Bulbul ke geet huye bemani.............mann

by mann.mann on August 06, 2013, 07:54:10 PM
Pages: [1] 2  All
Print
Author  (Read 1347 times)
mann.mann
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 113
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
22 days, 12 hours and 36 minutes.
Posts: 3703
Member Since: Aug 2011


View Profile
Bulbul ke geet huye bemani.
Dil ki jab baat na gul ne jani.

Bematlab ab yahan pe kyon rahna,
Chhod jane ki ab hamne thhani.

Khel khel main ye gham laga baithe,
Bhari khud pe pad rahi hai nadani.

Geet hamne gham ke saikdon gaye,
Duniyan rahi is gham se anjani.

Mahfil main ”mann” ab kis tarah jayen,
Aankhon main liye baithe hain pani.

Mann
Logged
soudagar
Guest
«Reply #1 on: August 06, 2013, 07:56:41 PM »
sabse pehle to aapse badi wali shikyat hai kitne lambe samay baad aayein hai aap....aur dusri guzarish hai aap umda shayar hai to plz aate rahiye aur yoindia ko apne qalam se mehkate rahiye


ab baat karte hai aapke qalaam ki behad umda parantu nirashawadi hai.....dard bahut hai lekin khbsurat lafzon mein piroya hai aapne


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Logged
sksaini4
Ustaad ae Shayari
*****

Rau: 853
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
112 days, 8 hours and 51 minutes.
Posts: 36414
Member Since: Apr 2011


View Profile
«Reply #2 on: August 06, 2013, 08:02:19 PM »
bahut khoob mann ji really missed u
Logged
~Hriday~
Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 115
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010


View Profile WWW
«Reply #3 on: August 06, 2013, 10:26:07 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Logged
Iqtedar
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 24
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
11 days, 17 hours and 24 minutes.

Posts: 2382
Member Since: Mar 2013


View Profile
«Reply #4 on: August 07, 2013, 01:07:13 AM »
bahot khoooob  Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
Logged
nandbahu
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 122
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
20 days, 4 hours and 11 minutes.
Posts: 14553
Member Since: Sep 2011


View Profile
«Reply #5 on: August 07, 2013, 02:09:48 PM »
bahut khoob
Logged
marhoom bahayaat
Guest
«Reply #6 on: August 07, 2013, 02:47:32 PM »
Bulbul ke geet huye bemani.
Dil ki jab baat na gul ne jani.

Bematlab ab yahan pe kyon rahna,
Chhod jane ki ab hamne thhani.

Khel khel main ye gham laga baithe,
Bhari khud pe pad rahi hai nadani.

Geet hamne gham ke saikdon gaye,
Duniyan rahi is gham se anjani.

Mahfil main ”mann” ab kis tarah jayen,
Aankhon main liye baithe hain pani.

Mann


excellent,sir
Logged
aqsh
Guest
«Reply #7 on: August 07, 2013, 03:03:38 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut khooooooooob....
Logged
mann.mann
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 113
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
22 days, 12 hours and 36 minutes.
Posts: 3703
Member Since: Aug 2011


View Profile
«Reply #8 on: August 07, 2013, 07:48:27 PM »
shukriya soudagarji...

ji zarra nawazi hai aapki ki aapne yaad kiya.... bas kuch vyasthtaon ke chale aa nahin paye.... aapki duayen rahin to zarur aate rahenge....

shukriya...
Logged
mann.mann
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 113
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
22 days, 12 hours and 36 minutes.
Posts: 3703
Member Since: Aug 2011


View Profile
«Reply #9 on: August 07, 2013, 07:54:28 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya saini sir..... aapne yaad rakha jan kar bahut khushi hui...shukriya aapka...
Logged
Mohammad Touhid
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 35
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
38 days, 12 hours and 35 minutes.

'I' 'Luv' d Way 'U' 'Forget' Me..!.!

Posts: 7160
Member Since: Aug 2009


View Profile
«Reply #10 on: August 09, 2013, 01:44:34 PM »
bahut khoob.. Applause Applause
Logged
mann.mann
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 113
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
22 days, 12 hours and 36 minutes.
Posts: 3703
Member Since: Aug 2011


View Profile
«Reply #11 on: August 09, 2013, 07:22:37 PM »
shukriya hridayji.....
Logged
mann.mann
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 113
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
22 days, 12 hours and 36 minutes.
Posts: 3703
Member Since: Aug 2011


View Profile
«Reply #12 on: August 16, 2013, 07:46:10 PM »
shukriya iqtedarji......
Logged
mann.mann
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 113
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
22 days, 12 hours and 36 minutes.
Posts: 3703
Member Since: Aug 2011


View Profile
«Reply #13 on: August 16, 2013, 07:47:59 PM »
shukriya nandbabuji
Logged
mann.mann
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 113
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
22 days, 12 hours and 36 minutes.
Posts: 3703
Member Since: Aug 2011


View Profile
«Reply #14 on: August 17, 2013, 07:48:01 PM »
bahut shukriya marhoomji
Logged
Pages: [1] 2  All
Print
Jump to:  


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 21, 2024, 04:49:45 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
[November 21, 2024, 09:01:29 AM]

[November 16, 2024, 11:44:41 AM]

by Michaelraw
[November 13, 2024, 12:59:11 PM]

[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]

[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.108 seconds with 22 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8506 Real Poets and poetry admirer