chalakta hai meri aankho se sabr ka jaam kamre me

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koi fanoos, koi tasweer, koi guldaan kamre me
chalo hum bhi saja le apne armaan kamre me
uter ke aasmaan se chandni bister pe aayegi
yehi to soch ke rakha hai roshandaan kamre me
mujhe to yaab ab bhi hai, tumhi bhool gayi shayed
hui thi hum dono ki pahli pahchaan kamre me
hazaaro khawaab dekhe the, hazaro aarzu ki thi
hue the hum dono ke armaan jawan kamre me
teri aahat per sanam mere, laga rahta hai dil mera
hawa ke jhoke de jaate hai tera paighaam kamre me
gayi tum rooth ke jabse, kahi dil nahi lagta
umed aaata hai her raat, yaado ka tufaan kamre me
kabhi aao, poocho der-o-dewar se, kya aalam hai ?
chalakta ahi meri aankho se sabr ka jaam kamre me
kabhi aaker dekhoi to chouk uthogi tum
maine likh dala her jagah tumhara naam kamre me
tumhe meri kasam bus ek baar aa jao
tere aane se jaan pad jayegi bejaan kamre me
SAMNOJ ki zindagi chahat ki hai nishani
rakha kya hai pyar ke siwa viraan kamre me
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«Reply #1 on: June 20, 2005, 08:56:00 AM »
wah wah wah............bahut bahut hi khoob.................Samnoj..............bahut achhe....................excellent............... .....
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«Reply #2 on: June 20, 2005, 08:59:14 AM »
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wah wah wah............bahut bahut hi khoob.................Samnoj..............bahut achhe....................excellent............... .....


thanx dolly
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«Reply #3 on: June 20, 2005, 09:22:00 AM »
Quote from: "samnoj"
koi fanoos, koi tasweer, koi guldaan kamre me
chalo hum bhi saja le apne armaan kamre me
uter ke aasmaan se chandni bister pe aayegi
yehi to soch ke rakha hai roshandaan kamre me
mujhe to yaab ab bhi hai, tumhi bhool gayi shayed
hui thi hum dono ki pahli pahchaan kamre me
hazaaro khawaab dekhe the, hazaro aarzu ki thi
hue the hum dono ke armaan jawan kamre me
teri aahat per sanam mere, laga rahta hai dil mera
hawa ke jhoke de jaate hai tera paighaam kamre me
gayi tum rooth ke jabse, kahi dil nahi lagta
umed aaata hai her raat, yaado ka tufaan kamre me
kabhi aao, poocho der-o-dewar se, kya aalam hai ?
chalakta ahi meri aankho se sabr ka jaam kamre me
kabhi aaker dekhoi to chouk uthogi tum
maine likh dala her jagah tumhara naam kamre me
tumhe meri kasam bus ek baar aa jao
tere aane se jaan pad jayegi bejaan kamre me
SAMNOJ ki zindagi chahat ki hai nishani
rakha kya hai pyar ke siwa viraan kamre me


wow wow  wonderful  sam........................very  touching  words.........

aaj  khada  hai  koi  thodi  see  mohabbat  maangne ke liye
aisa lagta hai fiza ne apni bahar uske aangan se samet  liya ho jaise......
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«Reply #4 on: June 20, 2005, 09:23:14 AM »
very nice sam, touching words                                                                               ..waheed tumne bhi achha likha hai bohot!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #5 on: June 20, 2005, 09:31:04 AM »
Quote from: "sanya310"
very nice sam, touching words                                                                               ..waheed tumne bhi achha likha hai bohot!


hmmmmmmmmm  thanxxxxxxxx  sanya...............  tongue3
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Meena
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«Reply #6 on: June 20, 2005, 10:40:23 AM »
wah samnoj ji!!!!

"tumhe meri kasam bus ek baar aa jao
tere aane se jaan pad jayegi bejaan kamre me
SAMNOJ ki zindagi chahat ki hai nishani
rakha kya hai pyar ke siwa viraan kamre me "

great lines hai yeh!!!

