Chalte Chalte.....

by dhadkan on April 01, 2005, 05:23:18 AM
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dhadkan
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Chalte chalte ajj aa gaye hum wahi,
Jis raah par chale the banke humsfar hum kabhi,

Nazariya badla par nazaare hai wahi,
Iss raah ke kaante hamare liye jannat thi kabhi,

Milke dekhe the jo sapne ab hi hai wahi,
Lekin sapnonko sajaane wala ab koi nahi,

Humsafar to mera ab bhi hai wohi,
Lekin uske sahare me ab wo baat nahi.
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #1 on: April 01, 2005, 07:15:41 AM »
Bahut achha likha Dhadkan ...
Keep it up ...


Never cry when you fall in love ...
Because for whom you are crying ...
Does not deserve your tears ....
But the one who will deserve ...
Will never let you cry ...
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dhadkan
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«Reply #2 on: April 01, 2005, 07:17:59 AM »
Thank you JHL
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #3 on: April 01, 2005, 07:19:39 AM »
You are most welcome ...
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Meena
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«Reply #4 on: April 01, 2005, 02:11:53 PM »
Quote from: "dhadkan"
Chalte chalte ajj aa gaye hum wahi,
Jis raah par chale the banke humsfar hum kabhi,

Nazariya badla par nazaare hai wahi,
Iss raah ke kaante hamare liye jannat thi kabhi,

Milke dekhe the jo sapne ab hi hai wahi,
Lekin sapnonko sajaane wala ab koi nahi,

Humsafar to mera ab bhi hai wohi,
Lekin uske sahare me ab wo baat nahi.


wahhhhhhh! bohot bohot acha likha apne!! ek ek lafz is just super duperrr!!

 :D
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pandit
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«Reply #5 on: April 01, 2005, 02:19:29 PM »
dil ke karaah se roshan hai zindagani meri,
bus yahi ek to meharbaani hai teri,
kaun kehta hai ki shama roshan hoti hai mohabbat se,
koi idher aa k to dekhe,
kaise wafadaari hai teri.
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Meena
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«Reply #6 on: April 01, 2005, 02:22:23 PM »
nice one pandit ji!!

 :D
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pandit
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«Reply #7 on: April 01, 2005, 02:24:40 PM »
thanx a lot meena ji....................
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dhadkan
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«Reply #8 on: April 05, 2005, 05:39:38 AM »
Shukriyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Meena
nice pandit Bahut khoob likha hai aapne... :lol:  :lol:
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«Reply #9 on: April 05, 2005, 09:42:02 AM »
wah........dhadkan,bohat hi accha likha hai,every line is beautiful........................................ .!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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nishita
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«Reply #10 on: April 05, 2005, 01:09:33 PM »
Quote from: "dhadkan"
Chalte chalte ajj aa gaye hum wahi,
Jis raah par chale the banke humsfar hum kabhi,

Nazariya badla par nazaare hai wahi,
Iss raah ke kaante hamare liye jannat thi kabhi,

Milke dekhe the jo sapne ab hi hai wahi,
Lekin sapnonko sajaane wala ab koi nahi,

Humsafar to mera ab bhi hai wohi,
Lekin uske sahare me ab wo baat nahi.



amazing piece of work.. great job dhadkan.. keep posting Usual Smile
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Aryaan
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«Reply #11 on: April 06, 2005, 08:46:11 AM »
Quote from: "dhadkan"
Chalte chalte ajj aa gaye hum wahi,
Jis raah par chale the banke humsfar hum kabhi,

Nazariya badla par nazaare hai wahi,
Iss raah ke kaante hamare liye jannat thi kabhi,

Milke dekhe the jo sapne ab hi hai wahi,
Lekin sapnonko sajaane wala ab koi nahi,

Humsafar to mera ab bhi hai wohi,
Lekin uske sahare me ab wo baat nahi.

Bohat khoob Dhadkan......
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