Bohot tanha hoon main!!!!

by Talat on February 10, 2005, 05:07:07 PM
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Talat
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Yeh mere zehan se yaadon ke diye gul kar do
Mere ehsaas ki duniya ko mita do humdum
Raat taare nahi angaare liye aati hai
In baraste huye sholon ko bujha do humdum
Dil ki dharkan ko sula jaao bohot tanhaa hoon!!!!!

Andheri raat main jab chaand khilne lagta hai
Tumhare pyar ke depak jala ke roti hoon
Tumhare aane ki jab aas jaane lagti hai
Main in chiraghon ko khud hi bujha ke roti hoon
Zindagi aisi mita jao bahot tanha hoon

Sochte sochte jab soch bhi mar jaati hai
Waqt ke qadmon ki aahat ko suna karti hoon
Ashk thamte hain to aahon ka dhuaan uthta hai
Raat bhar yoon hi tarapti hoon jala karti hoon
Baar-e-gham kuch to ghata jaao bohot tanha hoon!!!!!


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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #1 on: February 10, 2005, 05:11:26 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Yeh mere zehan se yaadon ke diye gul kar do
Mere ehsaas ki duniya ko mita do humdum
Raat taare nahi angaare liye aati hai
In baraste huye sholon ko bujha do humdum
Dil ki dharkan ko sula jaao bohot tanhaa hoon!!!!!

Andheri raat main jab chaand khilne lagta hai
Tumhare pyar ke depak jala ke roti hoon
Tumhare aane ki jab aas jaane lagti hai
Main in chiraghon ko khud hi bujha ke roti hoon
Zindagi aisi mita jao bahot tanha hoon

Sochte sochte jab soch bhi mar jaati hai
Waqt ke qadmon ki aahat ko suna karti hoon
Ashk thamte hain to aahon ka dhuaan uthta hai
Raat bhar yoon hi tarapti hoon jala karti hoon
Baar-e-gham kuch to ghata jaao bohot tanha hoon!!!!!


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wah!!!!!!!!!!1   talat.........second  stanza  bahot touching  hai.........  bahot  hi deep  hai............  excellent.............  
waise  to  poori  ghazal  bahot pyari hai ...........
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HumTum
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«Reply #2 on: February 10, 2005, 05:13:51 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Yeh mere zehan se yaadon ke diye gul kar do
Mere ehsaas ki duniya ko mita do humdum
Raat taare nahi angaare liye aati hai
In baraste huye sholon ko bujha do humdum
Dil ki dharkan ko sula jaao bohot tanhaa hoon!!!!!

Andheri raat main jab chaand khilne lagta hai
Tumhare pyar ke depak jala ke roti hoon
Tumhare aane ki jab aas jaane lagti hai
Main in chiraghon ko khud hi bujha ke roti hoon
Zindagi aisi mita jao bahot tanha hoon

Sochte sochte jab soch bhi mar jaati hai
Waqt ke qadmon ki aahat ko suna karti hoon
Ashk thamte hain to aahon ka dhuaan uthta hai
Raat bhar yoon hi tarapti hoon jala karti hoon
Baar-e-gham kuch to ghata jaao bohot tanha hoon!!!!!


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nice ..... talat ji....
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Talat
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«Reply #3 on: February 10, 2005, 05:14:58 PM »
Thank You Waheed n Humtum...

Its my favourite poetry  :-(
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Meena
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«Reply #4 on: February 10, 2005, 05:22:53 PM »
wah talat sis! bohot achi hai!

 :D
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: February 10, 2005, 05:33:13 PM »
Thanks Meenu happy9
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Aryaan
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«Reply #6 on: February 11, 2005, 01:49:21 AM »
wah  Talat.. bohat hi khubsoorat likha hai aap ne...
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #7 on: February 11, 2005, 06:56:59 AM »
ur welcome  talat.............  :lol:
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Delicate_Doll
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«Reply #8 on: February 11, 2005, 08:47:07 AM »
nice talat Usual Smile
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abhishek_gaurav
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«Reply #9 on: February 11, 2005, 09:34:47 AM »
bahut khub talat ji......
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Talat
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«Reply #10 on: February 11, 2005, 04:00:40 PM »
Thanks Aryaan Salma n Abhishek!!
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Talat
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«Reply #11 on: February 11, 2005, 04:01:49 PM »
wohi ek baat jo sab se chupai
usi ek baat ka charcha bohot hai
 
meri khwahish kabhi puri na hogi
mujhe is baat ka sadma bohot hai
 
kisi ko bhoolna mumkin nahi hai
warna hum ne to chaaha bohot hai
 
kahan tak aur mera saath dega wo
pehle hi yahan ruswa bohot hai
 
tere jaisa koi milta nahi hai
tere jaisa magar dhoonda bohot hai
 
chalo ab mout ka samaan kar len
ke jeena to yahan mehnga bohot hai
 
wo mere paas kab thehra hai GHALIB
jo mere paas say guzra bohot hai !!!
 

(Mirza Ghalib)
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Aryaan
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«Reply #12 on: February 11, 2005, 07:11:46 PM »
It's Beautiful  Talat.....
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Talat
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«Reply #13 on: February 12, 2005, 05:17:15 AM »
Thanks Aryaan tongue3
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #14 on: February 12, 2005, 05:34:37 AM »
tanha dil ki batain tnha dil s poucho
kaise ktti hain ratein mujh s tum poucho
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