boha.t din huye tumko souchaa nahiN thaa,...........

by laaiba on April 27, 2013, 07:38:37 PM
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 'bohat din huye tumko souchaa nahi thaa''

bohat din huye tumko souch nahiN tha
 dil ke saahil pr bikhre huye
yaadon ke palon ko deikhaa nahiN thaa,

jo ashk aankhon mein chuppe thay
apne duppatte ke paloo se
unko poonchaa nahiN tha
bohat din huye tumko souchaa nahi thaa,.......

jis men tum base thay
kitab e dil ke unhee boseeda
pano ko kabhi khoulaa nahiN thaa,

shaam ki dhuNdhlee aankhon men
hijr ki be amaan rutt ne
dard ka surmayee ran.g ghola nahiN tha,
bohat din huye tumko souchaa nahiN thaa
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«Reply #1 on: April 27, 2013, 08:19:55 PM »
Waaah Waaaaah waaaah...

Bahut Hi Khooobsurat Jazbaat..kya Kehne Laaiba Ji..Afsos Hua Ke yeh Nazm Itni Jaldi Khatam Kyun Hi..Kaash Aap Aur Bhi Kuch Likhte...Just Awesomeeeeeeeee...


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«Reply #2 on: April 27, 2013, 08:24:39 PM »
shaam ki dhuNdhlee aankhon men
hijr ki be amaan rutt ne
dard ka surmayee ran.g ghola nahiN tha,
bohat din huye tumko souchaa nahiN thaa

beautiful thoughts
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«Reply #3 on: April 27, 2013, 08:26:35 PM »
bhut  bhut khub nice lines
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«Reply #4 on: April 27, 2013, 08:50:54 PM »
Quote from: khwahish on April 27, 2013, 08:19:55 PM
Waaah Waaaaah waaaah...

Bahut Hi Khooobsurat Jazbaat..kya Kehne Laaiba Ji..Afsos Hua Ke yeh Nazm Itni Jaldi Khatam Kyun Hi..Kaash Aap Aur Bhi Kuch Likhte...Just Awesomeeeeeeeee...


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bohat bohat shookria aapkaa khwaish ji ,..........ji waqt mila to zaroor iska part 2 likhne ki try karoon gi inshallah,......
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«Reply #5 on: April 27, 2013, 08:52:19 PM »
Quote from: mkv on April 27, 2013, 08:24:39 PM
shaam ki dhuNdhlee aankhon men
hijr ki be amaan rutt ne
dard ka surmayee ran.g ghola nahiN tha,
bohat din huye tumko souchaa nahiN thaa

beautiful thoughts
bohat b0hat shukria aapkaa mkv ji,............
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«Reply #6 on: April 27, 2013, 08:53:03 PM »
Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on April 27, 2013, 08:26:35 PM
bhut  bhut khub nice lines
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bohat shukria aapkaa,.............
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«Reply #7 on: April 27, 2013, 09:18:14 PM »
Quote from: laaiba on April 27, 2013, 07:38:37 PM

 'bohat din huye tumko souchaa nahi thaa''

bohat din huye tumko souch nahiN tha
 dil ke saahil pr bikhre huye
yaadon ke palon ko deikhaa nahiN thaa,

jo ashk aankhon mein chuppe thay
apne duppatte ke paloo se
unko poonchaa nahiN tha
bohat din huye tumko souchaa nahi thaa,.......

jis men tum base thay
kitab e dil ke unhee boseeda
pano ko kabhi khoulaa nahiN thaa,

shaam ki dhuNdhlee aankhon men
hijr ki be amaan rutt ne
dard ka surmayee ran.g ghola nahiN tha,
bohat din huye tumko souchaa nahiN thaa


kya khoob nazm kahi hai laaiba ji aapne Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: April 27, 2013, 09:38:26 PM »
Quote from: adil bechain on April 27, 2013, 09:18:14 PM

kya khoob nazm kahi hai laaiba ji aapne Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bohat bohat shukria aapkaa,...........
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«Reply #9 on: April 28, 2013, 12:31:21 AM »
Wah Wah Laaiba!!! Bohat hi khubsurat Nazm kahi hai aap ne!!!! Dil Ku Chhu Gayi!!!

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«Reply #10 on: April 28, 2013, 04:03:50 PM »
Laaibaa Jee Aadaab..!


Kia kahne jee, jis mouzoo O unwaan par aapki yeH nazam hai wohi behad dilfareb hai... aur behad pur asar aur umdaa lafzoN meiN aapne nazm kahi hai.. Usual Smile

Umdaa khayaal nazar aaye aapki is khoobsurat nazm meiN ... humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: April 28, 2013, 04:43:17 PM »
Quote from: laaiba on April 27, 2013, 07:38:37 PM

 'bohat din huye tumko souchaa nahi thaa''

bohat din huye tumko souch nahiN tha
 dil ke saahil pr bikhre huye
yaadon ke palon ko deikhaa nahiN thaa,

jo ashk aankhon mein chuppe thay
apne duppatte ke paloo se
unko poonchaa nahiN tha
bohat din huye tumko souchaa nahi thaa,.......

jis men tum base thay
kitab e dil ke unhee boseeda
pano ko kabhi khoulaa nahiN thaa,

shaam ki dhuNdhlee aankhon men
hijr ki be amaan rutt ne
dard ka surmayee ran.g ghola nahiN tha,
bohat din huye tumko souchaa nahiN thaa

wah wah wah laaiba bahut khoob nazm se nawaaza hai ji............!
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«Reply #12 on: April 28, 2013, 06:02:51 PM »
waah ma'am bahut khoob likha hai..happy9
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«Reply #13 on: April 28, 2013, 06:17:49 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: April 29, 2013, 12:52:50 PM »
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kya baat laaiba ji. badi pyaari nazm kahi hai aapne. bahut bahut khoob.dheron daad.
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