Bujhti Hui Zindagi,.

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«Reply #15 on: July 02, 2009, 05:10:37 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Azeem..Vaakai Zabardast Kalaam hia Aur Akhri Sher Par To Hazaaro Daad..Bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #16 on: July 04, 2009, 11:08:11 AM »


 
karte hain ibaadat bhi, matlab se log
Jhooti main sabki, bandagi dekhta hoon....


bahot khoob.... very nice words...

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«Reply #17 on: July 04, 2009, 11:11:14 AM »
Bahut achhe Azeem... Really very well written Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #18 on: July 04, 2009, 11:12:57 AM »
Azeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeem Bhai.. Kya Kahun Dost... Dard Bhare Alfaazon ke sath sath Succhai Likh Di hai aapne.. Last Jumla apne aap me Poori ek Gazal hai dost.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooooob.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #19 on: July 04, 2009, 11:15:44 AM »
Bohot Khoob Azeem Applause
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Azeem. bahoot hi Khubsurat likha hai.. Very well expressed!

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«Reply #20 on: July 04, 2009, 11:20:07 AM »
bahut zabardast ghazal likhi hai
har sher bemisaal hai
daad kabool kijiye

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«Reply #21 on: July 04, 2009, 11:23:42 AM »
Wah wah Azeem bhai,excellent,very beautiful creation. Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #22 on: July 04, 2009, 11:25:46 AM »
bahut bahut umda likha hai Azeem
bahut dard hai aapke is kalaam mein...

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«Reply #23 on: July 04, 2009, 11:28:09 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Azeem..Vaakai Zabardast Kalaam hia Aur Akhri Sher Par To Hazaaro Daad..Bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shukriya, Khwaish Bhai, KHushi Hui Ke Aapko Hamaari Koshish Pasand Aai,.
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«Reply #24 on: July 06, 2009, 11:51:53 AM »

 NICE AZEEM SAHAB Applause
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«Reply #25 on: July 06, 2009, 12:14:19 PM »



Sitaaron Ki Jab Roshni Dekhta Hoon,.
Bujhi Hui Apni Zindagi Dekhta Hoon,.

Hota Hoon Jab Bhi Barbaad Main,
Doston Ke Chehron Pe Khushi Dekhta Hoon,.

Ab Kahaan Hai Kisi Ko Mohabat Kisi Se,.
Bikti Hui Har Taraf Aashiqui Dekhta Hoon,.

Karte Hain Ibaadat Bhi Matlab Se Log,.
Jhooti Main Sabki Bandagi Dekhta Hoon,.

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Waah waaah!! Kya baat hai!! bahut khoob!!

Matlab ki yeh duniya hai,
Yahan kaun kisi ka hota hai!
Dhokha bhi Un hi se milta hai,
Jinka ki bharosa Hota hai!
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«Reply #26 on: July 07, 2009, 03:41:28 AM »
NICE AZEEM SAHAB Applause

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Aur Welcome To Yoindia,.
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«Reply #27 on: July 07, 2009, 03:42:38 AM »

Waah waaah!! Kya baat hai!! bahut khoob!!

Matlab ki yeh duniya hai,
Yahan kaun kisi ka hota hai!
Dhokha bhi Un hi se milta hai,
Jinka ki bharosa Hota hai!


Shukriya Lovestone JI, Aur Nice LInes,.
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«Reply #28 on: July 07, 2009, 04:23:25 AM »



Sitaaron Ki Jab Roshni Dekhta Hoon,.
Bujhi Hui Apni Zindagi Dekhta Hoon,.

Hota Hoon Jab Bhi Barbaad Main,
Doston Ke Chehron Pe Khushi Dekhta Hoon,.

Ab Kahaan Hai Kisi Ko Mohabat Kisi Se,.
Bikti Hui Har Taraf Aashiqui Dekhta Hoon,.

Karte Hain Ibaadat Bhi Matlab Se Log,.
Jhooti Main Sabki Bandagi Dekhta Hoon,.

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Bahut khoob likha hai aap ne Chote Bhai

Badi laur ki roshni jala rakkhe ho
Phir bhi zindagi ko bujhi dekhte ho
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«Reply #29 on: July 07, 2009, 04:31:08 AM »
Bahut khoob likha hai aap ne Chote Bhai

Badi laur ki roshni jala rakkhe ho
Phir bhi zindagi ko bujhi dekhte ho

Shakriya Bhai,.

Sulagti Ye Apni Zindagi Hai, Ye Mujhe Ujaala Kya Degi,.
Roshni Paane Ki Hasrat Liye, Mom Bankar Pighal Raha Hoon Main,.
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