Bohot dushwaar hai jeena.....!!!!

by Talat on November 14, 2008, 01:49:46 PM
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«Reply #30 on: November 18, 2008, 03:14:25 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on November 17, 2008, 02:31:39 PM
Bahut Bahut Khoob!!! Yo Par Aate hi aapka likha padha..

sach maaniye, aapne bahut khoobsurti se aur saral akhsaro mein itni khobbsurat poetry likhi hai..bahut ache Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thank You so much Khwaish ...aapne is koshish ko nawaza...bohot bohot shukriya dost Usual Smile
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«Reply #31 on: November 18, 2008, 03:15:38 PM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on November 17, 2008, 03:45:11 PM
Bohat Khoob Celmira Ji,.
Sayyid Bhaijaan,.
Nice One,.

Thank You Azeem, aapne ise padha aur saraha
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«Reply #32 on: November 18, 2008, 03:17:01 PM »
Quote from: Celmira on November 18, 2008, 03:14:25 PM
Thank You so much Khwaish ...aapne is koshish ko nawaza...bohot bohot shukriya dost Usual Smile

Shukriya aapka talat, jo aapne humein itni achi poetry padhne ka mauka diya..thankyou  icon_salut
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«Reply #33 on: November 18, 2008, 03:18:24 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on November 17, 2008, 07:32:58 PM

Uffff itne ache threads kaise miss ho jaate hai.... wah kaya baat hai... ek ek shabd dil likha sidha dil ko chu gaya!! bahoot khoob Celmira... Applause Applause Applause

Pooja humari khushkismati hai ki aap humara likha nazar main rakhti hain, warna hum main to aisi koi baat nahin....Thank You so much Usual Smile
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«Reply #34 on: November 18, 2008, 03:20:49 PM »
Quote from: bekarar on November 17, 2008, 09:41:10 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahoot behtreen likh hai talat......daad hazir hai..
aur randeri sahab ke jawab ne to dil choo liya..wah wah

Sanjeev...aapka shukriya kaise ada karun....aapki nazron main is mamooli koshish ne jagah paayi... Usual Smile
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«Reply #35 on: November 18, 2008, 03:22:19 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on November 18, 2008, 03:17:01 PM
Shukriya aapka talat, jo aapne humein itni achi poetry padhne ka mauka diya..thankyou  icon_salut

Usual Smile

Aap yunhi padhte rahiyega, hausla dete rahiyega..warna aisa to kuch nahin...bas kuch lafz hain, kuch baatain hain ...Thank You Khwaish
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«Reply #36 on: November 18, 2008, 03:40:47 PM »
Quote from: Celmira on November 18, 2008, 03:22:19 PM
Usual Smile

Aap yunhi padhte rahiyega, hausla dete rahiyega..warna aisa to kuch nahin...bas kuch lafz hain, kuch baatain hain ...Thank You Khwaish

Jaanta hoon ke yeh chit-chat section nahi par, har ek poetry jo dil se likhi jaati hai, uska har ek lafz, apne hisse ki zindagi jeeta hai..
aur aapne jo likha, har ek lafz kuch keh raha tha..bahut acha likha hai aapne icon_salut
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«Reply #37 on: November 18, 2008, 03:51:27 PM »
Quote from: Celmira on November 18, 2008, 02:52:27 PM
Abd Ji,
Aap ne mujhe jo apnapan diya hai, uske liye main apne aap ko bohot khushkismat samajhti hoon...Thans for all the affection and respect you gave to me...Pata nahin main iss ke qaabil hoon ya nahin.
Celmira ji!
You deserve higher acclaims and respect than what are being showered upon you! Thanks!
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«Reply #38 on: November 24, 2008, 02:27:08 PM »
Jeena Uske Bin, Ab Hume Gawaara Nahi,.
Kitne Log Hain Yahaan, Par Koi Hamaara Nahi,.

Kaisi Khudaai Hai Teri Ya Rab,.
Samamder Diya Mujhe Tairne, Magar Diya Koi Kinaara Nahi,.

__________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #39 on: November 24, 2008, 03:49:47 PM »
Jaanasheen ji!
Bahr hain, 'abd', kinaarey zaroor hongey wahaan!
Door hongey? Iseeliye nazar naheen aatey!!
Aasmaan kee taraf nazar to uthhaaou: dekhou,
Gaa rahey kitney parindey, idhar-udhar jaatey!!
                                 - and bundeli
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«Reply #40 on: November 24, 2008, 04:15:44 PM »
celmira ji,

bahut umda shaayri.aap ne atyant prabhaavshali rachna ki.

saayid jee,

khoob likha hey aapne...kuch meri urdu kamzor hein..pur jitna samjha utna paaya.

jaansheen ji aur abd ji,

bahut khhob .
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«Reply #41 on: November 24, 2008, 05:57:08 PM »
nice work lil bro, apki yah llines such main dil chu gai.. bahoot gahri baat kahi hai apne:

Kaisi Khudaai Hai Teri Ya Rab,.
Samamder Diya Mujhe Tairne, Magar Diya Koi Kinaara Nahi,.


Bahoot he sahi jawab likha hai apne Abd ji!!
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«Reply #42 on: November 25, 2008, 03:54:49 AM »
Prateek Mardia ji/Pooja ji!
Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
           - abd bundeli
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«Reply #43 on: November 25, 2008, 06:39:53 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on November 24, 2008, 05:57:08 PM
nice work lil bro, apki yah llines such main dil chu gai.. bahoot gahri baat kahi hai apne:

Kaisi Khudaai Hai Teri Ya Rab,.
Samamder Diya Mujhe Tairne, Magar Diya Koi Kinaara Nahi,.


Bahoot he sahi jawab likha hai apne Abd ji!!



Pooja Ji,
Aap nay khoob kaha.... isi mazmoon pay mera aik sher hay

Khud ku behlanay ki deir hoti hay
Phir Khuda bhe Khuda Nahi rehta

Niaz mund..
Sajid Hadayat
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«Reply #44 on: November 25, 2008, 06:44:25 PM »
maine nahi jaansheen ji ne likhi hai yah lines Sajid Hadayat ji.
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