Bohot dushwaar hai jeena.....!!!!

by Talat on November 14, 2008, 01:49:46 PM
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«Reply #45 on: November 25, 2008, 11:53:12 PM »
maine nahi jaansheen ji ne likhi hai yah lines Sajid Hadayat ji.

Tu bohat khoob jansheen ji...

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«Reply #46 on: November 29, 2008, 11:04:38 AM »
nice work lil bro, apki yah llines such main dil chu gai.. bahoot gahri baat kahi hai apne:

Kaisi Khudaai Hai Teri Ya Rab,.
Samamder Diya Mujhe Tairne, Magar Diya Koi Kinaara Nahi,.


Bahoot he sahi jawab likha hai apne Abd ji!!



Shukriya Didi Jaan,.
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«Reply #47 on: February 03, 2009, 05:59:19 PM »
Celmira ji!
You deserve higher acclaims and respect than what are being showered upon you! Thanks!
                    - abd bundeli


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«Reply #48 on: February 03, 2009, 06:00:02 PM »
Jaanta hoon ke yeh chit-chat section nahi par, har ek poetry jo dil se likhi jaati hai, uska har ek lafz, apne hisse ki zindagi jeeta hai..
aur aapne jo likha, har ek lafz kuch keh raha tha..bahut acha likha hai aapne icon_salut


Ek baar phirse shukriya dost
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«Reply #49 on: February 03, 2009, 06:00:40 PM »
Jeena Uske Bin, Ab Hume Gawaara Nahi,.
Kitne Log Hain Yahaan, Par Koi Hamaara Nahi,.

Kaisi Khudaai Hai Teri Ya Rab,.
Samamder Diya Mujhe Tairne, Magar Diya Koi Kinaara Nahi,.

__________________________-Jaanasheen-



Bohot Khoob Janasheen
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«Reply #50 on: February 03, 2009, 06:02:08 PM »

Jaanasheen ji!
Bahr hain, 'abd', kinaarey zaroor hongey wahaan!
Door hongey? Iseeliye nazar naheen aatey!!
Aasmaan kee taraf nazar to uthhaaou: dekhou,
Gaa rahey kitney parindey, idhar-udhar jaatey!!

                                 - and bundeli

Bohot achcha jawab diya hai apne Janasheen ko Abd Ji Bohot Khoob.
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«Reply #51 on: February 03, 2009, 06:05:18 PM »
celmira ji,

bahut umda shaayri.aap ne atyant prabhaavshali rachna ki.

saayid jee,

khoob likha hey aapne...kuch meri urdu kamzor hein..pur jitna samjha utna paaya.

jaansheen ji aur abd ji,

bahut khhob .

Prateek Ji...bohot bohot shukriya aap ko ye rachna pasand aayi.




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«Reply #52 on: February 03, 2009, 06:06:39 PM »
Bohot Khoob Janasheen

Shukriya Talat Did,.
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«Reply #53 on: February 03, 2009, 06:07:38 PM »

Khud ku behlanay ki deir hoti hay
Phir Khuda bhe Khuda Nahi rehta

Niaz mund..
Sajid Hadayat

Bohot Khoob kaha hai Sajid Ji
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«Reply #54 on: February 03, 2009, 06:15:49 PM »
Bohot din baad kuch likha hai...Pasand aaye to likhna, na aaye to bhi likhna ...!!!

 Applause Applause Applause

Bohat khoobsurat likha hai Celmira sis .....
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«Reply #55 on: February 03, 2009, 06:20:24 PM »
Ya Rab Mujhe Maut De, Magar Aisi Zindagi Na De,.
Jalaa De Mujhe Agar Wo Meri Kismat Mein Nahi,
Zinda Rakhke Mujhe Lachaar Na Kar, Bebasi Na De,.

Bohat Mushkil Hai, Dard-e-Mohabbat Sehna Yahaan,.
Tu Sabko Maut De De, Magar Kabhi Aashiqui Na De,.

_______________________-Jaanasheen-

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«Reply #56 on: February 03, 2009, 06:22:14 PM »
Applause Applause Applause

Bohat khoobsurat likha hai Celmira sis .....


Thanks a lot Honey sis
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«Reply #57 on: February 03, 2009, 06:23:20 PM »
Ya Rab Mujhe Maut De, Magar Aisi Zindagi Na De,.
Jalaa De Mujhe Agar Wo Meri Kismat Mein Nahi,
Zinda Rakhke Mujhe Lachaar Na Kar, Bebasi Na De,.

Bohat Mushkil Hai, Dard-e-Mohabbat Sehna Yahaan,.
Tu Sabko Maut De De, Magar Kabhi Aashiqui Na De,.

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Very nice lines Janasheen
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«Reply #58 on: February 03, 2009, 06:25:11 PM »
Shukriya Talat Didi,.
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«Reply #59 on: February 04, 2009, 10:40:33 PM »
Bohot Khoob kaha hai Sajid Ji

Shukria Celmira ji...

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