-~ Chale Jaa Rahe Hai ~-

by Tosha on December 18, 2006, 01:42:53 AM

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Tosha

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Tute khuwabon ko pairo tale raundhte chale jaa rahe hai
khud se aapne kadmo ke nishan saaja rahe hai

kya sawal karen zindgi se, ka aab bhi paheliya bujhate rahe
teri bandgi main e-malik khud ko jala rahe hai

aab kya kare umeed ki iss kali raat ke baad ujala hoga
chand khushiyo ke share kafan aapna bana rahe hai


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Aryaan

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-~ Chale Jaa Rahe Hai ~-

«Reply #1 on: December 18, 2006, 01:57:51 AM »

Bohat khoob Tosha... kya baat hai aapki bhi..


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Tosha

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-~ Chale Jaa Rahe Hai ~-

«Reply #2 on: December 18, 2006, 02:07:34 AM »

Thanx ...


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vikas2210

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«Reply #3 on: December 18, 2006, 04:37:03 AM »

nice on Tosha........

dard jo itna saha, khud hi hansana aaya
rona bhi chaha, to khudpe hansana aaya

khawab kuch yun tuta, aankh yun lag gayi
kafan jo ohdha maine, tera aanchal yaad aaya...


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Tosha

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«Reply #4 on: December 18, 2006, 04:58:51 AM »

thanx vikas... aapne bhi khoob kaha hai..!!

Kafan jo odha maine, tera aachal yaad aaya


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Tosha

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«Reply #5 on: December 21, 2006, 02:49:59 AM »

Kisi ne kaha ki yeh kuch adhoori se lagti hai ... to maine aage likhne li kosish ki hai :oops:

umeed hai kosish safal ho :oops:

Quote from: "Tosha"

kuch soojhta hi nahi Puzzled !


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vikas2210

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«Reply #6 on: December 21, 2006, 03:44:21 AM »

de rahe hai dua tujhe aye bewafa
tu kush rahe bas yehi sada kar rahe hai

banti bigadti hai zindgi hum aashiqko ki
tu na hume yaad kare bas yehi chah rahe hai......

tosha ji aapke liye..........


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«Reply #7 on: December 21, 2006, 06:15:58 PM »

Bohat khoob Tosha n Vikaas.


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waheed_rose2004

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«Reply #8 on: December 21, 2006, 06:30:17 PM »

Quote from: "Tosha"

awesome Tosha......... so touching .......... ab tak ki tumhari sabse acchi yeh sher lagi......... too good Vikas


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Meena is back

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«Reply #9 on: December 23, 2006, 10:01:48 AM »

toshu nice poem, esp woh part jo tumne add karne ki koshish ki :D

nice vikas as well!

:d


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Tosha

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«Reply #10 on: December 23, 2006, 02:44:13 PM »

Thanx Meena :D


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Tosha

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«Reply #11 on: December 23, 2006, 02:45:17 PM »

Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"

awesome Tosha......... so touching .......... ab tak ki tumhari sabse acchi yeh sher lagi......... too good Vikas

Chalo aap ko kuch to pasand aaya Puzzled !


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Tosha

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«Reply #12 on: December 23, 2006, 02:48:02 PM »

Quote from: "vikas2210"

de rahe hai dua tujhe aye bewafa
tu kush rahe bas yehi sada kar rahe hai

banti bigadti hai zindgi hum aashiqko ki
tu na hume yaad kare bas yehi chah rahe hai......

tosha ji aapke liye..........

Thanx Vikas!!

banti bigadti hai zindgi aashiko ki
phir bhi mohabbet kiye jaa rahe hai
milti hai aksar is dil ko bewafai
phit bhi teri ibaddat kiya jaa rahe hai