chalte chalte

by diwakar singh tanwar on July 03, 2013, 10:04:08 PM
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i wrote this when i got yearback and since all of my friends were leaving college
so the poem has feeling of loneliness and frustration
चलते चलते थक गया हूँ,
पैरो मे भी छाले हैं
जिंदगी के सारी पन्ने,
पहले गोरे थे,
लेकिन अब काले हैं
उन पन्नो पर जो खिलती तस्वीरे थी
मेरे यारो की यादे बटोरे थी
सूरत थी किस रंग की
हमको ,
यह भी तो याद नहीं
क्यों  छोड़ गये साथ हमारा
फ़िर भी मैं गमजाद नहीं
जिंदगी क्या हैं, बस एक ख्वाब ही तो हैं
अनसुलझी पहेलीयो का एक सैलाब ही तो हैं
इस सैलाब की गहराई ना समझ सका मैं
जीवन की चतुराई ना समझ सका मैं
बस ,
चलते चलते थक गया हूँ,पैरो मे भी छाले हैं
जिंदगी के सारी पन्ने, पहले गोरे थे, लेकिन अब काले हैं
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«Reply #1 on: July 03, 2013, 10:52:19 PM »
Ha yar bahut bura lagta hai coll khatam hote waqt..Very nicely written..happy9
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«Reply #2 on: July 04, 2013, 01:14:30 AM »
thnx
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«Reply #3 on: July 04, 2013, 01:15:24 AM »
बहुत खूब लिखा है Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: July 04, 2013, 02:12:01 AM »
bhahut bhahut sukrhiya
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«Reply #5 on: July 04, 2013, 09:17:54 AM »
bahut umdaa
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«Reply #6 on: July 04, 2013, 04:26:32 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut achchaa likha hai aapne Diwakar ji.... bahut pyaari rachnaaa... straight from the heart...!!!
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«Reply #7 on: July 04, 2013, 05:50:37 PM »
bahut achcha likhe ho. achcha laga padhkar. dheron daad.
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