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inkaar sun har baat se dil mera bhar gaya hai
sunder sapna tha jo mera ab vo bikhar gaya hai
pyaar ka gahra sagar tha kabhi jo shaks
jaanam mera vo ab na jane kidhar gaya hai
kaajal ban aankho me basa rahta tha vo
un aankho me ab samander utar gaya hai
bin uske hum ji na sakte hai kabhi
juddai se ab uski dil mera dar gaya hai
saath uske raah ke kaante bhi phool thay
vo kya gaya ki saath suhana safar gaya hai
hai tanhaiya jeevan me 'poonam' is kadar
bahoo me unki rahne ka jamana gujar gaya hai
hai intzaar ab sans meri rukne ka bas
maut meri ka intzaam vo kar gaya hai
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poonam ji,
bahut achhi rachna par meri taraf se bahut bahut badhai
ghansham das ahuja
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«Reply #3 on: September 14, 2012, 09:49:22 AM » |
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inkaar sun har baat se dil mera bhar gaya hai
sunder sapna tha jo mera ab vo bikhar gaya hai
pyaar ka gahra sagar tha kabhi jo shaks
jaanam mera vo ab na jane kidhar gaya hai
kaajal ban aankho me basa rahta tha vo
un aankho me ab samander utar gaya hai
bin uske hum ji na sakte hai kabhi
juddai se ab uski dil mera dar gaya hai
saath uske raah ke kaante bhi phool thay
vo kya gaya ki saath suhana safar gaya hai
hai tanhaiya jeevan me 'poonam' is kadar
bahoo me unki rahne ka jamana gujar gaya hai
hai intzaar ab sans meri rukne ka bas
maut meri ka intzaam vo kar gaya hai
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«Reply #4 on: September 14, 2012, 09:58:03 AM » |
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Bahut hi dard se bhari aur lajawab peshkash....dhero daad aur mubarakbaad poonam ji
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«Reply #7 on: September 15, 2012, 04:40:08 PM » |
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Kya baat hai
bahut hi badhiya kalaam.
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«Reply #8 on: September 15, 2012, 04:49:05 PM » |
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boht khub
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«Reply #9 on: September 16, 2012, 02:20:29 AM » |
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NICE Duniya sapno ki meri bikhar gai wade se apne wo manoj mukar gai inkaar sun har baat se dil mera bhar gaya hai
sunder sapna tha jo mera ab vo bikhar gaya hai
pyaar ka gahra sagar tha kabhi jo shaks
jaanam mera vo ab na jane kidhar gaya hai
kaajal ban aankho me basa rahta tha vo
un aankho me ab samander utar gaya hai
bin uske hum ji na sakte hai kabhi
juddai se ab uski dil mera dar gaya hai
saath uske raah ke kaante bhi phool thay
vo kya gaya ki saath suhana safar gaya hai
hai tanhaiya jeevan me 'poonam' is kadar
bahoo me unki rahne ka jamana gujar gaya hai
hai intzaar ab sans meri rukne ka bas
maut meri ka intzaam vo kar gaya hai
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«Reply #11 on: September 18, 2012, 04:16:56 AM » |
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dhanyawad poonam ji,
bahut achhi rachna par meri taraf se bahut bahut badhai
ghansham das ahuja
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«Reply #12 on: September 18, 2012, 04:19:51 AM » |
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thanks nice one touching painful Bahut hi dard se bhari aur lajawab peshkash....dhero daad aur mubarakbaad poonam ji
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«Reply #13 on: September 18, 2012, 04:20:58 AM » |
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shukriya Kya baat hai
bahut hi badhiya kalaam.
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«Reply #14 on: September 18, 2012, 04:21:39 AM » |
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saahill, manoj jee thx boht khub
NICE
Duniya sapno ki meri bikhar gai
wade se apne wo manoj mukar gai
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