!!!..Bin tere..!!!

by nashwani on October 20, 2013, 04:23:47 AM
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Bin tere lamha lamha bas guzar rahi hai ye zindagi,,
Har lamha teri yaado.N ka ghar rahi hai ye zindagi..


Teri chhanv tale din guzra, sham teri baho.N me kati,,
Ab tak to jaise khud se bekhabar rahi hai ye zindagi..

Naa hai koi khwahish bachi, naa dil me koi arzoo,,
Fisle palo.N se phir daman bhar rahi hai ye zindagi..

Dard-e-dil labo.N se kabhi, kabhi aankho.N se aaye,,
Jaane ab sanwar rahi ya bikhar rahi hai ye zindagi..

Dikhaave ke liye jee rahe.N ho jaise sach chhupaye,,
Einto.N ko dhakti, sangmarmar rahi hai ye zindagi..

Kabhi paimane chhalakte the yaha muhabbat ke, ab to,,
Jaise star se apne hi neeche utar rahi hai ye zindagi..!!! Ñ
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«Reply #1 on: October 20, 2013, 04:28:36 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
Waah kya bat bhai Ashwani jee,
Bahut achi peshkash hai.
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«Reply #2 on: October 20, 2013, 08:48:44 AM »
ek dum mast dheron daad
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«Reply #3 on: October 20, 2013, 11:54:00 AM »
waah waah waah waah waah waah
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«Reply #4 on: October 20, 2013, 12:22:01 PM »
Bin tere lamha lamha bas guzar rahi hai ye zindagi,,
Har lamha teri yaado.N ka ghar rahi hai ye zindagi..


Teri chhanv tale din guzra, sham teri baho.N me kati,,
Ab tak to jaise khud se bekhabar rahi hai ye zindagi..

Naa hai koi khwahish bachi, naa dil me koi arzoo,,
Fisle palo.N se phir daman bhar rahi hai ye zindagi..

Dard-e-dil labo.N se kabhi, kabhi aankho.N se aaye,,
Jaane ab sanwar rahi ya bikhar rahi hai ye zindagi..

Dikhaave ke liye jee rahe.N ho jaise sach chhupaye,,
Einto.N ko dhakti, sangmarmar rahi hai ye zindagi..

Kabhi paimane chhalakte the yaha muhabbat ke, ab to,,
Jaise star se apne hi neeche utar rahi hai ye zindagi..!!! Ñ
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Awesomeeeeeeeeeee Ashwani... behtareen peshkash.. sabhi ashaar khoob rahe.. hazaron hazaron daaaaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #5 on: October 20, 2013, 02:04:47 PM »
wha wha bhut khub
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«Reply #6 on: October 20, 2013, 02:51:51 PM »
 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2
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«Reply #7 on: October 20, 2013, 03:43:23 PM »
Dikhaave ke liye jee rahe.N ho jaise sach chhupaye,,
Einto.N ko dhakti, sangmarmar rahi hai ye zindagi..

Kabhi paimane chhalakte the yaha muhabbat ke, ab to,,
Jaise star se apne hi neeche utar rahi hai ye zindagi..!!! Ñ

nashwani ji bahut khooob ek rau pesh-khidmat hai
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«Reply #8 on: October 20, 2013, 06:53:45 PM »
Waah ... jazba e mohabbat ke nasheb o faraaz ka dilchasp bayaan Nashwani ji ... Daad !!
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«Reply #9 on: October 20, 2013, 11:02:21 PM »
bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: October 21, 2013, 01:05:57 AM »
Bin tere lamha lamha bas guzar rahi hai ye zindagi,,
Har lamha teri yaado.N ka ghar rahi hai ye zindagi..


Teri chhanv tale din guzra, sham teri baho.N me kati,,
Ab tak to jaise khud se bekhabar rahi hai ye zindagi..

Naa hai koi khwahish bachi, naa dil me koi arzoo,,
Fisle palo.N se phir daman bhar rahi hai ye zindagi..

Dard-e-dil labo.N se kabhi, kabhi aankho.N se aaye,,
Jaane ab sanwar rahi ya bikhar rahi hai ye zindagi..

Dikhaave ke liye jee rahe.N ho jaise sach chhupaye,,
Einto.N ko dhakti, sangmarmar rahi hai ye zindagi..

Kabhi paimane chhalakte the yaha muhabbat ke, ab to,,
Jaise star se apne hi neeche utar rahi hai ye zindagi..!!! Ñ

 sir, it is astar or star i could not understand




nice composition,sir
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«Reply #11 on: October 25, 2013, 03:40:19 AM »
Aap sabhi ka tahe dil se shukriya..happy9

Yun hi aage bhi sath dete rahiye..happy9
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