 :D
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«Reply #7 on: June 20, 2005, 10:52:45 AM »
Quote from: "samnoj"
koi fanoos, koi tasweer, koi guldaan kamre me
chalo hum bhi saja le apne armaan kamre me
uter ke aasmaan se chandni bister pe aayegi
yehi to soch ke rakha hai roshandaan kamre me
mujhe to yaab ab bhi hai, tumhi bhool gayi shayed
hui thi hum dono ki pahli pahchaan kamre me
hazaaro khawaab dekhe the, hazaro aarzu ki thi
hue the hum dono ke armaan jawan kamre me
teri aahat per sanam mere, laga rahta hai dil mera
hawa ke jhoke de jaate hai tera paighaam kamre me
gayi tum rooth ke jabse, kahi dil nahi lagta
umed aaata hai her raat, yaado ka tufaan kamre me
kabhi aao, poocho der-o-dewar se, kya aalam hai ?
chalakta ahi meri aankho se sabr ka jaam kamre me
kabhi aaker dekhoi to chouk uthogi tum
maine likh dala her jagah tumhara naam kamre me
tumhe meri kasam bus ek baar aa jao
tere aane se jaan pad jayegi bejaan kamre me
SAMNOJ ki zindagi chahat ki hai nishani
rakha kya hai pyar ke siwa viraan kamre me


wahhhhhhhhhh..............veryyyyyyyyyy nice...........samnoj
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«Reply #8 on: June 20, 2005, 10:58:09 AM »
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koi fanoos, koi tasweer, koi guldaan kamre me
chalo hum bhi saja le apne armaan kamre me
uter ke aasmaan se chandni bister pe aayegi
yehi to soch ke rakha hai roshandaan kamre me
mujhe to yaab ab bhi hai, tumhi bhool gayi shayed
hui thi hum dono ki pahli pahchaan kamre me
hazaaro khawaab dekhe the, hazaro aarzu ki thi
hue the hum dono ke armaan jawan kamre me
teri aahat per sanam mere, laga rahta hai dil mera
hawa ke jhoke de jaate hai tera paighaam kamre me
gayi tum rooth ke jabse, kahi dil nahi lagta
umed aaata hai her raat, yaado ka tufaan kamre me
kabhi aao, poocho der-o-dewar se, kya aalam hai ?
chalakta ahi meri aankho se sabr ka jaam kamre me
kabhi aaker dekhoi to chouk uthogi tum
maine likh dala her jagah tumhara naam kamre me
tumhe meri kasam bus ek baar aa jao
tere aane se jaan pad jayegi bejaan kamre me
SAMNOJ ki zindagi chahat ki hai nishani
rakha kya hai pyar ke siwa viraan kamre me


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«Reply #9 on: June 20, 2005, 12:04:46 PM »
thanx waheed, sanya, meena, khushiiii aur nidhi

bahut ache waheed
derd-e-dil zamane se ab chupaya bhi nahi jata
itne roye hai teri yaad me ab muskuraya bhi nahi jata
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«Reply #10 on: June 20, 2005, 12:09:56 PM »
Bohot achche Sam......................Bouncer !!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #11 on: June 20, 2005, 12:13:55 PM »
bouncer bole to. . . . samjha nahi kya
waise thanx
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«Reply #12 on: June 22, 2005, 12:15:29 PM »
rim jhim barsaat me yaadon ki purwayi
aaj ki shab tadpa rahi hai teri judai

is suhane mousam me kaash aa jate
jannat ban jati khamosh ye tanhaai

ek muddat se nahi pi teri aankho se
barso guzre dekhe hue teri angdai

tere bina yu guzer rahi hai zindagi meri
ki mujhe daraati hai meri hi parchayi
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«Reply #13 on: March 23, 2006, 05:31:48 PM »
wah samnoj ji apki pahli wali aor yah wali dono kamal hai.... bahot khoob likha apne!!

Rimjhim barsaat phir teri yaad laai hai
judai ki yah tarap, kuch aor gahraaai hai

thundi hawa ke yah jhoke, sab yaad karaty hai
kaise beety wo din rat tere sung, sab samne atty hai!!
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