"" chahat ko meri--""

by nirala on March 03, 2011, 04:20:42 PM
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chahat ko meri aazmata kyun hai
har baar,woh mujhe rulaata kyun hai ?

kah to dia tha maine jee na payenge bin uske
pal pal fir mujhe, itna tadpaata kyun hai ?

le hi lo na jaan meri tum
khamoshi se yun sulgata kyun hai ?

uff bhi to na nikalti in siskiyon se ab
haalat pe meri woh muskurata kyun hai ?

sangam ki chahat thi milne ki aas
mitakar armaano ko ab besharmi se nazren milata kyun hai ?

gar kahta chali jao duur mujse ek hi baar
na puchti mai ki woh mujhse itna ghabrata kyun hai?
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«Reply #1 on: March 03, 2011, 05:12:02 PM »
bhtttttttttttt mast likha h aapne nirala mastana ji......

last sawal to mujhe bhi pareshan karta h.....
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«Reply #2 on: March 03, 2011, 05:39:30 PM »
Bahut Khub Nirala Ji Bahut Mast Likha Hai Bhai Applause
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«Reply #3 on: March 03, 2011, 08:34:43 PM »
chahat ko meri woh aazmata kyun hai
har baar woh mujhe rulaata kyun hai ?

kah to dia tha maine jee na payenge bin uske
pal pal fir mujhe woh itna tadpaata kyun hai ?

le hi lo na jaan meri tum
khamoshi se yun sulgata kyun hai ?

uff bhi to na nikalti in siskiyon se ab
haalat pe meri woh muskurata kyun hai ?

sangam ki chahat thi milne ki aas
mitakar armaano ko ab besharmi se ankhen milata kyun hai ?

gar kahta chali jao duur mujse ek hi baar
na puchti mai ki woh mujhse itna ghbrata kyun hai


NAAAAAAAAAICE ONE NIRALA JI
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«Reply #4 on: March 04, 2011, 07:35:23 AM »
bht bht khoob nirala ji......
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«Reply #5 on: March 04, 2011, 07:42:50 AM »
wwwwwwwooooooooooooooowwwwwwwww...........
nirala ji kya mast poetry he dear.........apki bests poetry me shumar he ye.........sawal bhi he aur unhi me chupe jawab bhi he......maja aa gaya yaar........

anamika ji apka reply pada mene.apne kaha ki last para apko bhi pareshan karta he..........well uske liye kuch he mere paas....

"kuch khamoshiya jawab se aachi rahi
ishq kiya maga neev kuch kacchi rahi

apna apna mukkadar he aur kya kahe
kisi ki wafa to kisi ki bewafai sacchi rahi"
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«Reply #6 on: March 04, 2011, 08:13:05 AM »
mai kitna paagal hun isko likhne ke baad pata chala.
likhne betha apne dil ka haal likh gaya Ladkiyon ka haal.
well aap sabko pasand aaye
isse achha kya hoga kuch.
matrix yaara aapka jawaab jo hai reality hai.
thanx aal--
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«Reply #7 on: March 04, 2011, 08:14:06 AM »
chahat ko meri woh aazmata kyun hai
har baar woh mujhe rulaata kyun hai ?

kah to dia tha maine jee na payenge bin uske
pal pal fir mujhe woh itna tadpaata kyun hai ?

le hi lo na jaan meri tum
khamoshi se yun sulgata kyun hai ?

uff bhi to na nikalti in siskiyon se ab
haalat pe meri woh muskurata kyun hai ?

sangam ki chahat thi milne ki aas
mitakar armaano ko ab besharmi se ankhen milata kyun hai ?

gar kahta chali jao duur mujse ek hi baar
na puchti mai ki woh mujhse itna ghbrata kyun hai


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Bahut Khooob Niralaji..Lajawaab!!!!

wwwwwwwooooooooooooooowwwwwwwww...........
nirala ji kya mast poetry he dear.........apki bests poetry me shumar he ye.........sawal bhi he aur unhi me chupe jawab bhi he......maja aa gaya yaar........

anamika ji apka reply pada mene.apne kaha ki last para apko bhi pareshan karta he..........well uske liye kuch he mere paas....

"kuch khamoshiya jawab se aachi rahi
ishq kiya maga neev kuch kacchi rahi

apna apna mukkadar he aur kya kahe
kisi ki wafa to kisi ki bewafai sacchi rahi"

Waah Waah!!! Bahutttt Khoob Uthkarshji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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nirala
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«Reply #8 on: March 04, 2011, 10:04:05 AM »
bahut sukriya Kwaish ji.
sarahne ke liye
thanx
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heena i.s
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«Reply #9 on: March 04, 2011, 11:55:21 AM »
kya baathai bhai aap to itne achche shayar hai ye aaj pata chala
warna aaj tak aap ki daad dene ki ada se hi waqif the
bahut khub nirala ji
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nirala
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«Reply #10 on: March 04, 2011, 12:33:10 PM »
aapki nazren inayat hai Heena ji--warna ham sirf daad dene ke liye hi to bane hain.
thanq so much fo liking dis toota foota nagma.
"$thanx
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dead heart
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«Reply #11 on: March 04, 2011, 07:59:52 PM »
Oye hoye kaun kehta hai Nirala, tu acha shayar nahin hai..
Fida hogaya Rahim iss kalam par..Kya likha hai dost..
MashAllah MashAllah..Yunhi likte rahiyega..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Khush rahiye..!

wwwwwwwooooooooooooooowwwwwwwww...........
nirala ji kya mast poetry he dear.........apki bests poetry me shumar he ye.........sawal bhi he aur unhi me chupe jawab bhi he......maja aa gaya yaar........

anamika ji apka reply pada mene.apne kaha ki last para apko bhi pareshan karta he..........well uske liye kuch he mere paas....

"kuch khamoshiya jawab se aachi rahi
ishq kiya maga neev kuch kacchi rahi

apna apna mukkadar he aur kya kahe
kisi ki wafa to kisi ki bewafai sacchi rahi"
Kya jawab diya hai apne MG jee..
Khoob..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Khush rahiye..!
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nirala
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«Reply #12 on: April 08, 2011, 02:29:18 AM »
thax Rahim dost…
aapse itne ache cmnt dekh kar dil khus hua.…
bht bht sukriya dost.
khus raho .
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«Reply #13 on: April 08, 2011, 03:41:16 AM »
Applause Applause Bohout Khoob Nirala JI. Mast Mast hai.  happy3

-SKY-
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nirala
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«Reply #14 on: April 08, 2011, 03:48:41 AM »
wah aapki nazren inayat b ho gai aansoo ji…
chaliye ji bht saara thanx aapko…
meri toote foote alfazo ko sarahne ke lie.
be happy always
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