BIN TERE MAIN MAR JAAUNGA.....

by BHONDU on July 01, 2008, 02:39:27 PM
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MAIN KHUSI SE ROUN YA GUM SE CHILLAU YAAR
BAS RAHA HAI YA PHIR CHIN RAHA HAI MERA PYAAR.
KAISE SAMJHAU MAIN USKO KI MERA DIL BHI TOOT RAHA HAI,
THA JAISA BHI EK SAHARA WO BHI MUJH SE CHUT RAHA HAI.
KIS SAY BAAT KARUNGA MAIN NAKHRE KISKO DIKHLAUNGA..
BOL BHI NHI SAKTA BIN TERE MAIN MAR JAAUNGA.....

EK KHUSI MILI THI MUJHE KABHI, AUR, AB USKO BHI KHONA HAI
RAKHNI HAI HOOTHO PER HASI, PER USSAY CHUPKER ROONA HAI.
EK APNA THA PER SAPNA THA,EK JHATKE SE WO TOOT GAYA
KOI MUJHSE POOCHEGA TO AAPNA KISKO BATLAUNGA..
BOL BHI NHI SAKTA BIN TERE MAIN MAR JAAUNGA.....

AB BHOOKH NHI AB PYAAS NHI..ZINDA HONE KA EHSAASH NHI
SAARI SAANSE DE CHUKA TUMHE, BAKI MERI KOI SAASH NHI
TUMSE BHARTA THA PET MERA, AB KHANA KAISE KHAUNGA
PEENA HAI BAS NEER MUJHE SO JEE BHAR ASHQ BAHAUNGA
BOL BHI NHI SAKTA BIN TERE MAIN MAR JAAUNGA.....
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«Reply #1 on: July 01, 2008, 02:57:55 PM »
bahoot bahoot bahoot he achi tarah se dost kavi, apne apni bhawnao ko is kavita mai utara hai!! ek ek shabd dard se lipta hua, ek ek line dard se karahti hui...

A very Good Creation By You!!  Applause  Applause  Applause

KIS SAY BAAT KARUNGA MAIN NAKHRE KISKO DIKHLAUNGA..
KOI MUJHSE POOCHEGA TO AAPNA KISKO BATLAUNGA..
PEENA HAI BAS NEER MUJHE SO JEE BHAR ASHQ BAHAUNGA
BOL BHI NHI SAKTA BIN TERE MAIN MAR JAAUNGA.....

EK APNA THA PER SAPNA THA, wah wah wah.. bahoot achi tarah se shabdo ko piroya hai apne!!

wah kaya kavita likhi hai apne..  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: July 01, 2008, 03:25:57 PM »
Vikram bro,

Tooooooooooo Goooooddddddddd Applause Applause Applause

Jitni daad doon kam hogi !

Fantastic ! Applause
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«Reply #3 on: July 02, 2008, 01:15:06 PM »
Very excellent work Mr. Bhondu...
Keep it up...
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«Reply #4 on: July 02, 2008, 01:39:43 PM »
Nice One Bhondu Ji
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«Reply #5 on: July 02, 2008, 02:03:30 PM »
Bohot khoob Bhondu Applause
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«Reply #6 on: July 02, 2008, 02:06:55 PM »
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EK KHUSI MILI THI MUJHE KABHI, AUR, AB USKO BHI KHONA HAI
RAKHNI HAI HOOTHO PER HASI, PER USSAY CHUPKER ROONA HAI.
EK APNA THA PER SAPNA THA,EK JHATKE SE WO TOOT GAYA
KOI MUJHSE POOCHEGA TO AAPNA KISKO BATLAUNGA..
BOL BHI NHI SAKTA BIN TERE MAIN MAR JAAUNGA

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«Reply #7 on: July 02, 2008, 03:48:32 PM »
bahut bahut khoob!!
bahut khoobsurat kavita likhi hai aapne Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: July 13, 2008, 07:24:57 AM »
Quote from: BHONDU on July 01, 2008, 02:39:27 PM
MAIN KHUSI SE ROUN YA GUM SE CHILLAU YAAR
BAS RAHA HAI YA PHIR CHIN RAHA HAI MERA PYAAR.
KAISE SAMJHAU MAIN USKO KI MERA DIL BHI TOOT RAHA HAI,
THA JAISA BHI EK SAHARA WO BHI MUJH SE CHUT RAHA HAI.
KIS SAY BAAT KARUNGA MAIN NAKHRE KISKO DIKHLAUNGA..
BOL BHI NHI SAKTA BIN TERE MAIN MAR JAAUNGA.....

EK KHUSI MILI THI MUJHE KABHI, AUR, AB USKO BHI KHONA HAI
RAKHNI HAI HOOTHO PER HASI, PER USSAY CHUPKER ROONA HAI.
EK APNA THA PER SAPNA THA,EK JHATKE SE WO TOOT GAYA
KOI MUJHSE POOCHEGA TO AAPNA KISKO BATLAUNGA..
BOL BHI NHI SAKTA BIN TERE MAIN MAR JAAUNGA.....

AB BHOOKH NHI AB PYAAS NHI..ZINDA HONE KA EHSAASH NHI
SAARI SAANSE DE CHUKA TUMHE, BAKI MERI KOI SAASH NHI
TUMSE BHARTA THA PET MERA, AB KHANA KAISE KHAUNGA
PEENA HAI BAS NEER MUJHE SO JEE BHAR ASHQ BAHAUNGA
BOL BHI NHI SAKTA BIN TERE MAIN MAR JAAUNGA.....



bas aankh bhar aayi meri.........yun lag raha hai....ke bas haledil humara aur kalam tumhaari. tearyeyed tearyeyed
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«Reply #9 on: July 13, 2008, 08:40:09 AM »
koun kahega kaisa hai tu, koun pukarega bar-bar
kiske kandhe par sar rakh kar, ro paunga zar zar,
kiske sath hasunga khulkar, kise kahunga apna yaar,
kisko apne zakhm hare aur dil ke ghav dikhaunga,
bol bhi nahi sakta par sach hai bin tere mai mar jaaunga...... tearyeyed tearyeyed
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«Reply #10 on: July 13, 2008, 08:43:06 AM »
Bahot khoob Bhondu ji and Sanjeev bhaiya....
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«Reply #11 on: July 13, 2008, 09:31:09 AM »
dil ka har kona khali hai, aaj badi veerani hai,
tu nahi ab is duniya me, mai zinda azab kahani hai
raaton ko saath tere padhna aur padhanaa khud ko,
saath guzara bachapan saaara, ab kya khak jawani hai

apne gum, khushiyon kee baaten kah do kise sunaunga,
bol nahi paata hun bhai, bin tere mar jaaunga
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«Reply #12 on: July 13, 2008, 09:41:15 AM »
bhondu ji,

bohut khoobsurat rachna aapki se milan hua,shukriya.

bekarar ji,

aapne khoob aage badhaaya he dard ke jazbaat ko.

Praeek
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«Reply #13 on: July 31, 2008, 03:11:28 PM »
wah wah bahoot khoob Bekarar ji!! Good work!!
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«Reply #14 on: July 31, 2008, 03:15:46 PM »
Bhondu ji bahut khoob  Applause  Applause
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