buhut udass hoon mein......

by nice_off_me on May 02, 2005, 05:19:59 AM
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nice_off_me
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mujhe gale se laga lo buhut udass hoon mein

gum-e-jaha se chura lo buhut udass hoon mein

ye intezaar ka dukh ab saha nahi jata

tadap rahi hoon mohbbat raha nahi jata

tum apne pass bola lo buhut udass hoon mein

har ek saans mein milne ki pyass palti hai

sulag rahi hai badan aur rooh jalti hai

bacha sako tu bachalo buhut udass hoon mein

bhatak chuki hoon buhut zindagi ki rahoon mein

mujhe ab aake chupa lo tum apni bahoon mein

mera sawal na taloo buhut udass hoon mein

mujhe gale se laga lo buhut udass hoon mein

(n/m)

unforgetable simran
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #1 on: May 03, 2005, 03:19:36 PM »
Quote from: "nice_off_me"
mujhe gale se laga lo buhut udass hoon mein

gum-e-jaha se chura lo buhut udass hoon mein

ye intezaar ka dukh ab saha nahi jata

tadap rahi hoon mohbbat raha nahi jata

tum apne pass bola lo buhut udass hoon mein

har ek saans mein milne ki pyass palti hai

sulag rahi hai badan aur rooh jalti hai

bacha sako tu bachalo buhut udass hoon mein

bhatak chuki hoon buhut zindagi ki rahoon mein

mujhe ab aake chupa lo tum apni bahoon mein

mera sawal na taloo buhut udass hoon mein

mujhe gale se laga lo buhut udass hoon mein

(n/m)

unforgetable simran
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


wah!!!!!!!!!!!!!  bahot khoob  simmi...............very  nice.............
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Amanush...
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«Reply #2 on: May 03, 2005, 06:52:23 PM »
Toumko paaya to bana koyi shaks khaas houn mein
ek khwaab hai ye sochkar bahout oudaas houn mein


Amanush...
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apnaa_koi
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«Reply #3 on: May 03, 2005, 07:22:49 PM »
Heart Felt Simran... aur Amanush apkaa aksher bhi achaa lagaa

Always Anjli
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Aman_rahi
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«Reply #4 on: May 04, 2005, 06:40:22 AM »
Simran.....

shukriya aapka ki itna aacha kalaam humare saath share karne ke liye......

sholon pe chalte hain koi aas nahi.....
tere saath nahi hai to bahut udaas ho main.....
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nice_off_me
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«Reply #5 on: May 04, 2005, 08:47:22 AM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"

wah!!!!!!!!!!!!!  bahot khoob  simmi...............very  nice.............[/quote


thanx alot waheed for liking it and supporting me
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nice_off_me
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«Reply #6 on: May 04, 2005, 08:48:27 AM »
Quote from: "Amanush..."
Toumko paaya to bana koyi shaks khaas houn mein
ek khwaab hai ye sochkar bahout oudaas houn mein


Amanush...


thanx Amanush for liking the post aur apki shayri bhi buhut achi lagi aise hi padte rahiyega aur likhte ahiyega
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nice_off_me
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«Reply #7 on: May 04, 2005, 08:49:19 AM »
Quote from: "apnaa_koi"
Heart Felt Simran... aur Amanush apkaa aksher bhi achaa lagaa

Always Anjli


its my glad tht u like the post thank you for replying it
likhte rahiyega aur padte rahiyega...
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nice_off_me
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«Reply #8 on: May 04, 2005, 08:50:33 AM »
Quote from: "Aman_rahi"
Simran.....

shukriya aapka ki itna aacha kalaam humare saath share karne ke liye......

sholon pe chalte hain koi aas nahi.....
tere saath nahi hai to bahut udaas ho main.....


shukriya aman ki apko nazm pasand aayi
padte rahiyega aur likhte rahiyega....
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