Bohot Mohabbat hai Tumse ........... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

by Talat on July 04, 2005, 02:52:04 PM
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Talat
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«Reply #15 on: July 05, 2005, 02:54:01 PM »
Thanks Sam.......... aur bohot achche Sam !!!!!!!!!!!!
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nikki
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«Reply #16 on: July 05, 2005, 03:02:48 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Sab jaanti hoon magar phir bhi ...
Kyun tumko bhula nahin paati....
Is dil se teri tasveer hata nahin paati....
Muskurane ki koshish karti hoon lekin
Ankhon ke motiyon ko chupa nahin paati...

Jab sochti hoon ki ...
Tum ho kisi aur ka muqaddar
Jalan si hoti jise mita nahin paati....

Jab barasta hai saawan toot ke kahin...
Yeh aankhain bhi ek dariya bahati hain....
Sulagti hai rooh teri ek jhalak ko.....
Is khwaaish se main dil ko bacha nahin paati...!!!


hameshan ki tarah...Bahut hi acha likha hai aapne Talat sis.............

woh pal bhar mein mujhse door nikal gaya
dekhte hi dekhte meri tammanaon ka suarj bhi dhal gaya

abb to koi khawaish hi nahi rahi
tujhe kissi aur ke sang dekhun
isse pehle khuda mujhe iss duniya se uthaye

jo ghav diye hain tune mujhe mohabbat mein
rab na kare unka aadha.. zakhm bhi tu paye
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pandit
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«Reply #17 on: July 05, 2005, 03:05:40 PM »
bahut acchaa nikki ji.............................................
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Talat
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«Reply #18 on: July 05, 2005, 03:10:35 PM »
Thanks Nikki......... !! Aur bohot achcha likha hai...!!!

Sambhaal rahi hoon khud ko dheere dhere
Raaton main magar takiye bhigoti hoon.....
Ankhain band karti hoon to tasveer dikhti hai ek
Yaad karke tumhe main bohot roti hoon......
Jaane kaisa ehsaas hota hai har lamha mujhe
Ek pal tumhe paati hoon aur ek pal khoti hoon.... !!!
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pandit
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«Reply #19 on: July 05, 2005, 03:15:00 PM »
bahut hi dardnaak hai talat ji,........
tumse bichad k jiye to khaak jiye,
taa umra tarsenge tere saath k liye,
un jee rahe hai ki koi chahat nahi hai,
buss aankhe taras rahi hai tere deedaar k liye.
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nikki
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«Reply #20 on: July 05, 2005, 03:18:19 PM »
thanx Pandit n Talat sis..........
i m speechless sis....................
fir bhi try karungi....

judayi to judayi...yahan ruswayi bhi milti hai
yeh woh gulaab hai jo be-mausam nahi khilta

pyar naseeb mein nahi hota har kissi ke
yeh bina kismat ke nahi milta
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Talat
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«Reply #21 on: July 05, 2005, 03:19:28 PM »
Shukriya Pandit sad5 aapne bhi bohot dard bhara likha hai !!! N Nikki bohot hi achcha likha hai !!! Nice one !!
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pandit
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«Reply #22 on: July 05, 2005, 03:21:41 PM »
thanx talat ................................................. ...............
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nikki
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«Reply #23 on: July 05, 2005, 03:42:45 PM »
thanx Talat sis.............................................. .............
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Talat
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«Reply #24 on: July 09, 2005, 09:04:24 PM »
Judaai mili hai taumr ke liye hume
Dukh magar ye hai ki mile bhi na the
Khuda jaane kis safar hai ab ye zindagi
Usse pehle zindagi se gile bhi na the !!!!
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nikki
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«Reply #25 on: July 09, 2005, 10:27:23 PM »
nice one again sis.....

jab mohabbat ki to jaana
kya cheez judayi hoti hai
kyun dil khoon ke aanson rota hai
kya bala tanhayi hoti hai...

dil par jor nahi chalta...yeh sambhale bhi nahi sambhalta
har pal har dum kare ek hi baat....bahut mohabbat hai tumse..
tumhare liye hi hain mere dil ke woh pyar bhare jazbaat
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Talat
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«Reply #26 on: July 17, 2005, 07:40:53 AM »
Thanks and Very Nice Nikki .............. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #27 on: July 17, 2005, 09:33:44 AM »
Quote from: "nikki"
Quote from: "Talat"
Sab jaanti hoon magar phir bhi ...
Kyun tumko bhula nahin paati....
Is dil se teri tasveer hata nahin paati....
Muskurane ki koshish karti hoon lekin
Ankhon ke motiyon ko chupa nahin paati...

Jab sochti hoon ki ...
Tum ho kisi aur ka muqaddar
Jalan si hoti jise mita nahin paati....

Jab barasta hai saawan toot ke kahin...
Yeh aankhain bhi ek dariya bahati hain....
Sulagti hai rooh teri ek jhalak ko.....
Is khwaaish se main dil ko bacha nahin paati...!!!


hameshan ki tarah...Bahut hi acha likha hai aapne Talat sis.............

woh pal bhar mein mujhse door nikal gaya
dekhte hi dekhte meri tammanaon ka suarj bhi dhal gaya

abb to koi khawaish hi nahi rahi
tujhe kissi aur ke sang dekhun
isse pehle khuda mujhe iss duniya se uthaye

jo ghav diye hain tune mujhe mohabbat mein
rab na kare unka aadha.. zakhm bhi tu paye


lovely nikki sis,especially the last two lines,and excellent Talat as well.

"Na apna bana sake tujhe is janam me ham,
      par tu kabhi mujhse juda thha hi nahi,
      teri nazar me main chahe jo bhi rahi hoon,
      tu thha,aur rahega hamesha "nidhi" ka hi."
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thycreator
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«Reply #28 on: July 17, 2005, 09:52:38 AM »
Good work all of you...................

Dil todne ka sabab jo poocha uss se maine,
Wo muskra kar boli ye haseeno ki ada hai,
Maine poocha ki kya karu iss dil ka mai bhala,
Uska kehna hai k yahi mere dil dene ki saza hai...
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Aryaan
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«Reply #29 on: July 17, 2005, 01:03:57 PM »
Nice Ones Talat, Nikki, thycreator & Nidh.......
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