bikhar gaya hai ....(nam)

by poonamA on September 14, 2012, 07:05:32 AM
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inkaar sun har baat se dil mera bhar gaya hai
sunder sapna tha jo mera ab vo bikhar gaya hai

pyaar ka gahra sagar tha kabhi jo shaks
jaanam mera vo ab na jane kidhar gaya hai

kaajal ban aankho me basa rahta tha vo
un aankho me ab samander utar gaya hai

bin  uske  hum  ji na  sakte  hai  kabhi
juddai se ab uski dil mera dar gaya hai

saath uske raah ke kaante bhi phool thay
vo kya gaya ki saath suhana safar gaya hai

hai tanhaiya jeevan me 'poonam' is kadar
bahoo me unki rahne ka jamana gujar gaya hai

hai intzaar ab sans meri rukne ka bas
maut meri ka intzaam vo kar gaya hai
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«Reply #1 on: September 14, 2012, 07:12:12 AM »
poonam ji,
 bahut achhi rachna par meri taraf se bahut bahut badhai
ghansham das ahuja
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«Reply #2 on: September 14, 2012, 07:47:42 AM »
inkaar sun har baat se dil mera bhar gaya hai
sunder sapna tha jo mera ab vo bikhar gaya hai

pyaar ka gahra sagar tha kabhi jo shaks
jaanam mera vo ab na jane kidhar gaya hai

kaajal ban aankho me basa rahta tha vo
un aankho me ab samander utar gaya hai

bin  uske  hum  ji na  sakte  hai  kabhi
juddai se ab uski dil mera dar gaya hai

saath uske raah ke kaante bhi phool thay
vo kya gaya ki saath suhana safar gaya hai

hai tanhaiya jeevan me 'poonam' is kadar
bahoo me unki rahne ka jamana gujar gaya hai

hai intzaar ab sans meri rukne ka bas
maut meri ka intzaam vo kar gaya hai



Bahut Bahut Khoob Poonam ji..

Khoobsurat Khoobsurat Kalaam..Aur Issme Dard Be-hisaab hai..

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«Reply #3 on: September 14, 2012, 09:49:22 AM »
inkaar sun har baat se dil mera bhar gaya hai
sunder sapna tha jo mera ab vo bikhar gaya hai

pyaar ka gahra sagar tha kabhi jo shaks
jaanam mera vo ab na jane kidhar gaya hai

kaajal ban aankho me basa rahta tha vo
un aankho me ab samander utar gaya hai

bin  uske  hum  ji na  sakte  hai  kabhi
juddai se ab uski dil mera dar gaya hai

saath uske raah ke kaante bhi phool thay
vo kya gaya ki saath suhana safar gaya hai

hai tanhaiya jeevan me 'poonam' is kadar
bahoo me unki rahne ka jamana gujar gaya hai

hai intzaar ab sans meri rukne ka bas
maut meri ka intzaam vo kar gaya hai


nice one

touching painful Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: September 14, 2012, 09:58:03 AM »
Bahut hi dard se bhari aur lajawab peshkash....dhero daad aur mubarakbaad poonam ji
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«Reply #5 on: September 14, 2012, 02:40:41 PM »
bahut bahut khoob.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: September 14, 2012, 04:09:39 PM »
inkaar sun har baat se dil mera bhar gaya hai
sunder sapna tha jo mera ab vo bikhar gaya hai

pyaar ka gahra sagar tha kabhi jo shaks
jaanam mera vo ab na jane kidhar gaya hai

kaajal ban aankho me basa rahta tha vo
un aankho me ab samander utar gaya hai

bin  uske  hum  ji na  sakte  hai  kabhi
juddai se ab uski dil mera dar gaya hai

saath uske raah ke kaante bhi phool thay
vo kya gaya ki saath suhana safar gaya hai

hai tanhaiya jeevan me 'poonam' is kadar
bahoo me unki rahne ka jamana gujar gaya hai( maqte ko aakri sher key hasiyat sey aakir mein rakhein )

hai intzaar ab sans meri rukne ka bas
maut meri ka intzaam vo kar gaya hai
merii maut ka intezaam vo kar gayaa hai.( shyad aise likhein to sahii hoga)



veriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: September 15, 2012, 04:40:08 PM »
Kya baat hai
bahut hi badhiya kalaam.
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«Reply #8 on: September 15, 2012, 04:49:05 PM »
boht khub
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«Reply #9 on: September 16, 2012, 02:20:29 AM »
NICE

Duniya sapno ki meri bikhar gai
wade se apne wo manoj mukar gai
inkaar sun har baat se dil mera bhar gaya hai
sunder sapna tha jo mera ab vo bikhar gaya hai

pyaar ka gahra sagar tha kabhi jo shaks
jaanam mera vo ab na jane kidhar gaya hai

kaajal ban aankho me basa rahta tha vo
un aankho me ab samander utar gaya hai

bin  uske  hum  ji na  sakte  hai  kabhi
juddai se ab uski dil mera dar gaya hai

saath uske raah ke kaante bhi phool thay
vo kya gaya ki saath suhana safar gaya hai

hai tanhaiya jeevan me 'poonam' is kadar
bahoo me unki rahne ka jamana gujar gaya hai

hai intzaar ab sans meri rukne ka bas
maut meri ka intzaam vo kar gaya hai

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«Reply #10 on: September 18, 2012, 04:16:28 AM »
khwaish jee bahot bahot shukriya

Bahut Bahut Khoob Poonam ji..

Khoobsurat Khoobsurat Kalaam..Aur Issme Dard Be-hisaab hai..

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #11 on: September 18, 2012, 04:16:56 AM »
dhanyawad
poonam ji,
 bahut achhi rachna par meri taraf se bahut bahut badhai
ghansham das ahuja
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«Reply #12 on: September 18, 2012, 04:19:51 AM »
thanks
nice one

touching painful Usual Smile
Bahut hi dard se bhari aur lajawab peshkash....dhero daad aur mubarakbaad poonam ji
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«Reply #13 on: September 18, 2012, 04:20:58 AM »
shukriya
bahut bahut khoob.. Usual Smile
Applause Applause

veriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
Kya baat hai
bahut hi badhiya kalaam.

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poonamA
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«Reply #14 on: September 18, 2012, 04:21:39 AM »
saahill, manoj jee thx
boht khub
NICE

Duniya sapno ki meri bikhar gai
wade se apne wo manoj mukar gai
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