Bikhrii huii Khwaish (Shikha)

by Shikha12 on August 15, 2006, 08:55:12 AM
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Shikha12
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«Reply #30 on: August 21, 2006, 08:39:30 AM »
Chaukhat pe jalaaye rakha tha diya, Intezaar ka,
Deta rehta tha housla sa humein, unke pyaar ka...

Umeed si yeh lagi rahi bus ki woh aayege ek roz,
Aur umeed mein hi Guzar gaya, Mausam bahaar ka..

Bikhhar gayii sab khwaaishey, Toote sabhi sapne,
Rula ke gaya woh har ek pal, Ishq ke khumaar ka...
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Pooja
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«Reply #31 on: August 21, 2006, 08:43:16 AM »
wah kay abaat hai, bahoot hi acha likha hai Shikha apne, shabdo ko bahoot ache se piroya hai lines mai,....

uska khumar hi, jakham ban jaata hai
toote is dil ka, rista hua dard ban jaata hai

beeta khushi ka her ek wo pal
kahta hai andhere mai kahi chal

jahan koi uski yaad na aa sake
na is dil ko bar bar rula sake

koi andhera, uski aks bhulata nahi
ek pal bhi uske bin chain atta nahi
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Qutubuddin
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«Reply #32 on: August 21, 2006, 08:46:27 AM »
Well said Shikha12..  and all..

Guzar gaya magar woh mausam bahaar ka..

Ques....
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Shikha12
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«Reply #33 on: August 21, 2006, 09:13:26 AM »
Thanks Pooja di and Qutubbdin ji...
Pooja di... U r really superb....




Aa kar kahin se humko bhi kabhi hausla de jaa,
Ghutt.ti hui si is Zindagi ko zara dua de jaa...

Bahut thak gaye hai bewajah hi jeete jeete hum,
Jeene ke liye fakat bewajah si ek wajah de jaa..

Tum aate ho ghar mein rulane bhar ko hi humein,
Aa phir rulaa humein, dil ko naya sadma de jaa..

Dekho phir simat aaye hai hum panaah mein teri,
Jaane se pehle kuch yaadon ka hi aasraa de jaa...

Har roz yunhi chuaa karo nayi unchaaiyon ko tum,
Pankh sametne ko humein tinko ka ghoslaa de jaa...
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Rajbir
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«Reply #34 on: August 21, 2006, 09:15:35 AM »
Shikha, Pooja, Ranju, Ques

Superb ! Excellent ! Fantastic =D> =D> =D>

Bahut khoob !

Aaj aap sab ko bahut din baad ek saath likhte dekh kar bahut achcha laga !

Rajbir
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Qutubuddin
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«Reply #35 on: August 21, 2006, 09:21:29 AM »
Well said Shikha12..


Apni yaadon ka hi mujhey aasraa de de... ..

Bahoot Khoob...

Ques....
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Pooja
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«Reply #36 on: August 21, 2006, 09:31:13 AM »
Quote from: "Shikha12"

Thanks Pooja di and Qutubbdin ji...
Pooja di... you r really superb....




Koi to mujhey yeh hausla de de,
Zindagi ko meri koi dua de de...

Main thak gayi bewajah jeetey jeetey,
Mujhey jeeney ki koi to wajah de de..

Tum aatey ho rulaney bhar ko mujhey,
Aaj mujhey phir koi naya sadma de de..

Aa gaye hum phir teri panah mey simat kar,
Apni yaadon ka hi mujhey aasraa de de...

Roz chuutey ho nayii uuchhaiiyon ko tum to,
Mere pairon ko bhi thoda saa aasmaa de de....
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wah wah wah .... kaya baat hai, kamal ka likha hai shikha ... bahoot khoob......

asmaan na sahi, jameen per khud ke sung rahne de
jhooth ahi sahi, itna sa to bharam rahne de
na chal tu mere sath koi shikayat na hogi
bas ek mera naam, apne naam ke sath rahne de
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Qutubuddin
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«Reply #37 on: August 21, 2006, 09:32:58 AM »
Kisay Pukarein ...

