BIJLIYAAN GIRTI RAHEEN ............................ HASAN

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«Reply #15 on: September 15, 2013, 12:50:02 AM »
Quote from: Miraj. on September 13, 2013, 05:07:05 PM
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Thanks , Miraj ji .
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«Reply #16 on: September 15, 2013, 12:43:29 PM »
Quote from: mkv on September 13, 2013, 05:14:15 PM
Aadaab sir
Mere  ghar  se  uthhne  waale  Sholay  bhi  kya  khoob  thhe
KhandaaN - khandaaN  mere  ghar  ka  PaasbaaN  dekha  kiya


Woh   Bulandi   ka   safar   Baa - zoam  tai  karta  Raha
MaiN   khada   bus   raastoN  ki   pastiyaaN  dekha  kiya  


Daagh   kaise  apne  daaman  ke   nazar  aate  ' Hasan '
Umr   bhar   main   doosroN   ki   KhaamyaaN   dekha  kiya


dil ko choone vaale ashaar kahe hai aapne..
us dard ki tah tak pahunchkar..bina uska ehsaas kiye..likhna naamumkin.
aur maqta..har dil se taalluq rakhne vaala
Bahut bahut  shukriya Mukesh ji
ki aaap ne ghazal ko saraaha aur
housla afza tabsire se nawaza.
Duago hoon .
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«Reply #17 on: September 15, 2013, 03:13:54 PM »
Daagh   kaise  apne  daaman  ke   nazar  aate  ' Hasan '
Umr   bhar   main   doosroN   ki   KhaamyaaN   dekha  kiya

ek Rau khubool kijiye Usual Smile

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #18 on: September 16, 2013, 01:50:57 AM »
Quote from: Shihab on September 13, 2013, 05:57:35 PM
Daagh kaise apne daaman ke nazar aate ' Hasan '
Umr bhar main doosroN ki KhaamyaaN dekha
kiya

Khub Kahaa Hasan Ji Clapping Smiley
Gar Yahi Ehsas Har Dil Ko Ho Jaaye
To Shayad Dunya Mein Buraai Hi Na Rahe


Shad o Aabad Rahiye


Shihab
Housla afzai k liye bahut bahut Shukriya Shihab saheb
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«Reply #19 on: September 16, 2013, 02:21:50 AM »
Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on September 13, 2013, 01:25:08 PM

BijliyaaN   girti   raheeN  ,  aur  AasmaaN  dekha  kiya
Meri   Barbaadi   ka    Manzar     MehrbaaN  dekha  kiya
 icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower Laughing hard Laughing hard Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Ghar  Khuda  ka  dhha  diya ,  veeraan  kar  deeN  BastiyaaN
Aur   tamaasha    Qaaid - e - HindostaaN    dekha  kiya
 tearyeyed tearyeyed Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Mere  ghar  se  uthhne  waale  Sholay  bhi  kya  khoob  thhe
KhandaaN - khandaaN  mere  ghar  ka  PaasbaaN  dekha  kiya
 Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

Woh   Bulandi   ka   safar   Baa - zoam  tai  karta  Raha
MaiN   khada   bus   raastoN  ki   pastiyaaN  dekha  kiya  

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Daagh   kaise  apne  daaman  ke   nazar  aate  ' Hasan '
Umr   bhar   main   doosroN   ki   KhaamyaaN   dekha  kiya
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Qaaid e Hindostaan = Leader of India ;Khandaan-Khandaan = hanste hue / khush-khush ;
Paasbaan=Rakhwaala / Caretaker ; Bulandi = oonchai ; Pasti= nichai /downfall ;
 ba-zoam = with egoistic pride ; khaamyaan = ghaltiyaan / kamiyaan
....................


बिजलियां   गिरती  रहीं  और  आसमां  देखा  किया
मेरी   बर्बादी   का   मन्जर   मेहरबां   देखा  किया


घर  खुदा  का   ढा  दिया , वीरान कर दीं  बस्तियां
और   तमाशा  क़ायद - ए - हिन्दोस्तां  देखा  किया


मेरे  घर  से  उठने  वाले  शोले  भी  क्या  ख़ूब  थे
खन्दां - खन्दां   मेरे  घर  का  पासबां   देखा  किया


वह बुलन्दी  का सफ़र बा-ज़ोम  तै करता रहा
मैं  खड़ा  बस  रास्तों  की  पस्तियाँ  देखा किया


दाग़  कैसे  अपने  दामन  के  नज़र  आते ' हसन '
उम्र  भर  मैं   दुसरों   की  ख़ामियाँ  देखा किया



bahut khoob fazal sahab aur ek rau bhi..... icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #20 on: September 16, 2013, 12:41:46 PM »
Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on September 13, 2013, 06:13:48 PM
Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Hasan Sir,
Bahut pyaree ghazal kahi hai aapne.Ghazal ka maqta such me dil ko jhakjhor gaya-
दाग़  कैसे  अपने  दामन  के  नज़र  आते ' हसन '
उम्र  भर  मैं   दुसरों   की  ख़ामियाँ  देखा किया

