on: September 14, 2013, 12:13:58 PM »
Quote from: aqsh on September 13, 2013, 01:50:05 PM
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Waaaaaaah Hasan ji waaaaah. Is ghazal ke tareef ke liye alfaaz nahi.. har ek sher gehri soch se saji hui... bahut bahut mubarak ho aapko is umda kalaam ke liye.. waise sabhi ashaar khoob hai... par yeh bahut bahut pasand aaye..Maqte ke liye khaaaaaaaas hazaron daaaaaaaaaaaad...

Ghar  Khuda  ka  dhha  diya ,  veeraan  kar  deeN  BastiyaaN
Aur   tamaasha    Qaaid - e - HindostaaN    dekha  kiya

Woh   Bulandi   ka   safar   Baa - zoam  tai  karta  Raha
MaiN   khada   bus   raastoN  ki   pastiyaaN  dekha  kiya 


Daagh   kaise  apne  daaman  ke   nazar  aate  ' Hasan '
Umr   bhar   main   doosroN   ki   KhaamyaaN   dekha  kiya
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Aqsh sahiba , bahut shukrguzar hoon ki aapne is dard ko saraaha  . tah e dil se duaaein .
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«Reply #13 on: September 14, 2013, 09:25:29 PM »
shukriya saini saheb
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«Reply #14 on: September 14, 2013, 11:10:14 PM »
Waaah waah Hassan sahab ...khirad o irfaan se bhare aashaar aur khoobsurti se kahi huee ghazal par dheron daad
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