Kisey Pukarain Hum Is Hujoom-e-Gham Main
Kay Sub Hi Hamaray Aazamaye Huay Hain

Tum Hi Ne Humain Kar Dia Tanha
Warna Hum To Taalluq Nibahye Huay Hain

Dheemay Dheemay Aansoo Dil Se Girte
Kay Hum Apna Gham Sub Se Chupaye Huay Hain

Un Shano Tak Ab Rasai Na Rahi
Jin Shano Pe Aansoo Bahaye Huay Hain

Hum Karain Ab Kisi Per Kaisay Bharosa
Kay Zamane Se Dhokay Khaye Huay Hain

Khushion Se Bhi Ab To Lagta Hay Darr
Is Qadar Zakham Hum Ne Khaye Huay Hain

Ab Dast-e-Shanasai Na Barhayain Gay
Hum Kay Zamane Bhar Se Thukrai Hue Hain


Ques...
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shrddha
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«Reply #38 on: August 21, 2006, 09:43:10 AM »
ohh shikha you are here

i was really worried about you tried to contact you on yahoo as wll but dnt know you come for a sec only.
missing you my sweet saathi

tumharai kalam ka jaadu ab bhi khushbu bhikher rha hai

hansti raho sada muskrati raho

miss u
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #39 on: August 21, 2006, 09:59:07 AM »
amazing  works  Sikha....  Pooja sis........  Ques.....
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Rajbir
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«Reply #40 on: August 21, 2006, 10:01:02 AM »
Waheed bhai tum bhi kuch likho  Puzzled !
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Shikha12
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«Reply #41 on: August 21, 2006, 10:06:32 AM »

Very nice Pooja di and Qutubuddin ji....

and

Thanks Shrddha, Rajbir and Waheed ji...
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Shikha12
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«Reply #42 on: August 21, 2006, 10:07:36 AM »



Aaya tera khayal jab bhi mujhey,
Main teri meethi yaadon mey kho gayii...

Aisa laga ki kahin pey ruk gaya ho waqt,
Kahin par tham gayii ho meri saansey,
Dhadkan meri jaisey tere tasavuur ko odh ke so gayii...

Main udhti hui pahuch jau apney chand ke paas,
Samet lu aanchal mey uski chandni ki saugaat....
Baras jaye muhabbat aaj teri jaisey barsaat ho gayii....

Magar tu naa hai mera yeh mujhko khabar hai,
Sapna hai yeh ek aisa... jiski kismat mey tootna hi likha hai,
Soch kar phir se Judaii ka aalam... Aankh meri nam ho gayii...
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Well... Revised Version, As Follows... tongue3

Phir aane laga khayaal wohi tujhse milan ka,
Phir sajjne laga aalam phoolon se chaman ka...
Phir khone lage hai hum tumhari meethi si yaad mein...

Aisa ho kaash tham jaaye aaj yahin par ye ghadi,
Sehamne lagi hai saansein aur bechainiyaan badi...
Rukne lagi hai dhadkanein ab dil-e-betaab mein...
Phir khone lage hai hum tumhari meethi si yaad mein...

Udd kar agar pahunch jaaye kareeb apne chaand ke,
Chaandni saari samet laaye aanchal mein baandh ke...
Baras rahi hai muhabbat bhi khushi ke unmaad mein..
Phir khone lage hai hum tumhari meethi si yaad mein...

Aankhein khuli toh tumko kahin paaya nahin humne,
Toote hue sapno ko abhi tak bhulaaya nahin humne...
Dheere dheere bhula denge inhe phir kabhi baad mein...
Abhi kho lene do phir humko tumhari meethi si yaad mein..
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Pooja
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«Reply #43 on: August 21, 2006, 10:42:28 AM »
wah kaya baat hai Shikha, bahoot khoobsurat likha hai apne.....

raat ki tanhaai, taro ka anchal
ankhon mai ansoo, gum ka wo badal
chader ki silwat, hatho ka kangan
tadpati hai sanse, kab hoga sungam.......
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Shikha12
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«Reply #44 on: August 22, 2006, 09:33:06 AM »

Bahut achha likha hai Pooja di... Very Nice....
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