Is khoob kalaam ke tarif ke liye shabd nahi hain mere paas.Apko bahut-bahut badhai.
Shukriya , Sudhir ji. bahut duaaein .
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«Reply #21 on: September 16, 2013, 09:44:18 PM »
Shukriya Marhoom Bahayat saheb
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«Reply #22 on: September 16, 2013, 11:03:26 PM »
Quote from: Ram Saraswat on September 13, 2013, 07:48:29 PM
मेरी   बर्बादी   का   मन्जर   मेहरबां   देखा  किया

samjhdar ko yehi bahut kuchh hai Siddique Saheb  Applause Applause
Ram Saraswat ji , tahe dil se shukrguzar hoon .
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«Reply #23 on: September 17, 2013, 02:13:57 AM »
Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on September 14, 2013, 12:02:25 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Nice
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Thanks Ravinder ji
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«Reply #24 on: September 17, 2013, 04:56:38 PM »
Quote from: nashwani on September 14, 2013, 12:48:23 AM
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waah waah waah bahut umdaa hasan jee..happy9
thanks nashwani ji
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«Reply #25 on: September 17, 2013, 05:05:12 PM »
Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on September 13, 2013, 01:25:08 PM

BijliyaaN   girti   raheeN  ,  aur  AasmaaN  dekha  kiya
Meri   Barbaadi   ka    Manzar     MehrbaaN  dekha  kiya


Ghar  Khuda  ka  dhha  diya ,  veeraan  kar  deeN  BastiyaaN
Aur   tamaasha    Qaaid - e - HindostaaN    dekha  kiya


Mere  ghar  se  uthhne  waale  Sholay  bhi  kya  khoob  thhe
KhandaaN - khandaaN  mere  ghar  ka  PaasbaaN  dekha  kiya


Woh   Bulandi   ka   safar   Baa - zoam  tai  karta  Raha
MaiN   khada   bus   raastoN  ki   pastiyaaN  dekha  kiya 


Daagh   kaise  apne  daaman  ke   nazar  aate  ' Hasan '
Umr   bhar   main   doosroN   ki   KhaamyaaN   dekha  kiya

....................
Qaaid e Hindostaan = Leader of India ;Khandaan-Khandaan = hanste hue / khush-khush ;
Paasbaan=Rakhwaala / Caretaker ; Bulandi = oonchai ; Pasti= nichai /downfall ;
 ba-zoam = with egoistic pride ; khaamyaan = ghaltiyaan / kamiyaan
....................


बिजलियां   गिरती  रहीं  और  आसमां  देखा  किया
मेरी   बर्बादी   का   मन्जर   मेहरबां   देखा  किया


घर  खुदा  का   ढा  दिया , वीरान कर दीं  बस्तियां
और   तमाशा  क़ायद - ए - हिन्दोस्तां  देखा  किया


मेरे  घर  से  उठने  वाले  शोले  भी  क्या  ख़ूब  थे
खन्दां - खन्दां   मेरे  घर  का  पासबां   देखा  किया


वह बुलन्दी  का सफ़र बा-ज़ोम  तै करता रहा
मैं  खड़ा  बस  रास्तों  की  पस्तियाँ  देखा किया


दाग़  कैसे  अपने  दामन  के  नज़र  आते ' हसन '
उम्र  भर  मैं   दुसरों   की  ख़ामियाँ  देखा किया



waaaahhh waaahhhh waahhhhhh............... bahot khooob
ek baar fir se aapki kalam ka jaadu chal gaya..... superbbbb

Sidra
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«Reply #26 on: September 17, 2013, 06:38:06 PM »
Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on September 14, 2013, 04:18:26 AM
waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Hasan sir, kya khoob ghazal kahi hai, badi poshidgi se tanz kiya hai haalaat per, kaabil-e-taareef, jitni taareef karuN kam hai. DheroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kijiye meri taraf se.
Bahut shukriya Iftakhar saheb aur bahut bahut duaaein .
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«Reply #27 on: September 18, 2013, 12:11:46 PM »
Quote from: zarraa on September 14, 2013, 11:10:14 PM
Waaah waah Hassan sahab ...khirad o irfaan se bhare aashaar aur khoobsurti se kahi huee ghazal par dheron daad
Bahut shukriya aur adaab , Zarra saheb .
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«Reply #28 on: September 18, 2013, 07:47:20 PM »
Quote from: Iqtedar on September 15, 2013, 03:13:54 PM
Daagh   kaise  apne  daaman  ke   nazar  aate  ' Hasan '
Umr   bhar   main   doosroN   ki   KhaamyaaN   dekha  kiya

ek Rau khubool kijiye Usual Smile

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
tah e dil se shukriya .
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«Reply #29 on: September 19, 2013, 10:40:25 PM »
Quote from: Sheba on September 16, 2013, 02:21:50 AM

bahut khoob fazal sahab aur ek rau bhi..... icon_flower icon_flower!
BAHUT SHUKRIYA AUR DUAAEIN .
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