Chala Khuch Yu Zindagi Ka Safar Chala.............

by Nikhaar on August 16, 2010, 04:52:49 PM
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Chala khuch yu zindagi ka safar chala
Pal dar par beeta har lamha, aur apne sang chala

Aankho se chalke ashq aur lab muskura diye
Tanhai mein yaad kiye jo khuch hassne pal,toh yahi silsila chala

Kadvi khuch yaadon ne kiya phir se puraane zakhm taaze
Ye dil unn zakhmon par marham lagata chala

Khilti muskaan ko dard mein badla waqt ne
Ashqon ka le sahara wo dard bhi behta chala

Barsaat ki bundon ne bhigoya jab chehre ko
Wo ashq bhi unn bundon k sang behta chala

Chala khuch yu zindagi ka safar chala
Har lamhe mein simt_ta gaya ek naya lamha
Aur har lamhe mein khuch yaadon ka karwaan chala
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«Reply #1 on: August 16, 2010, 05:13:57 PM »
waahhhhhhh........dil ko chhute har alfaaz aur uspe ye feelings......
nihaar ji....waakai aap bht achcha likhti hain......
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«Reply #2 on: August 16, 2010, 05:31:58 PM »
Bhahut khoob Nikhaar Ji
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«Reply #3 on: August 16, 2010, 05:35:10 PM »
Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 16, 2010, 05:13:57 PM
waahhhhhhh........dil ko chhute har alfaaz aur uspe ye feelings......
nihaar ji....waakai aap bht achcha likhti hain......
Thanx a lot dear...... aap bhi bahut accha likhti hai....raunak badha di hai aapne yo ki.......keep writing
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«Reply #4 on: August 17, 2010, 07:45:06 AM »
Waah Pooja ji waah... hum to fida hain aapki shayari pe... kitne sundar aur asaan se shabdon me aap poori kahaani keh gaye... bahut khoobsurti se likha hai aapne... waah kya kehne aapke....!!!

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Maafi chahunga kuch likhe bina humse raha nahi gaya....

har subah ek naya rang leke aata hai,
suraj har subha ko roshan kar hi jaata hai,

hoti hai andheri raat agar berehem,
har subah sukoon ki saans leke aata hai,

toofaan me agar doob jaati hai koi kashti,
lehron ke saath wo saahil tak aa hi jaata hai,

kuch pal ke liye agar ghum ho zindagi me,
agle pal hothon pe muskaan aa hi jaati hai,

har raat hoti nahi andheri amaawas ki tarha,
ghar ke koney me ek chiraag jal hi jaata hai,

chot khaake insaan gir to jaata hai kai bar,
par waqt ke saath wo sambhal hi jaata hai,

tanha hai agar jeewan ka safar kuch pal ke liye,
kuch doori pe haseen hamsafar mil hi jaata hai...
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«Reply #5 on: August 17, 2010, 08:28:35 AM »
nikhar ji bahot hi behtariin post ki he apne......

har line me new feel he .....superb......
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«Reply #6 on: August 17, 2010, 08:47:28 AM »
Quote from: Nikhaar on August 16, 2010, 04:52:49 PM

Chala khuch yu zindagi ka safar chala
Pal dar par beeta har lamha, aur apne sang chala

Aankho se chalke ashq aur lab muskura diye
Tanhai mein yaad kiye jo khuch hassne pal,toh yahi silsila chala

Kadvi khuch yaadon ne kiya phir se puraane zakhm taaze
Ye dil unn zakhmon par marham lagata chala

Khilti muskaan ko dard mein badla waqt ne
Ashqon ka le sahara wo dard bhi behta chala

Barsaat ki bundon ne bhigoya jab chehre ko
Wo ashq bhi unn bundon k sang behta chala

Chala khuch yu zindagi ka safar chala
Har lamhe mein simt_ta gaya ek naya lamha
Aur har lamhe mein khuch yaadon ka karwaan chala


Sabse pehle To bahut bahut bahut Khoob pooja..

Aapke To kya kehne!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #7 on: August 17, 2010, 09:57:07 AM »
awesome creation pooja ji n klasakar ji...... Clapping Smiley

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Quote from: Nikhaar on August 16, 2010, 04:52:49 PM

Chala khuch yu zindagi ka safar chala
Pal dar par beeta har lamha, aur apne sang chala

Aankho se chalke ashq aur lab muskura diye
Tanhai mein yaad kiye jo khuch hassne pal,toh yahi silsila chala

Kadvi khuch yaadon ne kiya phir se puraane zakhm taaze
Ye dil unn zakhmon par marham lagata chala

Khilti muskaan ko dard mein badla waqt ne
Ashqon ka le sahara wo dard bhi behta chala

Barsaat ki bundon ne bhigoya jab chehre ko
Wo ashq bhi unn bundon k sang behta chala

Chala khuch yu zindagi ka safar chala
Har lamhe mein simt_ta gaya ek naya lamha
Aur har lamhe mein khuch yaadon ka karwaan chala




Quote from: klaskar on August 17, 2010, 07:45:06 AM
Waah Pooja ji waah... hum to fida hain aapki shayari pe... kitne sundar aur asaan se shabdon me aap poori kahaani keh gaye... bahut khoobsurti se likha hai aapne... waah kya kehne aapke....!!!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Maafi chahunga kuch likhe bina humse raha nahi gaya....

