~Chaar Din~

by Sonia01 on July 15, 2008, 02:46:02 PM
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Vada kiya hai mere mehboob ne paanchve din ka
Kisi se sun liya hoga ki zindagi chaar din ki hai  tearyeyed
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«Reply #1 on: July 15, 2008, 02:51:26 PM »
Quote from: Sonia01 on July 15, 2008, 02:46:02 PM
Vada kiya hai mere mehboob ne paanchve din ka
Kisi se sun liya hoga ki zindagi chaar din ki hai  tearyeyed
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2 good
kya kalam chalae he
bahut kam shabdo mein bahut kuch keh diya he
keep it up   Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: July 15, 2008, 03:03:14 PM »
Shukhriya Killer Jee
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«Reply #3 on: July 15, 2008, 03:07:02 PM »
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Shukhriya Killer Jee

u welcm   happy3
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«Reply #4 on: July 15, 2008, 03:14:44 PM »
Quote from: Sonia01 on July 15, 2008, 02:46:02 PM
Vada kiya hai mere mehboob ne paanchve din ka
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Bahut Khoob!! Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: July 15, 2008, 03:29:29 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on July 15, 2008, 03:14:44 PM
Bahut Khoob!! Applause Applause

Thank you Khwaish bhaiya
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