{{{***.....bura laga....***}}}

by diya786 on April 21, 2009, 09:36:50 AM
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Mere khwab mein tera deedar haseen tha
jis mein tu mere kareeb tha
phir meri neend ka tootna bura laga ...

Teri baatein hi in labon ki muskurahat hain
par aaj kyun tu khamosh hai
phir tera yun chup baithna bura laga ...

Tera paas hona mera naseeb tha
kya pata tha ki mera humdum hi mera raqeeb tha
phir apni mohabbat ka yun bikharna bura laga ...

Har aahat pe faqat tumhe hi sochti thi
subah ki gungunaati dhoop ke ehsaas mein dhoondhti thi
phir yun baarish ka aana bura laga ...

Teri mohabbat se khud ko sajaate rahe
teri "kashish" se dil behlaate rahe
phir mere aaine ka tukde tukde hona bura laga ...
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #1 on: April 21, 2009, 09:47:58 AM »

  AAP KAA KALAM PADH KAR ....ACHCHAA LAGAA...! D786



   K_A
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Talat
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«Reply #2 on: April 21, 2009, 10:04:17 AM »
Bhai hume to bilkul bura nahin laga, balki bohot achchi lagi aapki ye peshlash Usual Smile

Bohot Khoob Kashish
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #3 on: April 21, 2009, 10:09:45 AM »
Nice creation Dear Diya Applause Applause
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #4 on: April 21, 2009, 10:16:27 AM »
waah ! bahoot khood kashish! Well done!
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salil2002
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«Reply #5 on: April 21, 2009, 10:51:06 AM »
Mere khwab mein tera deedar haseen tha
jis mein tu mere kareeb tha
phir meri neend ka tootna bura laga ...

Teri baatein hi in labon ki muskurahat hain
par aaj kyun tu khamosh hai
phir tera yun chup baithna bura laga ...

Tera paas hona mera naseeb tha
kya pata tha ki mera humdum hi mera raqeeb tha
phir apni mohabbat ka yun bikharna bura laga ...

Har aahat pe faqat tumhe hi sochti thi
subah ki gungunaati dhoop ke ehsaas mein dhoondhti thi
phir yun baarish ka aana bura laga ...

Teri mohabbat se khud ko sajaate rahe
teri "kashish" se dil behlaate rahe
phir mere aaine ka tukde tukde hona bura laga ...

der se padne k liye maafi maangta hoon...... bahut hi ummda peshkash hai........sach mein masoomiyat aur shikwa karne ka yeh andaaz mujhe bilkul bura nahin laga

tere saath beithe taaron k tale
aur phir chand bhi baadlon main kaahin kho jaaye
oos andhri raat main tum mere paas hi rehna
jab har taraf sannaate k siwa kucch na najar aaye
tera saath raha toh paar kar lenge zindgi k andhere sanam
jo tu hi na ho sang mere toh kis liye , zindgi ji jaaye
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salma786
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«Reply #6 on: April 21, 2009, 11:21:51 AM »
Bahoot khoob Diya ji n salil Thumbs UP
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diya786
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«Reply #7 on: April 21, 2009, 12:35:56 PM »
Bhai hume to bilkul bura nahin laga, balki bohot achchi lagi aapki ye peshlash Usual Smile

Bohot Khoob Kashish

Bahut bahut shukriya Talat ji
jo aapne saraha
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dead heart
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«Reply #8 on: April 21, 2009, 12:47:31 PM »
Bahaut khoob Kashish di... Applause
Salil bhaijan apne bhi kamal ka likha hai...
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diya786
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«Reply #9 on: April 21, 2009, 12:48:38 PM »
  AAP KAA KALAM PADH KAR ....ACHCHAA LAGAA...! D786



   K_A

Shukriya K_A notworthy
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diya786
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«Reply #10 on: April 21, 2009, 12:49:37 PM »
Nice creation Dear Diya Applause Applause

Shukriya Jannat dear notworthy
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diya786
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«Reply #11 on: April 21, 2009, 12:54:28 PM »
waah ! bahoot khood kashish! Well done!

thanks a ton Sophi dear notworthy
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diya786
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«Reply #12 on: April 21, 2009, 12:56:19 PM »
der se padne k liye maafi maangta hoon...... bahut hi ummda peshkash hai........sach mein masoomiyat aur shikwa karne ka yeh andaaz mujhe bilkul bura nahin laga

tere saath beithe taaron k tale
aur phir chand bhi baadlon main kaahin kho jaaye
oos andhri raat main tum mere paas hi rehna
jab har taraf sannaate k siwa kucch na najar aaye
tera saath raha toh paar kar lenge zindgi k andhere sanam
jo tu hi na ho sang mere toh kis liye , zindgi ji jaaye
Aji maafi kis baat ki aap aaye aur apna waqt diya yehi bahut hai...
shukriya waise aapne bhi kamaal likha hai... too good!!!
Applause Applause
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diya786
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«Reply #13 on: April 21, 2009, 12:57:40 PM »
Bahoot khoob Diya ji n salil Thumbs UP

Shukriya Salma ji notworthy
accha lagta agar aap bhi kuch likh deti...
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diya786
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«Reply #14 on: April 21, 2009, 12:58:48 PM »
Bahaut khoob Kashish di... Applause
Salil bhaijan apne bhi kamal ka likha hai...

Bahut bahut shukriya Rahim Bhai notworthy
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