chakki ka ik paat......

by mann.mann on March 19, 2012, 11:58:36 AM
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" sathi tum bin zindgi, chakki ka ik paat,
 tab se ham patthar huye, jab se chhuta sath.

                                       Mann
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«Reply #1 on: March 19, 2012, 12:02:03 PM »
bahut hee achhee lines hain mann ji hardik badhaai sweekaar karen
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«Reply #2 on: March 19, 2012, 12:11:28 PM »
bhut khoob mannji ......
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«Reply #3 on: March 19, 2012, 06:51:11 PM »
bhott khoob Mann sahiba--
kamaal ke lines hain
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mann ji hume aapse bht umeeden hain ki aap har section me apna wesa hi yogdaan dengi jaisa Dard, Judai aur Bewafai wale section me deti hain
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«Reply #4 on: March 20, 2012, 03:27:11 AM »
bahut bahut dhanyawad sainiji...

ji bas ek din gaon main jo pisne wali chakki hoti hai use dekh kar yun hi khyal aaya.. jab tak donon sath main hain tab tak hi chakki hai.. warna to patthar ka tukda hi hai....

pasand farmaya iske lie dhanyawad....
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«Reply #5 on: March 20, 2012, 05:37:37 AM »
bahut dhanyaad pawanji..
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«Reply #6 on: March 20, 2012, 05:38:08 AM »
bahut shukriya shihabji
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«Reply #7 on: March 20, 2012, 05:41:53 AM »
bahut dhanyawad janab sarfiraji..

janab sahi kahte hain aap ki dusare section main bhi likhna chahiye.. chaliye kuch likhenge.. par janab likha kahan aata hai hame... bas yun hi kalam chala lete hain....

aap pasand farmate rahenge to hausla milega aur kuch koshish karenge....
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