har subah ek naya rang leke aata hai,
suraj har subha ko roshan kar hi jaata hai,

hoti hai andheri raat agar berehem,
har subah sukoon ki saans leke aata hai,

toofaan me agar doob jaati hai koi kashti,
lehron ke saath wo saahil tak aa hi jaata hai,

kuch pal ke liye agar ghum ho zindagi me,
agle pal hothon pe muskaan aa hi jaati hai,

har raat hoti nahi andheri amaawas ki tarha,
ghar ke koney me ek chiraag jal hi jaata hai,

chot khaake insaan gir to jaata hai kai bar,
par waqt ke saath wo sambhal hi jaata hai,

tanha hai agar jeewan ka safar kuch pal ke liye,
kuch doori pe haseen hamsafar mil hi jaata hai...
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«Reply #8 on: August 17, 2010, 10:13:54 AM »
hmm khubsurat shabd likhte he aap nikhaar jiii...
i lke the line..ashqo ka le sahara wo dard bhi behta chala..


kuch meri taraf se shayad apko pasand aaye~


zindagi tere sath ko me kya naam du,
ek Anamika he tu teri pyaas ko kaise viraam du~
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«Reply #9 on: August 17, 2010, 01:31:37 PM »
Thanx a lot Devangi ji....!!!

Quote from: thinkhattk on August 17, 2010, 09:57:07 AM
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«Reply #10 on: August 17, 2010, 05:43:21 PM »
Quote from: klaskar on August 17, 2010, 07:45:06 AM
Waah Pooja ji waah... hum to fida hain aapki shayari pe... kitne sundar aur asaan se shabdon me aap poori kahaani keh gaye... bahut khoobsurti se likha hai aapne... waah kya kehne aapke....!!!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Maafi chahunga kuch likhe bina humse raha nahi gaya....

har subah ek naya rang leke aata hai,
suraj har subha ko roshan kar hi jaata hai,

hoti hai andheri raat agar berehem,
har subah sukoon ki saans leke aata hai,

toofaan me agar doob jaati hai koi kashti,
lehron ke saath wo saahil tak aa hi jaata hai,

kuch pal ke liye agar ghum ho zindagi me,
agle pal hothon pe muskaan aa hi jaati hai,

har raat hoti nahi andheri amaawas ki tarha,
ghar ke koney me ek chiraag jal hi jaata hai,

chot khaake insaan gir to jaata hai kai bar,
par waqt ke saath wo sambhal hi jaata hai,

tanha hai agar jeewan ka safar kuch pal ke liye,
kuch doori pe haseen hamsafar mil hi jaata hai...


Itni taarif..........aapne toh mujhe chane k jhaad par chadha diya.......
bahut khubsurat jwaab diya hai aapne klaskar ji.....jwaab par khuch likhne ki koshish bhi ki hai........


Ek raah par chalte dusri raah par kadam rakh diya
Khud ki raahon par khud ki pathar rakh diya

Kal pukara tha usko,aur wo aaj aaya hai
Jab khud apne haatho se khwaabon ka aaina tod diya

Aaas bhi na rahi lehro se ubarne ki jab
Anayaas hi lehron ne tab apna rukh mod diya

Sach kha nahi hoti har raat andheri
Kiya jab issi andhere se pyar toh ujaalon ne hamein rok diya

Aaj hum bhi toot k bik jaate nafrat k iss bazaar mein
Par aap jaise doston ne hamein phir se khud se jod diya
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«Reply #11 on: August 17, 2010, 07:02:10 PM »
Waaaah Kia Baaat hai....
Kafi achchi mehfileN sajti hai yahaaN..
Maza aa gaya padhker sabhi ne ek se badhker ek
ahsaas pesh kiye haiN.......
Sab ko dil se daad...... 


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«Reply #12 on: August 18, 2010, 01:59:18 AM »
Pooja ji maine koi chane ke jhaad pe nahi chadhaya aapko... jo sach hai bas wahi kahaa... aapne likha hi itna pyaara hai... aur hamaare comment ko pasand karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya... aur aapka ye naya post bhi bahut hi pyaara hai... too good.... iske jawaab me kuch likha hai maine... ummeed hai aap pasand karenge...

nazar uthaake dekho humein hamesha paas paoge,
hamaari dosti se bachke tum ab kahaan jaoge,

raah pe chalke kisi paththar ko dekh ruk jaoge,
to kahaan is jeewan ke safar me aage badh paoge,

kya hua agar khwaabon ka aaina tumse tut gaya aaj,
kal tanha they, ab in tukdo me hazaaron nazar aaoge,

apni parchhai me khud ko dhund lo tum ek baar,
apne hi ruh se tum kis tarha muh mod paoge,

nahi hai ab lambi ye raat judai ki mere dost,
kab tak yunhi andheron me khud ko chhupaoge,

nafraton ki is duniya me ab bhi mohabbat bachi hai,
in pyaar ke rishton se bachke tum kahaan jaa paoge,

zindagi hai chaar din ki ro ke kyun khatam karna,
muskura ke ji lo aaj, ye mauka fir kahaan tum paoge...
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«Reply #13 on: August 18, 2010, 04:44:35 PM »
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on August 16, 2010, 05:31:58 PM
Bhahut khoob Nikhaar Ji
Shukriya RH ji
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«Reply #14 on: August 18, 2010, 05:25:48 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on August 17, 2010, 08:47:28 AM
Sabse pehle To bahut bahut bahut Khoob pooja..

Aapke To kya kehne!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Aur Ab Doosri baat!!!! Aa Gaye Aap..

Main Soch Raha Tha Ki Grand Re-Entry karani Padegi aapki yoindia Mein, Band-Baajo ke Saath tongue3

Ab Zara Meharbaani Kijiye, Theek Kar Rahiye..Samjhe!!! icon_flower
Bahut bahut shukriya Khwaish ji.......

aapke bhi kya kehne....Grand Re-entry ki baat bhi karte hai aur khuch likhte bhi nahi.....Comment Shayrana andaaz mein hone chaiye.....kya samjhe....
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