Bohot Mohabbat hai Tumse ........... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

by Talat on July 04, 2005, 02:52:04 PM
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Sab jaanti hoon magar phir bhi ...
Kyun tumko bhula nahin paati....
Is dil se teri tasveer hata nahin paati....
Muskurane ki koshish karti hoon lekin
Ankhon ke motiyon ko chupa nahin paati...

Jab sochti hoon ki ...
Tum ho kisi aur ka muqaddar
Jalan si hoti jise mita nahin paati....

Jab barasta hai saawan toot ke kahin...
Yeh aankhain bhi ek dariya bahati hain....
Sulagti hai rooh teri ek jhalak ko.....
Is khwaaish se main dil ko bacha nahin paati...!!!
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thycreator
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«Reply #1 on: July 04, 2005, 03:00:21 PM »
Wah Talat ji...........bahut khusurat.........jawab dunga jaldi hi...........abhi jaldi mein hu.....
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Talat
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«Reply #2 on: July 04, 2005, 03:02:04 PM »
Thanks Amit............... !!!! Will wait for reply !!!!!!!!
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Meena
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«Reply #3 on: July 04, 2005, 03:45:00 PM »
talat kuddiye i just love ur shayari!!!!!!! bohot hi acha likha hai tumne... well done!!!!!!!

lakh koshishe ki par unko bhula nahin pate,
unke bina jeena dil ko sikha nahin pate,
ke meri ankhon me aab tak basi hai tasweer unki,
shayad issliye hum judao me bhi ashk baha nahin pate!!!
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thycreator
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«Reply #4 on: July 04, 2005, 04:53:35 PM »
Dard se mera rista bahut purana lagta hai,
Yahi hai ek apna,aur sab begana lagta hai,
Ek muddat hui khushi mujhe chu kar nahi gayi,
Muskurahat ki bat suno toh ek afsana lagta hai...
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«Reply #5 on: July 04, 2005, 04:53:39 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Sab jaanti hoon magar phir bhi ...
Kyun tumko bhula nahin paati....
Is dil se teri tasveer hata nahin paati....
Muskurane ki koshish karti hoon lekin
Ankhon ke motiyon ko chupa nahin paati...

Jab sochti hoon ki ...
Tum ho kisi aur ka muqaddar
Jalan si hoti jise mita nahin paati....

Jab barasta hai saawan toot ke kahin...
Yeh aankhain bhi ek dariya bahati hain....
Sulagti hai rooh teri ek jhalak ko.....
Is khwaaish se main dil ko bacha nahin paati...!!!


bohat dard bhara,bohat touching likhti hain aap Talat,love ur work soo muchhhh.....!!!!!!!

Very nice meena sis Usual Smile
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Talat
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«Reply #6 on: July 04, 2005, 06:31:36 PM »
Thank you so much Meena.....Nidhi...bohot bohot shukriya..sarahne ka...jab dil ka dard barhta hai..alfaaz ban jaate hain !!!!!

Very nice Meena and Amit Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: July 04, 2005, 07:24:48 PM »
Quote from: "thycreator"
Dard se mera rista bahut purana lagta hai,
Yahi hai ek apna,aur sab begana lagta hai,
Ek muddat hui khushi mujhe chu kar nahi gayi,
Muskurahat ki bat suno toh ek afsana lagta hai...


aaj fir woh hume yaad aaye
hosh aaya ki mudadte hogayi muskuraye...
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #8 on: July 04, 2005, 07:33:05 PM »
Very nice meena and thy........good good
and Talat ji damn good...

"Jab sochti hoon ki ...
Tum ho kisi aur ka muqaddar
Jalan si hoti jise mita nahin paati"......yeh to dil ko chuu gayaa......aur kuch yaad bhi aa gayaa.........NICE work!!!!
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«Reply #9 on: July 04, 2005, 07:45:58 PM »
Quote from: "isha_verma7"
Very nice meena and thy........good good
and Talat ji damn good...

"Jab sochti hoon ki ...
Tum ho kisi aur ka muqaddar
Jalan si hoti jise mita nahin paati"......yeh to dil ko chuu gayaa......aur kuch yaad bhi aa gayaa.........NICE work!!!!
yuin muzko samaz ker kisi ka muqadder
apni zindagi se kyuin leti ho intqaam,
amanat ke tour pe pada hai dil wahi
jahaan chot tum pal-pal diya kiye.
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #10 on: July 04, 2005, 08:35:52 PM »
Good Job ................................................. ....................Talat
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Aryaan
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«Reply #11 on: July 04, 2005, 10:06:46 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Sab jaanti hoon magar phir bhi ...
Kyun tumko bhula nahin paati....
Is dil se teri tasveer hata nahin paati....
Muskurane ki koshish karti hoon lekin
Ankhon ke motiyon ko chupa nahin paati...

Jab sochti hoon ki ...
Tum ho kisi aur ka muqaddar
Jalan si hoti jise mita nahin paati....

Jab barasta hai saawan toot ke kahin...
Yeh aankhain bhi ek dariya bahati hain....
Sulagti hai rooh teri ek jhalak ko.....
Is khwaaish se main dil ko bacha nahin paati...!!!

Excellent Talat..... Bohat khoob...
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Talat
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«Reply #12 on: July 05, 2005, 07:11:57 AM »
Quote from: "isha_verma7"
Very nice meena and thy........good good
and Talat ji damn good...

"Jab sochti hoon ki ...
Tum ho kisi aur ka muqaddar
Jalan si hoti jise mita nahin paati"......yeh to dil ko chuu gayaa......aur kuch yaad bhi aa gayaa.........NICE work!!!!


Thank you so much Isha ..... !!!!!!!
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Talat
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«Reply #13 on: July 05, 2005, 07:13:16 AM »
Thanks a lot Aryaan ....Harashmahajan.... and Fakhar.... !!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #14 on: July 05, 2005, 12:42:09 PM »
good work talat n all

pathar se hi mager akeedat bani rahe
khuda se gunehgaro ki murawat bani rahe
ranjish kitni bhi gahri ho, dushmani laakh rahe
mager itni ki mel milap ki surat bani rahe
ishk jab ker hi liya hai mere yar tune
dua ye mang ki umer bher muhabbat bani rahe
ranjishe hum dono ki khatam ho jaati mager
kuch apne hi chahte hai ki nafrat bani rahe
pyar me ruswai zaroori hai, lazim bhi sanam
tum sochte ho ki pahli si izzat bani rahe
khushyan thi chaar di ki, ghum hai umer bher ka
ghum hi sahi zindai me kuch lazzat bani rahe
chahta to mana leta main apne roothe sanam ko
umer bher use koi to shikayat bani rahe
use pa leta "azaad' to kya rah jata phir
jeene ke liye dil me koi to hasrat bani rahe

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