chaadar

by nishita on September 14, 2004, 10:57:26 AM
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Mere Dard ko kuch or zameeN de
ya ASMAAN de mere sabr ko,
'ey khuda', jo dard se ladte hue mar gaye
ek Chaadar to de unki kabr ko
 (not mine)
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«Reply #1 on: September 14, 2004, 02:15:43 PM »
kafan se dhaka hu phir bhi mera dil bekraar hai
mujhe abhi mat dafnao mujhe kisi ka intezaar hai
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«Reply #2 on: September 14, 2004, 02:27:49 PM »
dhokar khaye ,aansu piye ,kya kya dard na sahe,
par jindagi se koi sikayat nahi mujhe
bas chahata hu itna ki marte waqt tumhara saath rahe
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«Reply #3 on: September 14, 2004, 02:35:51 PM »
sabak hume wo wafa ka padhate rahe
nazar gairo se magar milaate rahe
khusyaan loot kar mere naseeb ki
mere dushman ka ghar wo sajaate rahe
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«Reply #4 on: September 14, 2004, 04:10:23 PM »
bahoot khoob nishita, nice akela and samnoj
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«Reply #5 on: September 15, 2004, 02:31:10 AM »
very nice nihita, akela and samnoj keep it up guys ...

tumney samjha hum nazrey kesi or sey leda rahey they
dosh tumhara tha key tumney apney pyar ka ejhaar na keya
dil to tumhi ko deya tha humney
mager tumhari beyrukhi ney humko tumsey door ker deya
tumney khud ko humsey etna door keya key hum tumharey dushman sey jaa meley pyar to tumsey keya tha mager tumhari beyrukhi key karan hum ghar uska sejaa beythey
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«Reply #6 on: September 15, 2004, 08:18:04 AM »
wonderful akela, saMNoj and sonu.. and thanks pooja
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«Reply #7 on: September 15, 2004, 08:18:36 AM »
nice  nishita...................Mere Dard ko kuch or zameeN de ....nice wording....

Ya rab tere jahan ke kiya haal ho gaye
Kuch log khuwaishaat ke dallal ho gaye...
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«Reply #8 on: September 15, 2004, 08:21:56 AM »
good one waheed..

mujhay raaste main para hua kisi badnaseeb ka khat mila
kahi khoon-e-dil se likha hua kahin aansoon se mita hua mila..

(not mine)
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«Reply #9 on: September 16, 2004, 03:12:58 AM »
thanks nishita weldone keep it up very nice work everybody keep it up.

mujhey rastey mey peda ek badnaseeb kanta mila
dard sey lepta ek mehkahana mila
kahi khoon sey likha kahi aansoon sey meta huya kesi ka kalam mila
dard -e - haley dil mey lepta ek lephapha mila.
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«Reply #10 on: September 16, 2004, 04:50:57 AM »
nice all.
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«Reply #11 on: September 16, 2004, 04:31:06 PM »
thanx nishita...
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nishita
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«Reply #12 on: September 18, 2004, 07:04:51 AM »
nice one sonu
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«Reply #13 on: September 19, 2004, 07:52:25 AM »
Itnay Chupchaap Keh Rastey Bhi Lagen Ge Weraan
Chor Jayengay Kisee Roz Nagar Shaam Ke Baad..............
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